AsYa(kabhi) FF:It Takes Two To A Tango THREAD 2 ASYA BEGIN

Hi ppl I am going a write my first ff its going to be fun and real I won't write a prologue or a character introduction because the story is going to start from asyas parents time so about ten chapters will be a there about their childhood teenage and job so what makes then the ppl you would meet they'll both me1t at 25 years of age its not going to be a conventional story
I hope you'll like it
Since its my first time do tell me how to write a ff do we write it in this only how do I make chapters or I post it in make post only
Please guide me how to go about
CHAPTER ONE:PG 1
CHAPTER TWO:PG 2
CHAPTER THREE: PG 3
CHAPTER FOUR(A):PG 11
CHAPTER FOUR(B):PG 13
CHAPTER FIVE(A): PG 22
CHAPTER FIVE(B): PG 30
CHAPTER SIX: PG 32
CHAPTER SEVEN & EIGHT: PG 45
THREAD TWO

THREAD TWO ASYA BEGIN

Hey dear...
I am waiting for your story... Update soon 😊

Thanks for the like yum a but I have not written before so I need ppl to guide me not in terms of the story but in technical aspect have w to post how to create chapters etc etc
I'll come to the forum in half an hour so if I find someone to guide me I'll start in half hour to 45 minutes

Looks interesting
I never wrote as well that's why I don't know but u can post the chapter in same thread as new post.
Hope it will help u
Do pm me when u update
Thanks

Hi...
Interesting concept...
Continue it soon...
Waiting for ur ff...
Pm me ...

Hi nice concept excited to read it please pm me when u update :)

Ksg always asad and this is neither a dark nor sad ff
CHAPTER ONE :1963Bhopal 1963
a son was born to ali ahmed khan and nafisa ahmed khan it had been just 16 years after independence so the medical facilities were limitedthe midwife helped in delivering the child who was named ko rashid ahmed khan a healthy and chubby boy .Mr ali had been a haqim himself and he wanted his child to be a doctor..Mrs ahmed khan was literally jumping with joy she had had her prayers answered finally.They had gone to the dargas temples churches to just get this one wish fullfilled.Rashid had always been a very obedient boy a very sincere one too.he had studied in a madarassa till fifth and then had gone to bhopal school to complete his schooling. He did his mbbs from govt. college of indore.His father had been his role model he loved his mother but he dint think of her as such as a known person.She was a very homely lady from cooking to washing to stitching to embroidery name it all she was a perfect wife,but whenever there was a discussion in the house rashid always found her opinions similar to his father.At first he was confused was it because ppl married their thoughts became similar or was it that his mother never bothered.But soon his confusion was cleared because not only his mother all the ladies of his childhood were the same they agreed to the husband most of the times even when they dint agree with their husband they politely asked then never daring always meek and if the husband said this was their final stand they never stood up or argued or tried to prove their point.Girls at that time were hardly educated his mother could just read the Quran and write simple letters wow she dint even try to assert herself to his father to let her join the school opened in their neighbourhood which was opened for the adult's by the reformers.But his dad was worst he dint even approve of the opening of the school foe education of the adult women .Whenever Rashid used to question this his parents use to look at him as if hes madThe best part was his dad did not help around the house no na never he felt the world was divided into men and women the men work outside and women in the house there was a clear division of labour and ali believed that a woman's life was so easy what work was to be done in the house.When rashid questioned that ladies had started working outside his father had replied we never asked them too but rashid felt the best answer was given by his mom she said beta the ladies who are not satisfied in their homes who dont have compassion in their heart come outside they are just lonely and anyways they need a man to protect them na his mom said it is better to get scoldings from your husband than to be humiliated by another male and why should they talk to another male. Rashid was suprised at first but later he cam to know thats how the society was he also came to knoq fron some woman that his mother was lucky his dad dint marry more than once and he did not beat his wife it was a blessing.Rashid felt ...well rashid miya said rashid to himself sure you admire raja ram mohan roy but this isnt going to get you anywhere ...you better concenterate on your studies but yet he couldnt help describing theoutside atmosphere men still felt below dignity if their wives wanted to work and fathers got scared and humiliated if their daughter crossed 18 and wasnt married you dint even know whom you were getting married to until you were married .Girls shyed away from fathers and suprising girls loved all the kitchen work and gossip very few wanted to compete and prove themself.A wife including his mother became happy that when she was sick her husband helped her in the household work and compromise was the key to a happy marriage and mostly ppl with no metal compatibily had a better marriage then the people who had same educational qualification well rashid miya said rashid to himself enough musing brace yourself for your md INDEX
CHAPTER ONE : pg 1
CHAPTER TWO :pg 2
CHAPTER THREE :pg 3. Note asya will be born in chapter five

nice start.
This kind of difference b/w man & women is still present in our society!!
lets see what rashid does?
thanks 4 pm

