OS-Drabble-Babble : Tee-Shirt!! NOTE PG8 (About the Story) - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
#51
This is Fantastic!!!
unique n b'ful ...absolutely loved it :)
they're married n have cute little baby too, that came as a surprise for me😳 😆
do write more 😉

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Posted: 11 years ago
#52
Its quiet surprise dear
I never thought they are married

When the sweetheart part came i got shock

I got confused are they married or not😲

Its brilliant update dear

I love it

Thanks for pm

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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
awsm update.
Superb one.
Luvd it.
Cont asap.
Thanx 4 d pm.
Waiting 4 d nxt part.
T.c
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54

So let me give you a lil input into my head n wat was going on in it wen I wrote this story...

Yes they were married and it was the night before..not in the past past.. they were married wen the met and hooked up!!!

So here's how I conceived this story into being..

Boy meets girl...A to Zee happens..and they are married,...and they just had a baby...a few months ago...

The girl is all over the place...everything's new for her..and once the baby comes its only natural...her attention shifts...

She is unsure...of the new venture she signed up for...and not very confident in her own skin...A lot has changed...in her..in the relationship..and in the way she views life...

Who gets the short end of the stick...

The husband...He's always been there...when she goes through it all..silently supporting her...taking it all in as well...Yes he didn't change in any personal points..but he did change..cos he loves his partner too much and the changes in her affects him...

He tries to keep the magic alive..to feel wanted by his wife..but she has a lot on her plate...So what does he do..

Busies himself.Works more..makes more for his family...and to give her the needed space when she asks and the supports when she seeks...

Romance takes the back seat...but love makes sure..its not for long..

A girl not confident in her skin..cannot accept her sensuality, her sexuality...Its not about physicality...its about feeling good from within...accepting what u cant change..and changing wat u can..

She needed time...soemthing's suffered...but not for long..

He gave her time...and he was rewarded..

His wife came back to her own...baby and all...changes and all..

She embraced the new her...and stepped out for a girls night..

He took the chance and followed...with his friends..

It was time to rekindle the romance...

He approached her as a stranger...she played along...

And they were once again where they needed to be..

He had to leave the next day...she already knew that...He had work to do..

But he managed to keep the romance going..by his texts..his simple yet heartfelt words...

She was happy...her marriage...her relationship...had decided to stay...and embrace the new change life brought them...

So ya..that was the mind set when I wrote it...and ya it was meant to come out as a one night stand...but then I am into such things...so how could I write about it..

Most importantly...I never thought this story will be liked as such...It was truly nothing more than a babble...but it was liked...and it delighted my creative cells...telling them..heck..I can try whimsical..and hopefully it will still be liked...

Thank you for allowing me to take risks with my writing and supporting me with all my writings...I truly feed off ur likes and comments and they make me write more!!!

Now I will get your comments soon..till then..hope that gives u an idea bout this babble!!😉

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Posted: 11 years ago
#55

Wow, its a good thing you cleared that up because my mind was all over the place,

Still the OS was very beautiful😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: asyaloveu

That was great. I never thought they were married until their daughter came into picture . Great os . Loved it. Awesome :-)

Thanks alot...and worry not...that was the intent...not knowing they were married😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: DevikaRavish

res 😊

unres

Hey Aashna.. That was magical... 😊 So I am not surprised that song inspired you to write this...after knowing the significance of T-shirt in your life...😉

wonderful OS.. and yep I read your comments in once upon... So we are not lucky over there...No worries...Will wait for Monday morning ... 😊

Aaah tee shirts...😆 I tell ya..there's something about worn teeshirts...esp with his scent well lets not go there..😆
Thank u for calling this babble magical...I was too unsure of how this would come across..but I was pleasently surprised...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58
Thanku😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: SimplySmile


That was so beautiful,

The whole tee shirt idea was cute,

I did not realize that they were married until the daughter came into the picture but am all the more happy that they are married,

Very lovely, beautiful drabble,😳

Thanks a lot gal...I am glad u enjoyed it...and I was able to keep the suspense till the end...😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: aniha20

res
unres..
Hi..i am here because of ankita's message..
I felt sad how i missed this amazing writer ...
You are awesome ⭐️
now coming to update.
They are married but not had any idea till that sweetheart came..
their chats was nice..
You are simply rocking in writing..
Love,
aniha 😉

All good gal..better late then never rite😉
I am awesome..😳 I am happy reading that...and the fact u enjoyed this lil mad story of mine..I am even more happy..so thank u very much for giving it a read n leaving ur comments..😊

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