#5 - AsYa/KaBhi FF : My Mental Love ! PART 20 - PART 23 ! Go #6 ! - Page 8

Originally posted by: p_s05

Congratulations on the 5th thread! Welldeserved!

Thanks so much Prashni !! 🤗 awww u reminded me of my golden AsYa !! ❤️

Originally posted by: SBanoMalik

i know ! The update was super depressing ! 🥺

I had tried to make it a little obvious that Zoya would blame Asad for the baby's loss because he was ger 'Savior' which means that he was supposed to save the baby but nithing was in his hands ! 😭

It had to happen because this will only make Zoya recover faster and then u'll start getting the romance u guys were asking me for ! 😉

Awww Thank you so so so so much !!! 🤗

Awww beautiful edit Niya ! ❤️ and thats exactly the way i imagined them to be ! ❤️

Originally posted by: p_s05

Reserved for Chapter 20!

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Unreserved!

An agonizing chapter.

The miscarriage was expected. I was a little afraid at the beginning of the chapter, I thought
amongst the grief, she may misunderstand and blame Asad for it. Despite the pain loved
the scene where she grabs his collar and repeatedly hits against his chest [Hopeless
romantic, hope that doesn't make me a sadist].

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The entire family, Daniel and Sana were amazingly
supportive.

Asad with her at the end was amazingly beautiful.

<font color="#6633ff">"When Asad started feeding her, she wasn't eating but when she looked up at him and he gave her an encouraging smile, she ate but with tears rolling down her cheeks. When Asad gave her painkillers, she silently swallowed them before </font><font color="#ff0000">resting on his chest once again and crying herself to sleep while Asad caressed her hair soothingly</font><font color="#6633ff">. Her plight was heartbreaking to him but he knew that he wasn't supposed to be breaking down, he needed to be strong for her."</font>

<font color="#ff0000">@Red:</font><font size="2">Picture perfect!</font>

<font size="2">Do you know you are doing an amazing job with this FF?</font>

<font size="2">Well you are!</font>

<font size="2">Your writing reallyoverwhelmsand amazes me - Keep up the fantastic work!</font>

P.S Just realized I used the word #Amazingly too many times in this comment. 😳

Yeah quite depressing ! *sheepish look*

Yeah i had tried to put forward the fact that her Savior couldnt save the baby because it wasnt in his hands and that she would blame him because he was 'supposed to' because he was her Savior ! 🥺
Hahaha dont worry u r not a sadist because when she grabs his collar and started hutting him was one of my fav scene when i wrote it ! ❤️ (and if that makes me a sadist, well u r not the only one out here ! 😆)

I loved writing the last 2 paragraphs !!! 🥺 ❤️

Awww. Really ?! 😃 i'm very glad to know that !!! ❤️

Thank you so much Prashni !!! That really means a lot to me !! 😳

Hahaha its ok ! It was an 'amazing' comment ! 😆 mwah !! 🤗 ❤️

Originally posted by: Azraa01

Congrats on the new thread Bano..
Loved the update.. Couldn't stop crying. My dad thought I was losing the plot as I'm staring at the screen and crying..

Thank you so much Azraa !! 🤗 it means a lot to me !! 😳
Hahaha u r too cute !! 😆 and i'm sorry for making u cry ! 🤗

Originally posted by: SUCHARITA2014

bano really great updt

its really sad updt

plz updt soon

thanks Sucharita ! 😳

Originally posted by: jazsidhu

Congrats on the new thread...
very heart touching...
N very emotional...
felt bad fr zoya...
asad is always with zoya n will help her...
eagerly waiting fr the next part...
thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...

Thank you so much Jaz !! 😳

Originally posted by: captjs

No.. that's so sad... 💔 nono no...

It had to happen ! 🥺

u know what i am indicating at 😎

Originally posted by: urvisaini

It was a very sad and depressing update

But I guess eventually it will make zoe stronger.as what doesn t kills you makes you stronger!

So eventually I would get to see a stronger Zoya fighting for her own rights with the cute Khan family as the strength.

I could understand Asad's plight.

He could not break doen in front of his family.

Thank you for keeping it short cause as such it Was quite depressing

Thanks for the pm

Update soon

Yeah i know ! I myself started feeling depressed so thought of stopping it there ! 😆
Exactly ! It will make her stronger and she'll be on the way to get absolutely fine ! 😳 eventually she'll also face Haseena and Akram and punish them for whatever they did to her ! 👏
He could not break down because he was supposed to be the composed one who would console them ! 😭
Haha yeah i guessed that i did right by stopping there ! 😆
Thank you so much for such a lovely comment !! 🤗 it really means a lot to me ! 😳