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aseela sha

@aseelashah

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Dear i read ur story

I like it

Its concept was so realistic

Pls pm me for next update

I will buddy u😃

Pls update soon

Thanks Linsie for pm😃

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Adi my pet name

@A_bibliophile

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: aseelashah
Dear i read ur story
I like it

Its concept was so realistic

Pls pm me for next update

I will buddy u😃

Pls update soon

Thanks Linsie for pm😃

thanx your encouragement means a lot yeh this will be a totally realistic story just wait for asyas entry it will get more real than real if you liked it please spread the word andplease i want special comments for chapter one and two please pretty please

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Shivanya

@IfritAmbrose

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#53

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chapter 1 : wow..marvelous chapter dear..u explained each n every aspect of Rashid's family very nicely..I loved it..how their thinking is..everything perfectly..good one 😆

chapter 2 : awesome..I see gaffur family belongs to very a typical having two three wife wala funda..I kinda don't appreciate dis funda..but dats my personal thought..nevertheless dat was perfect in all d way

chapter 3 : awesome as usual..very u portrayed Rashid thought about a life partner..I liked it..do.continue soon n pm me :) :)

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princess101

@princess101

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#54

Nice update waiting for Asya and could u please make it into paragraphs please it makes it easier to read for me please and also add a index to 😃

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Adi my pet name

@A_bibliophile

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: princess101
Nice update waiting for Asya and could u please make it into paragraphs please it makes it easier to read for me please and also add a index to😃

well chap four will be with
paragraphs and inverted commas and THE INDEX IS ON PAGE 1 thanks for the suggestions
P lease do give your comments about the content of chapter one and two

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Priya_KABHI

@PriyaKABHI

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#56

Thanks for Update.

Thanks for mentioning Asad AS KSG ONLY,Thank you so much.

It was very nice story line.

I just read 3 parts ,it was very Interesting .

It was very nicely explained every part.

Please update next part soon,I am waiting here.

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(ASAD will be always KSG ONLY,ASYA=KABHI ONLY)

PRIYAKABHI.

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Adi my pet name

@A_bibliophile

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: PriyaKabhi
Thanks for Update.
Thanks for mentioning Asad AS KSG ONLY,Thank you so much.
It was very nice story line.
I just read 3 parts ,it was very Interesting .
It was very nicely explained every part.
Please update next part soon,I am waiting here.
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(ASAD will be always KSG ONLY,ASYA=KABHI ONLY)
PRIYAKABHI.

well thank you for the comments i hope you like the content of chapter one and two no need to thank mw asad is personified by ksg only rite now i am concentrating on increasing the readers if you liked it do recommend it to your friends will update ASAP