WHEN HIS ACTIONS COMPLETE MY THOUGHTS.

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Waqt Zaya

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Paune char baje ^-^
I toh woke up at 7 :(

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chicksoup

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: sageflower7

OMG... This was so beautiful...
The scene was so loaded with emotions and inner thoughts, little looks and eye locks. It was such an experience to remember each part of the scene and read in words what was going on underneath in Sanam.

How, despite after having that AWFUL exchange of hurtful words, both of them went back and wore the very clothes that they had just flung in anger, a rejection of their gifts to each other. It was as though, after a moment of calm, they realized that they both overreacted abominably and didn't mean what they said.
As a gesture of truce, Sanam wears the beautiful dress he gave her, and he wore the tux he had just flung. I'm sorry, things got out of hand back there. I didn't mean those horrible things I said.
Aahil could've come anyway, wore one of his gorgeous sherwanis (which would have looked more fitting, considering what everyone else was wearing), and just stood there in a corner hans crossed, non committal.
But he didn't. He came, with a small concilliatory look, wearing the tux she gave him, WITH gifts for his Saali, apologizes so affectionately for being late, AND blesses her in such a brotherly manner. All genuine and honest. He stands by her awkwardly, then Khazi sahab moved to start and he stood with the other men.

I don't think he purposely ignored her attempt to thank him, he just didn't see it. Well, he walked in looking straight at her didn't he?

This was such a lovely read, soup (if I may?) ...thank you!😳

Oh, wow! I love your posts ...Thank U for this lovely comment...Yes..Soup...😆 It will feel less funny as time passes.😆

Hmmm...I felt I had to write after the last scene where she mouths 'shu'...but he has moved out of the frame. And then came the spoilers with the ambulance scene...wondered if Sanam would be able to tell him...😳

Aahil..I am not saying he is cross with her...he is still upset over Rehaan...but they both know they should not have...

I remember that towel scene...where he threw that knowing Sanam was looking at him...he is reading her mind...he knows she is very straightforwad...does not hide her interactions with Rehaan...That definitely upsets him...so something has to happen...waiting to see how this would progress...

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chicksoup

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty
Paune char baje ^-^
I toh woke up at 7 :(

4:30.🥱

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GitaIyer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Wow Sanam's POV. Thanks a lot for this Soup. I'm sure most of the viewers would've sympathised with Ahil and blamed Sanam, after all Sanam had the last word and the meaner words too. You have beautifully penned down the inner turmoil that Sanam goes through.

The climb had been exhilarating, the fall was that much more devastating!

👏. Am sure the climb back would be that much more romantic.

The argument kinda spiralled out of control and both didn't realize what they were saying. Ahil, stopped himself, while Sanam didn't.

BOth didn't mean what they said, one driven by jealousy the other by hurt - they ended up hurting themselves as much as they hurt the other party.

So, moral of the story is ---

A jealous Ahil and a Hurt/angry Sanam are recipe for disasters.

If the fight was bitter, its aftermath was sweet.

These two are like amla, sour to begin with but sweet later on...

Edited by GitaIyer - 11 years ago

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NainaAlex

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

That was beautiful Soup... Sanam's POV

Sanam was angry and hurt when she said it and what hurt her more was Aahil meekly saying mujhe pata hai and moving away... that must have broken her...

Sanam tried to thank him but didn't get a chance and now we now whats coming up ...

seeing Aahil fighting for his life these very words will come haunting back to Sanam 😒
and it will be Sanam's dua and love that will bring Aahil back.. 😊

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Chetna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: neenabinu
That was beautiful Soup... Sanam's POV

Sanam was angry and hurt when she said it and what hurt her more was Aahil meekly saying mujhe pata hai and moving away... that must have broken her...

Sanam tried to thank him but didn't get a chance and now we now whats coming up ...

seeing Aahil fighting for his life these very words will come haunting back to Sanam 😒
and it will be Sanam's dua and love that will bring Aahil back.. 😊

agree with u neena😳

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vm17

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Here I am standing, getting my sister ready for her nikah. I can sense her excitement. I should be too, considering this is the moment I have cherished all my life. Her wedding has always been more important to me than my own. We have imagined and dreamed and giggled about this for so long...I used to love teasing her to see her getting all flushed...her shyness and eagerness used to charm me...by all rights, I should be floating along side her...but sadly, I am weighed down.

Only two people have mattered to me all my life and I thought it'd always stay the same. Apparently, that has changed ...In a big way...

I cannot explain the enormous sadness in my heart. All through badi ammi's illness, I had found the strength from somewhere. Was it the unspoken word of protection he seemed to envelop me with? He has never promised me anything...but the fact is, I seem to turn to him in dire situations. And he has obliged...ALWAYS. ...

So today, when he broke that trust in no uncertain words, I was shattered,...

And this had to happen NOW...just after he had emphatically defended me in front of his whole family. And so soon after all those beautiful gifts he had showered on me...when I was beginning to revel in what was beginning to look like a marriage in its true sense.

Really, the past few days have been so different. He had stopped taunting me on the falsehood our relationship was based on...I must have even dared to hope. No wonder I felt like he led me on to a precipice and let me fall. The climb had been exhilarating, the fall was that much more devastating!

It simply felt like...he was showing me my place...

