#5 - AsYa/KaBhi FF : My Mental Love ! PART 20 - PART 23 ! Go #6 !

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radadolcevida

@radadolcevida

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

beautiful and emotional update 😭

how it 's hard to loose baby for any parent , specially a mother, you write it with decency

and congrats for the new thread, please update soon, can't wait for the next part 😃

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aseela sha

@aseelashah

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#32

So emotional & sad update

I love it

It made me tear up😭

Thanks for pm

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hosanna..

@hosanna..

Stunner

Posted: 10 years ago

#33

That was really sad :( Awesome update as always!

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Nitya Suresh

@TheAutumnFizz

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

Congratulations for the new thread..
I was so sad reading that the baby didn't survive... ;(
I just want to cry...
you are an amazing writer really.. Beautiful part.. Very well written.. Looking forward to the next ones... :)

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ak020203

@ak020203

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Posted: 10 years ago

#35

Very emotional update. . Beautifully written. .

Felt so sorry for Zoya. .

Thanks for updating

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jaanu013

@jaanu013

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#36

very emotional update

emotions of Zoya were perfectly written

danial dilshad and najma cheering her

atlast asad made her eat

thanks for the update

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scarletmalik

@scarletmalik

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Posted: 10 years ago

#37

emotional update😭

beautifully written😊

loved it❤️

felt so sorry for zoya😭

loved how dilshad,nazma and daniel were trying to cheer up zoya

continue soon

nd thnx 4r pm

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princess101

@princess101

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#38

Congrats on the new thread

amazing update lovely

thanx 4 the pm

update soon

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nilusoni

@nilusoni

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Posted: 10 years ago

#39

congrats for new thread

awesome and emotional update😭

zoya's condition is too weak but gr8 part

thanx for pm

plz pm me for next part

continue soon

Edited by nilusoni - 10 years ago

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#40

Hi...Bano..thanx for the P.M...well it was a emotional and a turmoil full of update...well what can we say about the loss of the baby and only those mothers who goes through this pain know its grief...you potrayed Zoya's emotions in a very perfect manner...and asad's turmoil and helpnessness is also painful .i really liked the part where zoya says that Asad in not her SAVIOUR...because he didn't saved her baby...what a scene... : ) can imagine Asad's plight at that...continue soon..