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Gulaabo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

umm...that was confusing at first...but cleared at the end...
amazing thought

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Azraa

@Azraa01

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Never thought they were married until the daughter came in at the end.
It was a cute OS.

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961111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

res 😉

unres 😛

now...now...now...

i did not have the faintest idea that they were going to turn out as a married couple BTW... 😲😳

i read your convo with Devika Di on Once... thread...

so yeah.. i did understand the significance of tee here... 😊

i loved the way they texted...

even after having a baby, they are still finding it all new, like it was their first time...

you always mentioned the word 'like' instead of 'love'.. so i never gave it a thought that they might just be married too... 😉

loved it... 😃

i am glad that you actually updated this, instead of Once/EB...and you know why.. 😛

waiting for Monday now!! 😉😳

P.S.- Maha is a little busy these days... so she is not able to comment.. but she is surely reading everything and liking too.. 😛

Edited by BeYourself - 11 years ago

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potternerd

@potternerd

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Aashna the OS was so so beautiful

They are married and have a cute lil daughter. ...couldn't have guessed it !!!!!

It all seemed surreal 😊

Fault in our stars will release on July 25 in India !!!!!!😡

Loved that the song tee-shirt inspired you to write 😊

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shreya mehra

@shreya11mehra

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Res

Beautiful os aashna

Thy r married n hvng a cute lil daughter but still it seems as if thngd a new to thm..

I love their texts..I cudnt guess even fr a second that thy wre married..😲

Fantastic idea..😉

Amazingly written👏

Edited by shreya11mehra - 11 years ago

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anopama

@anopama

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

This was too good

I was like pick up on club one nite stand

But is turns out to be date nite fantasy come true

Family

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Alone111

@Alone111

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Haha thy were married !
I never thought it aashna..
Lvly os

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farz_parachute

@farz_parachute

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

OK.

Everybody is saying that they were married.

I'm saying when it happened they weren't. Now they are.

Unless.

They indeed were married. He was away for six months. And just that night she went out to have some 'me' time, he's back. So they...yeah.

Or.

I'm just too naive to read between the lines.

Yeah.

Very very nice OS! If the kiss was her undoing then...That T-shirt is mine!

;)

And love how you call it a babble drabble! Or a drabble babble? Oh it's great all the same!

Amazing piece!

:)

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Simran Bhandary

@pwenCezz_symrun

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Superb OS!! marvelously thought it was!!
never could guess that AsYa were actually married!!
ur writing made us flow with the it!!
would love to read more from uh!!
plz do PM me in ur next works too!!

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farz_parachute

@farz_parachute

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Posted: 11 years ago

#20

OK.

*I did that again. Started with an OK. Hmm unintentional*

So yes.

I had to read it again. This time with the prior knowledge.

So here's my take.

At the beginning she was married. Okay not necessarily. But there is a baby. Then she was reminiscing the night before.

And then she was reminiscing how she first met him.

And then she's up and then. The phone message. That's from her husband. Okay not necessarily. But definitely the father to her baby.

Yeah.

I'm going way off track here maybe. But look just how amazing this is. You made me not only read it twice. You got me to comment too! Twice.

Put me out of my misery, lest I start taking a third read and come up with a different theory.

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