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jas91

@jas91

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#31

it was beautiful drabble

had no idea they were married

excellent work loved it😃

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Aashka

@Chillichick

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

This was heavenly dear...!!

Too good to be called a OS...!!

Written so beautifully!

U had managed not to reveal their status of relationship till the end...!

Just brilliant!

want to read more of those!

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JASLEEN

@Jasleenkaur01

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

This wad incredible dear...

Extremely beautiful n awesome...

Didn't knew they were married till end...

Continue writing such OS...

~JAZ~

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@Perfectionist2

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Really enjoyed it.

I could be wrong but the way I read it. It felt like a back story at one point, the part of the dance. It didnt feel like the yesterday of the phone conversation.

One of your best works for sure.

Regards

Juliet

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EuphoricDamsel

@EuphoricDamsel

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

AMazing amazing just amazing !!

i surely din't get any idea that they were married !

you should be given the name of

o. henry !!

the surprise ending writer

loved it just !

amazing os !

muaahhh :*

n thanks for keeping my zoya alive !

how much i cried !!! 🤣

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Ramlath

@Ramlath

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

wow... Awesome os...
i surely din't get any idea that they were married...
Thanx fr pm..

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-Astrid-

@-Astrid-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Beautiful...loved every bit of this😳...the end was a pleasant surprise😳

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Prazeena Bhattarai

@Aneezarp27

Inactive

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

i didn't realize they were married ! I checked the comment to see if it was only me? than blew a sigh of relief to hear the same thing from others as well... LOL i am not that bad reader! 😆

Anyway beautiful drabble...

Loved it!

Esp the way you wrote it...

Loved the song as well ! 😳 I hadn't listened it before...

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rjhr

@rjhr

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#39

that was beyond awesome...

even after 10 mins of reading it, m still grinning lyk an idiot... :)

tnx 4 pm...

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Anitha

@-Anitha-

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#40

Wow what a cute drabble.😊
This was wonderful😳
More than wonderful.😃
That song was beautiful😊
Glad that this Tee shirt song inspired u to write this❤️.
Amazing imagination by u.👍🏼
Romantic drabble😃
I have no idea till the end that they were married😆.
How sweet suspense yaar.😃
This is wat i like from ur writing skill.
In EB that culprit suspense killing me.
Now im waiting eagerly for ur updates.
I loved it to the core.
I think now its time to start read ''The fault in our stars''
Beautifully penned👏

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