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Adi my pet name

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: aseelashah
PART 1
You wrote very well about Rashid's family
Its so realistic dear
These type of depending & not offending husbands ladies are now also we can see
Rashid need independent thinking wife
Very interesting start😃

thanks your comment made my day and what about chapter two gauffars family and chapter three shireen and dilshad thanx a bunch of you like it do recommend it to your friend

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aseela sha

@aseelashah

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

PART 2

Here we got another muslim family with another POV

Here the man having 3 wives & he is leading his life fully

Here Gafoor's insecurity & feelings of being shared is beautifully narrated

And his thinking is bring more bahus to his ammi that way she will be happy

Pls update soon dear

I am waiting for part 4 & ASYA's birth😃

Thanks for ur pm

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aseela sha

@aseelashah

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: ican
thanx your encouragement means a lot yeh this will be a totally realistic story just wait for asyas entry it will get more real than real if you liked it please spread the word andplease i want special comments for chapter one and two please pretty please

I done commenting for part 1 & 2

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Adi my pet name

@A_bibliophile

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Posted: 11 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: aseelashah

I done commenting for part 1 & 2

yeh men can live fullest while females are humph dont worry zoya goint to be a table tod real black belt toofani FEMINIST youll lobe her

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Aashka

@Chillichick

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Posted: 11 years ago

#65

Wow...!! Waiting for the journey to begin...!!!

Loved the start...!!

Don't worry you'll do fine...!!!

Best of luck...!

Aashka

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aseela sha

@aseelashah

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Posted: 11 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: ican
yeh men can live fullest while females are humph dont worry zoya goint to be a table tod real black belt toofani FEMINIST youll lobe her

I am waiting for it darling

Update soon😃

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Adi my pet name

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Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: asyafreva
Wow...!! Waiting for the journey to begin...!!!
Loved the start...!!

Don't worry you'll do fine...!!!

Best of luck...!

Aashka

thanks these comments keep you going wish all the ff writers get equal no of views and likes not 14 likes and 555 views

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Adi my pet name

@A_bibliophile

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Posted: 11 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: asyafreva
Wow...!! Waiting for the journey to begin...!!!
Loved the start...!!

Don't worry you'll do fine...!!!

Best of luck...!

Aashka

thanks for the encouragement do recommend it to your friends if you liked it ate you okay with the idea of zoya being a table tod real blach belt FEMINIST