#5 - AsYa/KaBhi FF : My Mental Love ! PART 20 - PART 23 ! Go #6 !

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 10 years ago

#791

well written update...👍🏼

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Abi

@-ABI-

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#792

unres

well I hope the stranger isn't Akram
about update its simply Awsome Zoya has come far across to maturity

well I love it.
and Choti try to update Hidden Love also😉

Edited by -ABI- - 10 years ago

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ankita

@ankie95

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#793

enjoyed this chapter very much
zoya got to know everything
and ermmm and how "those" things work too *embarrassed*
now who is this new guy????
i hope he is not negative
and shirtless asad *blush*
and plz update hidden love soon *puppy face*

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sj_qh_kabhi

@sj_qh_kabhi

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#794

See i knew it wud be exciting..!! ;)
It was fun nd cute nd amazing..!!
Sooo sweet dey r yr..!!
I just love how he cares for her..!!
Nd zoya has become even more cuter..!!
lovd d update.. issi tarah jldi jldi update krna..;) :P
Thank u..:* :*

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ZoyaAsadKhan

@ZoyaAsadKhan

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#795

awesome update :)
too gud loved it
cheesy ?????? NOT EVEN A BIT
u r just wonderful , just update soon :) plzzz :) :)

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zoyaah

@zoyaah

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#796

awesome update

you are a good writter

continue soon

waitingb to know ho is this man

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Amulya

@Amulya9

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#797

oh my goodness...u updated..
I loved it a lot..
ye meri favorite chap hoga ab...
from d first scene 2 last scene... I admired ur writing skills n ur maturity ..how d way u handled things...
take a bow...Bano
I was really shocked when Zoya questioned him abt baby..
flashback is amazing...
I respect asad a lot.. he's really a sweetheart.. I'm jealous of Zoe now 😆
my Zoe baby changed a lot n finally understood she shouldn't cry thinking abt pastl n khan family love matters her d most ..
love d way they both slept...
now who's that man
I know Zoe looks so adorable in asad shirt.. 😳
loved their shopping scene...
I'm madly in love with this story of urs...n u know that. 😳
muaahhh fr this fantastic chap..
sry fr d delay in unressing..
update soon

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Amulya

@Amulya9

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#798

Bano...love u love u love u...sooo much...
kya mast update hai yaar...
ur really an amazing writer... ur just killing me with ur mind blowing updates
tight Huggies n kisses 2 u
kal unres karoongi

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#799

Bano 🤗

Jisne bhi kaha hai bada khoob hi kaha hai ki DIL KO DIL KI RAH HOTI HAI ❤️

See I had been expecting for an update and you updated 🤗 What a sweet little surprise..

I apologize for not commenting before.. but I have valid reasons haan! 😆

Work-Work-Work and upar se my poor litter fingers.. all battered cause of my new obsession > GUITAR 🤣 didnt give me much time even for sleep.. 😔

I hope you forgive me for the short coming.. and even if you don't 😡 I'll eat you up buss

🤣

Back to update..

this was truly beautifully written I mean.. you are so young.. so very young and how matured you are.. beyond your age and it brought tears to my eyes reading the update ❤️

The most complicated theme that even I would fear to prod into.. you bravely attempted to write and expressed it such innocent words.. ❤️

You take my heart buss ❤️

Frankly I hadn't expected this to come at this point of the story.. but it left me boggled.. I mean I have no words to describe how beautifully you have written the whole part..

Especially the place where Zoya comes to know the truth and confronts Asad.. such a complicated scene you wrote in so simply ❤️

I feel envious of you now 😆 NO I REALLY DO.. how the hell are you so matured beyond your age haan? 😆 I mean when I was sixteen all I did was to look at my maths exercise book and draw stick figure cartoons and watch Tom and Jerry and other cartoons 🤣

You strummed the emotional strings of my dear heart sweetheart! ❤️ Lovely and emotional read.. and I really REALLY REALLY hope that kids of your age learn something called as COMPASSION from you 🤗

God Bless you sweetie 🤗

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aYASHIKA

@aYASHIKA

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#800

Awesome update...
Awww...my zoya knows everything ..
Glad that she behaved so maturely..
Loved their hug...its so hard for asad to control..
Finally our angel and savior is back..
No awkwardness between them...
That stranger must be akram...
Awww..asad embarrased and blushing zoya...so cute..
Loved how they tease eachother. .
Lovely update..
Update soon...

P.S. I will unres all my comments soon