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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG... This was so beautiful...
The scene was so loaded with emotions and inner thoughts, little looks and eye locks. It was such an experience to remember each part of the scene and read in words what was going on underneath in Sanam.

How, despite after having that AWFUL exchange of hurtful words, both of them went back and wore the very clothes that they had just flung in anger, a rejection of their gifts to each other. It was as though, after a moment of calm, they realized that they both overreacted abominably and didn't mean what they said.
As a gesture of truce, Sanam wears the beautiful dress he gave her, and he wore the tux he had just flung. I'm sorry, things got out of hand back there. I didn't mean those horrible things I said.
Aahil could've come anyway, wore one of his gorgeous sherwanis (which would have looked more fitting, considering what everyone else was wearing), and just stood there in a corner hans crossed, non committal.
But he didn't. He came, with a small concilliatory look, wearing the tux she gave him, WITH gifts for his Saali, apologizes so affectionately for being late, AND blesses her in such a brotherly manner. All genuine and honest. He stands by her awkwardly, then Khazi sahab moved to start and he stood with the other men.

I don't think he purposely ignored her attempt to thank him, he just didn't see it. Well, he walked in looking straight at her didn't he?

This was such a lovely read, soup (if I may?) ...thank you!😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank U.😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pagalpinky

Sounds exactly what I thought sanam would be thinking at that time
Great job


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😳 Thank U...Sanam is so very interesting to read...as must be to Aahil!😉😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Prags_Sociopath

Oh you Soup! Beautiful, beautiful, just BEAUTIFUL <33 This was just gorgeous stuff! How. HOW indeed do you write this shiz!
This is simply just so heartfelt and genuine. I can't even begin to describe, it was like I am watching Sanam and scrutinising her "mind palace" 😆

How beautifully you have explained all that she was going through in that span of time.

She was hurt. Beyond hurt at his accusations and continous rubbing off. It broke her from within. I felt like this was the time she was LITERALLY hurt. And it was most painful off all the times.

Because this relation, his "unexpected actions" towards her, has ignited a thin line of hope in her that this marriage could work. She has always expected from him, she has always looked up to him, no matter what she felt or denied, she expects something from her. And that she has also admitted this time. She ADMITTED. Unlike HIM. This time it broke her the most because she has actually started feeling "happy' with him, on his those small things. And when he said those words, it shattered her through within. She doubted on herself why she expected these from him.

And then, when he came to the wedding with gifts. She was left dumbfounded. She NEVER ever have expected such sorta gesture from him specially after the fight they just had. Again she was confused, coz when she HAD expected something it went awry, and now when she din't expect he turns up at that moment. Making her even more confused of his behaviour, or did he really mean those words or not?
I guess he likes to keep her this way, raising her hopes, shattering them in a whim and then doing the unexpected again!😆
She felt like she just won something. Her eyes were smiling, though she was stifling her smiles, she was touched by his behaviour and was also feeling guilty for what she had done so wanted to thank him but couldn't manage, he din't allow.

The most highlighted point in this scenario for me was the fact they actually acknowledged that they HAD hurt each other this time. They have hurt each other before way too many times, but were oblivious of the fact or may be too blinded by their egos. This time, when he said about Izzat, he KNEW he hurt her, and when she said that ghutan thing she KNEW he hurt him. They are even here, AGAIN! They fight, hurt each other, take digs at each other, but NEVER they allow other one to score over them. They stand EQUAL at every damn scenario. This is indeed a major step in their relationship.


Wow, Prags!

Thank U for such an elaborate comment!🤗

Sanam is such an interesting character from Aahil's pOV, I bet!


Her innocence...straightforwardness...excites him...and his interpretations of some of them disappoint him...and Aahil will not take that disappointment silently...he will always demand!😆 Afterall, That junoon troubles him the most! Or so he thinks!😉

@Blue: 😡 And he says she plays MINDGAMES!!!😲 😆

" REd: So true, as U highlighted!👏 This was the perfect setting for a turning point...when th epot has boiled over...what next! Simply beautiful!

Thanks again...🤗



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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...Tanu...

The way you expressed Sanam's POV is so apt!

Its beautiful.


Thank U...😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Itne saare res mere ek page mein!😕
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: Annie_AsYa

A beautiful post 👏

Bravo!!!!
Lovely... You mentioned everything I wanted Sanam to feel in that moment ..
Joy, Sadness, Suffocated, and everything beyond that
Great Work .. KEEP IT UP 👍🏼


Thank U, Annie!😳 So glad I could make U read what U felt!😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sahil333

Lovely post 👏. I'm so glad that you've penned down Sanam's POV. Incredible work here. Reading it was a joy for me. The moment they looked at each other, that's the acknowledgment that they went a tat too far. Aahil's face was so reassuring to tell her that it will be fine and Sanam had understood that. And him seeing her face, it told him that too. I was so proud of that moment 😊 . Can't say anything more, than what you have said. Keep up the good work 😉 .


Awww...Thank U...🤗

Aahil...😳...Master of mindgames...He knows those looks she has been giving him...probably, That aspect of her feelings, he can read better than her...so it hurtts him when she gets back to square one- Rehaan.😉😆 That is the one bit he cannot fit in...one thing for sure, he acknowledged hs feelings first...knws what is happening with him...he will make sure Sanam confesses first!😉😆
That look he gave- not sure if that meant he had buried everything...but he did stand next to her...😳...that definitely means he has something in mind!😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

MAMAMAMAMA!! 🤗

Read Inbox and let me know!
Also WA okay? ^_^
🤗




🤗 Sooonnn...😊 What time did U write this!😲
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sylvia99

You have beautifully described Sanam's thought. They hurt each other and they knew it. it was a touching scene.


Thank U, Sylvia.😳
Edited by chicksoup - 11 years ago

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