FF:IT TAKES TWO TO A TANGO *ASYA Start see index*updated - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Congrats for new thread :-) waiting for Asya to start 😊
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please do play the song in the background it will help you know the mood of the chapter
link to song

please do see the cartoon strips asad is hum ans zoya is tum
link to hum tum cartoon strips

IT is one month after the campfire and ASYA AND KASZ are on a one year break(to know thre reason plesase read thread one chapter 8,to see asads house see chapter 5)
link to thread one

START
As you know zoya and jasz have opened their female helpline/detective agency.Their present client was Keren she and a guy had dated for about 6 months he said that marriage was a very big step mand he wanted to be sure before that and he dint want any hurry so they (karen and her boyfriend)should spend some time together and thim]nk more to msee if they were actually compatible.
Kerens boyfriend wasd behaving strangely from a week not taking her calls or being to busy so she has hired zoya and jasz to investigate what was the truth.

Here Ayaan had called up Asad and had said to him that his friend ben was in some type of iemotionl stress and since he couldnt come from los angeles so soon ,Karan and Asad should check on ben.

WHEN WE 4 MET PEOPLE BET
JUNE 11, 2019

Zoya :Jasz we have spied and kept vigil on him for 4 days we have come to know he is not interested well well break the news to Karen later but first lets give thast guy some piece of our mind.

Jasz:well bahut shauk hai na to play hide and seek zoya chal lets play
.
Zoya winked at Jasz and said :Why only hide and seek yaar well play pakdan pakri,uch nich ka papra gadhay ko maro jhapra too
They high fied.

Zoya and Jasz:we are coming Bennny ...

they both sat in their ford car and drove towards Kerens boyfriends office


Here asad and Karan too sat in ASADS PORSCHE and drove towards ben office...

Outside bens office

zoya and jasz had changed into Mechanics dress along with them were their mechanic friend raj.They three were under bens car.

RAj:you both girls what are we sorry what am i doing taking out screws from an unknown persons car and them whatv are you both doing hiding them and sticking notes on the car saying"for nyour next clue"ARE you playing treasure hunt.

ZOYA :iss baat pe ek sher arz hai

JASZ:irshad

RaJ:if you want help no sher...
Asad and Karan arive they saw tools near bens cars so stopped to enquire
Asad:Well good morning

zoya slid out till her eyes were visible

Seeing her eyes Asad stopped It wasnt that asad had seen beautiful eyes before it was just that he had never seen such lovely GREY SHADED EYES BEFORE THAT TOO WITH NO MAKEUP.

Zoya who had gone on many dates to find a life partner who
was her opposite knew handsome men
and she could say by one glance that this guy was an exceptionally handsome man

ZOYA AND ASAD (in their thoughts):arrey this is no movie ,so why is a staring scene going on ...

Asad and ZOYA together:who are you

ASAD AND ZOYA:i could ask you that

ASAD AND ZOYA:dont copy me

ASAD AND ZOYA:what i am not copying you

ASAD IN HIS MIND:what why is she saying ..or having the same thoughts as me

ZOYA:well cant you see we REPEARING A CAR ..

jasz:YOU KNOW R-E-P-A-R-I-N-G LIKE fixing ,making it alright

KARAn who was standing quite till now

KARAN:well madame who is under the car and not showing her face we know the meaning of fixing a car its just that its our friends car so we vwere enquiring

JASZ:well it isnt a muh dikhey ki rasam so i should show you my face

ZOYA AND JASZ giggled and high fied
ASAD AnD Exasperating women sorry bhai its our mistake only GBMS

ZOYA:well we arent bhai we are ladies you see or wearing those shades has made you slightly myopic


ASAD :GOd, you go to hell

ZOYA:well hell was full so i am back.

KARAN:adas lets go inside idiots

ZOYA AND JASZ:stick out their tongues

ASAD AND KARAN who had seen only polished ladies who said oh no asad,yes please asad,if its not a problem Asad ,thank you karan were most surprised and amused at the girls

Karan had a desire to see the under car girls face but couldn't

Karan: well whaTS GOT INTO ME .me trying TO SEE A GIRLS FACE WHATS WRONG...WELL I COULD HELP IT ITS RARELY YOU SEE GIRLS ACTUALLY PLAYING CHEeK AND TONGUE WITH YOU

ASAD ONCE MORE GLANCED AT THE beautiful GREY EYED GIRL WHO TOOK NO NOTICE OF HIM which MADE aSAD STOP SURPRISINGLY AT HIS TRACKS AND WONDER
Asad:wow good for a change no more prying eyes.No staring although it did hurt my ego its good but only for a change

Zoya was also surprised mostly any other guy would have approached her yet the guy dint well Zoya hes so irritating stop thinking about him concentrate on little benny
After one hour
Zoya and jasz had finished her work .Karan was in the office cafe and jasz was making all the final clues as to where ben would find all the nuts of his car

Zoya:well let the dear nut find all the nuts.Playing hide and seek with keira will come play now .