What was my crime? How could he point fingers at me every time I talked to a man! Izzat!!!! He was calling me a wayward woman! -a woman with loose morals! Did he even know how repulsive that sounded to me...It squeezed out all the respect I had for him...how could someone be so narrow minded! Did he take me for one of those loose women he takes to the haystack..and god knows where else! Is that all he knows about women! Does he not know any other kind?

It hurt me deeply...that one moment of accusation...and I lashed out very harsh.

Mujhe aazadi chahiye - I meant those words, yet I did not mean that...I wanted this farce to end...I wanted something solid. I was getting suffocated , being just a temporary someone in his life... couldn't we ever be a normal couple, respecting and loving each other?

I believe in who I am. I know my worth, even though he cannot stand me. Can he not respect me for the person I am? Why dig for reasons to pour dirt over my dignity? His words...His accusations...With each passing day, my defences against him are growing weaker. Therefore the pain becomes more and more unbearable...HOPE. ..why do I continue to hope?

One fleeting moment when I screamed I wanted a release from this trap of a relationship...where he could fling me up and around like a rag doll to satisfy his whims and fancies...I saw something in his eyes. He hurt too...was it the misfortune of being dragged into this with me, or something else? He has played his part well...adapted to me in his life. He must be waiting for the day he can be rid of me for good! If so, why does he take the extra effort to make me comfortable? Why does he turn green whenever I speak to Rehaan? (Rehaan! Of all the people! )

I WISH WE COULD TALK!

Haya jingled her bangles...pointed towards the clock. It was time. My sister was all eager to belong to the man who loved her. I can only wish her happiness...all the joy written in my share too.

I seated her at the hall. I tried to be cheerful, despite the aching despair in my heart. Raahat mentioned waiting for Aahil. I tried to cover up for his absence...

... I need not have...

He stood at the doorway - a true prince charming!

Looking handsome as ever...holding gifts for my sister...

...A thought I could not complete. ..how had he known what was on my mind!

How did this happen to two people? How can he insult me one minute and make me feel exulted by his presence, the very next minute?

...how did he know what I had wanted for my sister...

How did he just know what had to be done!

Who in the world can explain this to me ever!

Oh! The joy that I knew when I saw him!

I have no words to describe it.

He walked in. ..apologised for the delay, blessed my sister. ..and MADE MY DAY PERFECT! !!

He came and stood next to me. ..my heart knew no bounds of joy...

I turned to thank him...but he moved on...

And now I am filled with this restlessness. ..I am waiting for the moment I can be alone with him.

I want him to know...

...that NO ONE CAN EVER DO WHAT HE HAS DONE FOR ME!

[/QUOTEWow Soup❤️What a post!Sanam And Ahil were just being a married couple in a normal sense.Sanam was happy that Ahil defended her in front of ammi.She knows he never contradicts his mom and she was grateful and expressed it.She talked to Rehan and all hell broke loose.If Ahil had bothered to listen he would have known that she was simply asking for an advance.The green monster raised ots ugly head and Ahil accused her.Naturaly Sanam was angry.She can't tolerate this and gave him back in true Asad style.Asad when angry hurt everybody be it zoya or his mom.Sanam is like him.So she spoke harsh words.She feels bad that when she was thinking he cares for her he behaves like this.He is like a pendulam swingign from one extreme to another.She is confused.She burst like this bcoz he cast aspersions on her character.they threw the clothes they ahd bought for each other and when they cooled down wore the very same dresses they had thrown.

Sanam like a typical wife made excuses for her hubby's absence and lo behold he was there wearing the tux he had chosen for him.He apologised to haya,blessed her and Sanam was on cloud nine.

I hope Dilshad is not hurt.I like Shalini and would like to see her.

Tanveer will definitely do something to poison Ahil's mind as she knows he is slipping and has started to think independently.Earlier he blindly agreed with her.Now he is started to speak in favour of Sanam .that is a khatre ki ghanti for every MIL when son starts siding with wife.

I think SAhil willmake up bcoz after speaking both were regretting.

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Anisa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: chicksoup

Oh, wow! I love your posts ...Thank U for this lovely comment...Yes..Soup...😆 It will feel less funny as time passes.😆

Hmmm...I felt I had to write after the last scene where she mouths 'shu'...but he has moved out of the frame. And then came the spoilers with the ambulance scene...wondered if Sanam would be able to tell him...😳
I have a sneaky feeling she will all-out love him after this. His continuous hesitancy to correct her misconception of his hate, is what worries me.

Consider this: Dilshaad is awake, She knew Tanveer was behind this accident. She will worry that Sanam is in grave danger. That Baba premonition that Sanam will learn of the truth has yet to happen...

Aahil..I am not saying he is cross with her...he is still upset over Rehaan...but they both know they should not have...
Aahil is being the older, wiser person; or rather trying to become one.
I love his concilliatory moves: cake, dresses, protect from his Ammi, showing up for sister's wedding in full ceremony.

I can totally see that playground scene from that farmhouse...
I remember that towel scene...where he threw that knowing Sanam was looking at him...he is reading her mind...he knows she is very straightforwad...does not hide her interactions with Rehaan...That definitely upsets him...so something has to happen...waiting to see how this would progress...

Thank U again...

How do I address U?😳