#5 - AsYa/KaBhi FF : My Mental Love ! PART 20 - PART 23 ! Go #6 !

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#51

very well written update...👍🏼

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@--Bubble007--

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Posted: 10 years ago

#52

This was a pretty sad update !!

she lost the Baby

and its soo upsetting ,, I really feel bad for Zoya !!

Thank God she has got a family finally to help her out 😒

Asad is taking care of her ❤️

update soon and a happy one if possible !!

and yup this update was really beautifully written !!

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#53

heelo heelo hello

this update made me feel so saad 😭

Zoya falling so weak.. and the heart wrecking pain she has to suffer..

And Asad's pain

But when Asad is there.. There's nothing to fear

p.s. Some more care scenes please

Update sooner now

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anopama

@anopama

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Posted: 10 years ago

#54

Congrats on new thread

Such a heartbreaking chapter

Zoya is so broken her baby is gone

No one can console her all r in pain seeing her like that

Her lashing out at asad was understandable

U r my saviour y didn't u save my baby I want my baby

He allowed her to cry it out and he stopped anyone from stopping her

Let her get it out of her system

No one could hav gotten her in a good mood

She just lost a baby people come on

Glad asad send all home and let her have her space

But he was there to hold her when she allowed him and comfort her and be there for her

He was the only one who can get her to get over her grief and take care of herself

Hope they grow closer with this lost

Continue soon

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Amin21Khpulwak

@Amin21Khpulwak

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Posted: 10 years ago

#55

wow bano yaar what an update

it was so 😭

if you remember once I asked you something like zoya to lose the baby but I really felt bad here .

maybe it was for zoya or for the baby itself but in any way the credit all goes to you yaar beautifully written 👏

just hop to see her have baby in last of this ff .

loved it 😉

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Preeti sharma

@kanchan23

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Posted: 10 years ago

#56

hey...you are mindblowing writer...you managed to make us cry😭

zoya is ok but still weak...but baby is no more...😭

danial is become their family member...

i don't know how to explain in words...what i felt for zoya...
when she learn that her baby is no more...that scene was...😭😭

zoya behaviour towards asad...was expected...he is her savior...so she thought that he also can save her child...

asad is also feeling sad...

zoya is still in shock...she is not responding to anyone...

lovely family...they all try to cheer her up...but failed to grap her attention...😊

asad also try to grap her attention...atleast she ate her food and medicine...

you described the emotion of zoya very well👏

you said in your note that this will bring new turn in asya life...

i am waiting for it...😊

thank you so much for sharing this update with us and for pm me...🤗

please continue soon...

p.s-congratulation for your new thread...you deserve it🥳👏

Edited by kanchan23 - 10 years ago

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123465

@123465

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Posted: 10 years ago

#57

Congrats on new thread!!!

This chapter was really awesome!!!

And emotional too 😭...

Continue soon...

- Sushma

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Miss-Appy

@Miss-Appy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: ...adin...
res
unrs
finally bitter truth is out
i know thi was going to be painful but i think i was the only one who didn't want that baby ..
i like this emotional chapter ...
everyone is really supportive in her case ...
waiting for next chapter

The lost of an innocent soul is always painful ! 😭
But dont worry Nida, u were not the only who didnt wanted that baby, there were many other readers requesting to me that Zoya should not give birth to Akram's baby 😕
I'm glad you liked it ! 🤗 thanks ! ❤️

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Miss-Appy

@Miss-Appy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: cutie15
Res..:D

unRes...!!
Oh god dat was hell emotnl..!!
U wrote exceptionally well yr..!!
I cud feel her pain..!!
Hope she gets ovr dis soon..:(
ty..:*

Thank you so much cutie ! I'm glad you liked it ! 😳