Jasz:Well Zo i will complete this treasure hunts clue you give benny some taste of his own medicine .

Ben worked for an insurance company and it was his job to pursuade the customer to take insurance.

She wore a mask like the people wear who have to go inside a building which has caught fire wear the mask covered her face eyes downwards.She also stuffed poly bags full of air to make herself look fat ,she wore heels and carried a dog
She and jasz rarely saw hindi movies but she remembered bobby jasoos...

Asad was sitting in bens cabin

ABBA(dressed zoya):Volla se na ge re da so(speaking abc language which doesnt exist)
Ben(who had to make clients buy the insurance desperately looked so BICHARA he couldnt get a word she spoke

Zoya was missing her iPad right now she so wanted to take a vedio of benny

Asad raised his head and again he saw those beautiful,doe shaped,grey colored mesmerising eyes...This type before getting lost he frowned
He saw ben also lost in her eyes

Asad frowned.. mechanic no she wouldn't fit beneath the car na but well asad so many ppl can have grey eyes..no but grey eyes aren't that common but..no AHAA

Asad:Well dad has hospitals in so many countries so i do have knowledge about the languages but which language is she speaking umm

Zoya:poiu sa fee go heta Dog

Ben snapped out of his trance and tried to understand what she was trying to say Suddenly the dog in her hands jumped and ran

ZOYA:loba sao ita dog

Ben thought this is my last chance if i can find a dog shell have a good impression so she will buy the insurance

Asad:well madimosa may i know what language you're speaking ..he asked suspiciously

ZOYA:Leew I Tnow llet ouy neb SI enog EES UOY.She pointed towards the window and as soon as Asad turned to see she went away...She actually ran..Asad just heard the clicking of heals...

Here poor ben looked for 1 hour for the dog but with no success as the dog had gone to raj...

Asad:Well what happened ben ...OH IF its about insurance then ill make you a millionaire i buy 1000 insurances if you please ...no asad Dad will eat me up

Asad :Then dont worry i am going to have a few words with your boss in the lunch party. Well do you doubt my capacity to buy anything?

Ben:Na asad i know who am i talking to the legal heir to a property worth ...Well worth that allows you to be in the list of top 50 richest people in the world

Asad:yup man you got it chalo shake that but and get going ...that grey eyed lady i have a feeling this is not the last we will be hearing of her

Karan and Asad called Asad other car as they thought it was not fashionable to go in the same car

At the lunch party
Zoya and JASZ dressed as Japanese their face white but alas zoya forgot her eyes and her clicking heels

Ben was introducing eveyone to Asad and Karan it wasn't everyday that the owners and the Md son of one of the 50 richest Hospital branch came.

since zoya and Jasz were formulating their next move they dint bother much about the surrounding

Asad to ZOYA(dressed as li chin me): "konnichiwa,"

Zoya dint know what it meant but she was a smart girl she gussed it meant hello
and she repeated the same thing

Again Asad was hit by those grey eyes...No he shouted in his head
By this time Jasz and zoya left and he again heard the clicking of the heels

Now asad was sure something was wrong the grey eyes and the clicking of the heels he tried to remember the convo ...the convo said :Leew I Tnow llet ouy neb SI enog EES UOY
he took a good half hour and Google to solve it at the end he understood just reverse it
well i wont tell you ben is gone see you . oh what the fish he shouted ..
He explained everything to Karan and they both set out to find those Japanese girls...

Then ben who had spent 3 hours full ,tired and cranky told Asad and Karan the story

asad and karan (thought):well girls always dont play make up make up for dress up wow what a day well well that reminds me of the day when we had changed our get up
well the two japanese ladies sure match us in these thoughts WE ARE SIMILAR AS FAR IS THIS IS CONSIDERED

But they woke up from this ,consoled ben who had probably played more hide and seek than he had ever played in his life with dog,nuts and lastly with his sim card god help him..

Karan and Asad split to find miss under the car and miss click heels..

Suddenly asad heard the clicking of heals and he rushed...but water was spllied and before he could react HE FELL ON ZOYA(pic below)

He raised his eyes and again was struck by the grey color
She was very beautiful ..like exceptionally beautiful..yup she can give than candy a competition and beat her ...Well he had seen beautiful girls before(read childhood incidence thread 1 link above)But what struck him was that she wore no Make up except Kajal

ASAD AND ZOYA:This is not a pictures scene get up..

Both thought :ill get up first

Both shouted:me first ...Boys win.. ...girls win

Asad(thought):again similar thinking
they kept on rolling ...