Nice start...
Love the way u described each and everything. ..
Update soon..
Thanks for pm

This is not a India Pakistan story
Pakistan 1963 a son was anwar siddiqui and his third begum hiraka siddiqui. This was the second son and the fourth child of the house.The child born was called gauffar siddiqui. Mr Anwar was a respected govt official in the lahore govt. he had three wives four children and a comfortable living.Mr Anwar would never accept least it soiled his reputation but his marriage to his second begum was not one of the reasons Islam allows you to marry more than one woman .His second wife also the mother to his Two children was 15 years younger to him and was very beautiful young naive and you can well imagine the reason's to why his nights were very blissful.While the muslim women in India were a bit more free than the women of Pakistan this in no way affected their existence.Gauffar siddiqui often wondered why dint his father sleep every night with his mother but he was taught that since he had three ammis it was his fathers responsibility to satisfy each of his ammis needs.Gauffar more than often wondered were they his ammis need thay needed to be satisfied or his fath...whenever he used to ask this question to his mother she used to scold Gauffar and say he is your abbu and my shohar and he is always right and he keeps her happy.But Gauffar did notice that when the relatives of his mother side badmouthed his other ammis his mother although dint join them but she did have this faint smile on her face.If you are thinking that Mr Anwar was a bad father then yOu are wrong he pais equal attention and showered love and care on all his four children,but how would you make a childs heart understand that he and his ammi cannot have his fathers undivided attention because he had other siblings and ammis to care of.He was often taught that this had reduced his selfishness because he and his ammi had learnt to share his fathers love and thus had become selfless and better humansHe never shared this with anyone but he did have this thought that then wasnt his father becoming selfish cause his father had all the three ladies attention and all four children love.This siblings jealousy situation was also faced by his Indian neighbour's family but the difference was that he had to pacify two children but only one wife. The child would never encounter a situation like gauffar where his sabse badi ammi with her daughter and husband wanted to go to the market his manjali(middle) ammi and her daughter and son wanted to go to the fair with her husband while his ammi wanted to go to the park with gauffar and his father.Yes his father managed everything perfectly his office was five days a weak and he had somehow managed to make it four days a weak so friday was baddi ammis day,saturday his ammis day and sunday his manjali ammis day ,although his mother never voiced anything he did see her eyes whenever she thought about the fact that sunday the most special day was reserved only for his young wive But later as gauffar grew up saw many men their wives and marriage he realised his father was a man who had lived his life to the fullest without compromise his fathers eldest wive was a very clever and shrewd woman she was as cunning as a fox and as sly as the cat she managed to get him out of sticky situations and Gauffar dint have any proof but was sure of the fact that his father attended office only 4 days a week yet nothing wrong happened...was a masterstroke of his badi ammi his manjali ammi was beautiful young naive delicate so his father always felt young and his confidence increased ten fold as she was 15 years younger to him and his own ammi was a pious and soft hearted woman whenever his father was angry upset and bored of physical consolation his ammi gave his father morale support ...A person does not have all the qualities and sometimes one can be angry so there is always another...That day Gauffar realised that his father was a luck smart and jindgi sae kush man.It was not that he dint love his mother his thoughts did go his thoughts did go to his mother why dint she have the choice if father could choose and assemble then why not his mother BUT he immediately shooed these thoughts away and said that je would bring nice bahus to keep ammi happy isnt that what she enjoyed the typical saas bahu drama and it was a win win situation for men ...and he was a male after all...he had thoughts and needs ...but ammi na she was happy with abbu na so finally gauffar became a bio teacher did his MSC and now said Gauffar to himself gauffar mia you are 21 better lookout for Phd