AsYa(kabhi) FF:It Takes Two To A Tango THREAD 2 ASYA BEGIN - Page 4

Awesome update
Dilshad is doctor & doesn't want to marry
Rashid joined business & told her mother abt doctor bahu
Curious to know abt reaction when they meet dilshad
Plz continue soon
Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: ican

no she thats what i am trying to tell its not that gauffars dad dint love his ammi bit he loved all three of his wives its is possible its a bit more deep do read the two parts together thanks for replyingi downloaded a pic from the net and saved it in my phones picture gallery how can i use that as my profile pic?do read the ladies thought too

U can go in ur profile & upload the pic from ur gallery.

Hi...quite interesting story

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Awesome update
Dilshad is doctor & doesn't want to marry
Rashid joined business & told her mother abt doctor bahu
Curious to know abt reaction when they meet dilshad
Plz continue soon
Thanks for pm

well rashid is also he doctor when he comes to meet dilshad he has completed his Md in gastrointestinal surgery but dilshad has done her mbbs and one year diploma in ENT and rashid told his father he wants a mentally compatible life partnerwell in chapter 3 i have mentioned that dilshad as a bahu is decided by Rashids dad only rashid is just going to meet the girl

Originally posted by: potternerd

Hi...quite interesting story

Something different

Glad you're taking effort to write about asya's parents. ..something which I guess nobody has done..good job

I wish I had come across your story earlier. .I would have helped with the technical stuff

But its okay I'll help now :)

I'll pm you ok

Continue soon :)

Thanks a lot we have to know about asyas parents to know their views its going to be a practical story thanks for the help I WOULD SPECIALLY LIKE YOUR COMMENTS ABOUT THE FIRST And SECOND CHAPTERS

Originally posted by: ican

Thanks a lot we have to know about asyas parents to know their views its going to be a practical story thanks for the help I WOULD SPECIALLY LIKE YOUR COMMENTS ABOUT THE FIRST And SECOND CHAPTERS

Originally posted by: potternerd

Sure I will comment on first two chapters :)

One suggestion..please update the chapter index on page 1 itself...in your first post..edit the comment and add the index...it will be easier for people to know which chapter is on what page :)

in the first chapter i have written the index how can i improve it for better convenience of the reader

Chapter 1...

Seriously i loved it 👏 👏

The divided men and women...

because by the culture ... yesterdays

generation ... how men are dominant

Originally posted by: Linsie

Chapter 1...

Seriously i loved it 👏 👏

The divided men and women...

because by the culture ... yesterdays

generation ... how men are dominant

thanx loved your suggestions alsoliked it do recommend it to your friends