OS-Drabble-Babble : Tee-Shirt!! NOTE PG8 (About the Story)

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Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: shreya11mehra
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Beautiful os aashna

Thy r married n hvng a cute lil daughter but still it seems as if thngd a new to thm..

I love their texts..I cudnt guess even fr a second that thy wre married..😲

Fantastic idea..😉

Amazingly written👏

Thanks a lot Shreya...I am glad u enjoyed the read..the texts and theior efforts of keepin the spark going...thank u thank u thank u😊

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Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: anopama
This was too good
I was like pick up on club one nite stand

But is turns out to be date nite fantasy come true

Family

Exactly...that was the intent..to think it that way...well I am glad u enjoyed it though...Thanks a lot😊

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Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: gowtu
Haha thy were married !
I never thought it aashna..
Lvly os

LOL..thanks gal...glad u enjoyed it despite the surprsie😉😆

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Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: farz_parachute
OK.

Everybody is saying that they were married.

I'm saying when it happened they weren't. Now they are.

Unless.

They indeed were married. He was away for six months. And just that night she went out to have some 'me' time, he's back. So they...yeah.

Or.

I'm just too naive to read between the lines.

Yeah.

Very very nice OS! If the kiss was her undoing then...That T-shirt is mine!

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And love how you call it a babble drabble! Or a drabble babble? Oh it's great all the same!

Amazing piece!

:)

OK.

Everybody saying they were married is quite right...They indeed are married...and the hook up did happen during their married life...

And he wasnt gone for 6 months...those 6 months were the crazy..baby time... so no romance found a place to be...

And as for reading between line...Sweetheart...I didnt imply it as such...I wanted the readers to think it to be just a random hook up...so you were where I needed my reader to be..😉

His kiss was her undoing...the tee-shirt urs...I'll agree...😉 His tee is mine aswell😆😛

I called it a Drabble babble...or so..but either way..it has a nice rind to it nai😛

Thanks sweetheart for ur...curious..and endearing comment..😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: -StarsLinedUp-
Can I gloat a lil?? I mean how neat was that...u all were for sure thinking of a one night stand...and...BAM...they are married...and new parents🤣

The tee significane..was attached here for sure..but that's not y I wrote it..I Dont know why I wrote it...I just did...and I was more than surprised..that ppl liked it...well then😎

They were playing around so they said like...

Cos no doubt we love...but not always like that person...Like is as important too...

And I'll wait for Maha's comment...all good😉