Here karan could not find any Japanese girl and came back and stated looking foe his BBF

Asad and Zoya:Stop

Asad and Zoya : nonsence

Asad and Zoya:boys win..girls win

Karan:God what are you doing

ASAD AND ZOYA(irritated):WWF

ASAD AND ZOYA:stop copying me

Asad and Zoya:uhuhhh

KARAN:WTH

JASZ:WTH you stop shouting at my friend

KARAN:who are you

JASZ:well rishtey mai toh hum ben ko sabak sikhana wala hai..naam IWT

Karan:Dont copy me and say short forms like me

JASZ:Well short forms aren't your copy write

ASAD AND ZOYA:We are stuck here guys help

YET KARZ dint stop arguing

ZOYA:what an idiotic friend Typical boy you know don't know how to prioritize things

ASAD:oh really ...Girls toh are always perfectly timed

ZOYA:well yes they are the ones that remember the things properly and know what to speak when..

asad:oh really well they remember the points..that too bad and later crib

Zoya:Oh really they crib...i guess boys don't understand the meaning of self improvement

Asad:well why do you want to correct us have we appointed you as teachers

ZOYA:Well chalo at least you called us girls as teachers,so you know we are right thanks😉😉😉

Asad:you you 😡😡

Zoya:you are 2 much

Asad:you are 3 much

Asad(in mind):well any other person doesn't know what to say after this awesome dialogue

Jasz suddenly pulles zoya up she ...Asad was still flat feeling the warmth missing
Zoya walked some distance with jasz

ASAD and KAran:we are not finished miss we need to discuss ben

Zoya turned back giving a naughty smile to Asad who sat there confused

Zoya:Well you are magarmach..😲😲😲

Asad and Karan sat gaping like a gold fish🥱🥱

There were fire detectors all around the room which were sensitive to high pitch noise

Jasz:Well mister you wanted to know our name na and about ben we will give you a detailed explanation mister THINK until we meet again

Karan and Asad confused your name ..yes ..no

Jasz:Wahey guru ji da Khalsa
🥱
Zoya:Wahey guru ji di fateh

Karan and Asad why are they remembering god with such a josh

Jasz and Zoya shouted:eee🥱 with full volume and ran out.Asad again heard the clicking of the heals...

The Fire alarm went out and the water sprinkler sprayed water all over them...
Karan and asad were surprised,stumped,angry,astonished,amazed,felt like laughing out loud,at the same time their ego was bruised..

THEY HAD FOUND THEIR COMPETITORS IN PRANKS a small part of their mind said but was it a prank or something serious but whats to be SERIOUS IN LIFE
But we never had competitors so pple do exist no but they no whatever...
BUT THEIR BRUISED EGO DECLARED

ITS A BOY V/S GIRLS WAR
*******************end of chapter 1******************
Note-please do comment and after commenting do read my reply's
I dedicate this chapter to LINSIE ASYAMANEET AND AYASHIKA THANKS😉😉
please do tell me weather you read the hum tum cartoon strips and played the songs in the background so i am sure i am not wasting my time and effort
THANKS



Edited by ican - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update adi 👏
Really loved it...
Asad and karan..
Zoya and jazz ...both are so much alike...
Beautiful. ..
Update soon...
I read update through phne so cant hear the songs bt ur hum tum cartoons strips are awesome..
Edited by aYASHIKA - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
interesting.
loved it.
almost read all asya parts .
awesome
sry i didnt read previous parts where its story of their parents much.
but when i will get time i will read it.
plz update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
Res
Unres..

Sorry...
I read it but forgot to unres it...I m soo sorry...
Awsum update...
Loved it..
Zoya nd jazz r so much same..
Asad nd karan...woww
Sorry could hear any song becoz I m reading frm ipad...
Hum tum cartoons strips awsum...
Beautifull...update soon..
Thnx for pm😊
I m really sorry I m late
Edited by fifi1297 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
ress.
unress...,
just loved it
never imazine u will come up with this. I mean its amazing

so funny,can't stop laughing


looking forward, continue soon
& thanX for PM
Edited by imcooldude - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Prologue!!
Awesome one!!
Asad & Karan
Zoya & Jazz !!
Their point of views!!
These are pakka hum tum s!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: AsyaManeet

Prologue!!
Awesome one!!
Asad & Karan
Zoya & Jazz !!
Their point of views!!
These are pakka hum tum s!!


THANKS YOU DINT READ THE NOTE NA CUTTY
HOPE YOU LIKED THEIR FIRST MEETING
THANKS YOU ARE THE FIRST ONE WHO DINT RES THANKS
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Posted: 11 years ago
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That Was really fun !! I kept giggling all along !! Its cute !! 😆
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Originally posted by: SBanoMalik

That Was really fun !! I kept giggling all along !! Its cute !! 😆

thanks so much even you dint read the note below😭
did you read my comment on your ff
thanks happy to had made you giggle

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