#5 - AsYa/KaBhi FF : My Mental Love ! PART 20 - PART 23 ! Go #6 ! - Page 83

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Posted: 10 years ago
thanks for surprice updt bano
plz updt soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
wonderfull n fabulous...
luv it...
asad n zoya are so cute...
zoya found out everyhting about her past...
really hope zoya with the help of asad will teach haseena n akram a lesson they will remember...
mindblowing...
beautifully written...
naybe the guy is one of zoya relation r friend...
eagerly waiting for the next part...
thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update
I loved the saviour and angel bon ding

Who was the man
Don't tell me that he is akram
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
gosh bano!!! you write so well it was so heart warming update🤗
so complicated things also your express in simple words..
glad zoya acted so maturely ...im in love wit blushing asad❤️..hope dat stranger is not akram...surprise me with an update soon😆 tc🤗

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Posted: 10 years ago
zoya know the truth that asad is not the father of the baby
at first she felt guilty but then she realised that she's not at fault
she also felt proud of the khan family
aww..she was watching asad sleeping
now who is this stranger..because of him zoya fell into water but her savior saved her in time
loved how zoya teased asad about the woman's clothes thing
awesome update..love it
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update
So zoya learns the truth of her life
She has matured quietly
And she realiEs the people around her knows her truth and love her just the same
They didn't banish her ordisaarove of her
And best of all was her saviour he was definitely deserve his name
Love the bedroom scene and them them just sleeping in each other arms
So who is the new stranger is it Akram
Oh she almost drown but savour is there
Oh he bought her clothes
Love her blushing seeing him bare chested
Continue soon see the stranger is who
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Posted: 10 years ago
hey... actully its a first time i m commenting on ur story... ur all stories r jst jst fablous... im all of 3 'mental love' is my fav. here i m loving asad's character nd every thing about this story is special... it tell us every one have right to loved and cared... thankx fr this awesome story. update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
What an update sis. Amazing, awesome, beautiful, mindblowing and wonderful. The FB scene was beautiful. So my princess now remembered everything. She realized that she has a family who loves her so much. And try to concentrate on her future. Aww zoya hugged asad. Thats so sweet. Love this scene. Asya convo was so beautiful. Just love each and every asya moments. Now i just waiting for their confession and then zoya's revenge. Who is this stranger? Is he a well wisher of zoya or something else. Vry curious. Hope u cleared it in next part. Cant wait for next part. Update soon. Loved this part. ❤️ Raj
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update
Zoya remembered everything & felt disgusted. She then thought abt asad & realised that he knew everything & always supported him. She felt love & care from everyone in his family which became her family now. Asad told Her that he wants her to punish akram & haseena. Both slept peacefully in each other arms. The stranger scene was little surprising. Maybe some well wisher or zoya friend. Asad saved zoya & then they went for purchasing cloths. Both enjoyed their time together & finally got a call from worried dilshad. Both become normal again. Waiting for next update soon. Thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
read two parts together
awsome updates👍🏼
loved them❤️
it was light-hearted with fun moments in the first one😃whille second one was a little scary as zoya fell into the lake nd was drowning😲
loved nazma's nautanki😆
loved sana,the chudail😆
angel nd saviour are back😳
loved all the asya parts😳
who is this new person??😲
continue soon
nd thnx 4r pm
Edited by scarletmalik - 10 years ago

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