#5 - AsYa/KaBhi FF : My Mental Love ! PART 20 - PART 23 ! Go #6 ! - Page 82

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: PrettYSmile

Whatever u r doing there.. leave dat n come to india n plllzzz start writting serials. ..u ll be a tough competetion to big writters like ekta kapoor, gul khan, palki malhotra.. n many more.. n m not kidding[/B]m damn serious.. .m sure many ppl will agree with me[B]

Seriously, kaha se laati ho yaar ese nayyab ideas..
I really want to know ur real age.. coz i dont belive u r a teenager.. ur work doesnot seems of dat.. .

About the update, kya bolu.. kuch hai hi nahi.. from the start to end.. .SPEECHLESS. ..dont have words to explain..
Right from the starting to till here, the way u have moulded the characters, specially zoya, its soo mature u know.. .
How beautifully u have shaped the storyline.. .
I was always a fan of ur stories. ..but today it increased another level.. ..commendable. ...

I suggest u plz think about writting seriously.. .
I always wanted to c ur previous story(stalker leading) in a show played by our amazing kabhi obviously.. .
But today.. .i cant express what m feeling..

Soo, update toh, each n evry bit was great.. specialky zoya s fkashback, knowing about her pregnency was commendeble..

Main baat toh bhool gayi tere chakkar me.. .arey wah, itni jaldi update kar dia.. ..doble surprize..

N ye new entry, first i thought ayyan.. then i think koi zoya wel wisher, dost ya relative ho.. ..pata nahi.. .lets c..

Sorry if i foret something,...i ll pm u.. ..

Amazing. ..


I am totally agreeing with u dear

Bano u are a brilliant writer👏
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aseelashah



I am totally agreeing with u dear

Bano u are a brilliant writer👏



Yeahh na. .thanks dear.. .yes, she is brilliant. .
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Posted: 10 years ago
Again awesome updt Bano👏👏
D way Asad was relaxing in d grass
so Zoya got 2 know Asad was not baby's father😲
she felt dirty & guilty poor baby 😭
She got scared thinking if Khan's will hate her knowing this but than she realized than Khan's knew & loved her despite d truth she felt relieved & her respect & love 4 them increased😃
D scene when she was hugging him & saw their reflection on d mirror was beautiful scene👍🏼
Right in front of her, she saw her own reflexion in Asad's arms and then she knew that she could look at herself in the mirror without any guilt.
D song was so meaningful here loved d song selection deary😃
Finally Zoya is back 2 her original self😉
awe how she was admiring sleeping Asad
she went 2 get water & ek anjan admi recognized & chased her😕
Zoya got scared thank god Asad came on time 2 save her🤗
It was so surprising that d older Zoya would have been scared but here she was back 2 her jovial self immediately after getting conscious😆😊
Zoya changed into Asad's shirt & he got shirtless☺️❤️
Asad enjoyed her expressions when she was explaining her story😆
Zoya teased Asad 4 his lack of experience of buying girl's cloths😉
but Asad bought pink salwar suit he has classic taste😎
after enjoying their alone time they picked a worried Dillu & family from d park😆
D man is following them kaun hai yeh banda😕😡
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: SBanoMalik

Thank you so much Sweetheart !! 🤗 I'm glad you liked it !! ❤️
Its ok meri Sweetheart der aayi lekin durust aayi ! 🤗 😆
Zoya is quite of a possessive woman ! 😉 😆
Haan ! And since at that moment everybody were excited about the picnic, i thought to give at least this time ! 😉
Yeah here Najam brought the fun element ! 😆
Asad and Sana really behave like kindergarten babies so for me its only too fun to write about them ! 🤣
Well u'll know in the coming chapter, how did suddebly they did called each other Savior qnd Angel ! ❤️
Yeah and because she wanted to talk to him about something important and u'll know in this chapter ! 😉
Love u Sweetheart !! 🤗 mwah !! ❤️



Meri deri ke liye maaf kiya so thanku Jaana🤗
Han i loved Asad-naj-Sana's comedy😆
han maine pad liya😲
Love u more❤️🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update!!!
Glad that all is well between AsYa...

Who is the new guy?

I hope he not a bad guy...

Continue soon and thanks for the PM...




- Sushma
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Posted: 10 years ago
awsm update
luvd it
thanx for the pm
t.c
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Posted: 10 years ago
love it...
asya convo was damn good...
hope shameless zoya is not going anywhere and we will enjoy some moment in future...
pm me when u update...
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Posted: 10 years ago
love it...
asya convo was damn good...
hope the shameless is not going any where nd we will enjoy some ahemm ahemmm moment in future...
pm me when u update plzzz
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Posted: 10 years ago
Appy! Curious Update,,,,,,,
But Loved It TO The Heart
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oye hoy bano yaar
What an emotional but amazing update
Just awesome
Perfectly done
The zoya remembered those dark memories
Felt really pity for her I was about to cry for her specially for those who faces these kind of violence in their real life .
The scene where zoya asked asad was the child his was adorably written yaar
Thumbs up👍🏼
N I think this unknown person is not a bad one maybe he will help zoya in her fight for justice
Lets hop so

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