The Alter Ego - ||Chronicles Of ARI|| *Updated Pg. 34*

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farz_parachute

@farz_parachute

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#221

Tia!

Don't okay!

Not a word against Mr Alter Ego!

He's the most sensible person in the room okay!

XD

*****

And Praguuu!!!

My darlinggg!!!

What was that yo!!!!

What was that!!!

So much angst!!!

So much frustration!

Such incredible looks!

All needy and wanting and pining!

Give him some gal!

What? No? Not yet!?

Oh baby boy!!!

You hang in there okayyy my darling beast.

What was that my love?

That lean back needs a rub?

Oh totally!

At your service baby beast. Eh I mean baby boy. No. Big boy!

Back like that.

Still maybe some rubbing on your chest too? Yeah.

Oh my.

*that chest*

*feeel*

*fans self*

*can't fan self coz busy with hands*

*hands on chest*

*THAT chest*

I miss you suds.

*THAT chest*

What was that my sexy beast? More on the back?

Sure thing!

*lean*

*mean*

*back*

*oh meany!! YES!*

Alter ego who?

;)

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Pragya

@Ms.Sherlocked

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#222

Originally posted by: farz_parachute
Tia!

Don't okay!

Not a word against Mr Alter Ego!

He's the most sensible person in the room okay!

XD

*****

And Praguuu!!!

My darlinggg!!!

What was that yo!!!!

What was that!!!

So much angst!!!

So much frustration!

Such incredible looks!

All needy and wanting and pining!

Give him some gal!

What? No? Not yet!?

Oh baby boy!!!

You hang in there okayyy my darling beast.

What was that my love?

That lean back needs a rub?

Oh totally!

At your service baby beast. Eh I mean baby boy. No. Big boy!

Back like that.

Still maybe some rubbing on your chest too? Yeah.

Oh my.

*that chest*

*feeel*

*fans self*

*can't fan self coz busy with hands*

*hands on chest*

*THAT chest*

I miss you suds.

*THAT chest*

What was that my sexy beast? More on the back?

Sure thing!

*lean*

*mean*

*back*

*oh meany!! YES!*

Alter ego who?

;)

!!!!!!!!

Farzz!!! 😡😲 Stop polluting my Alter Ego!! I mean Aahil's. I mean. ;)

Oh well. THAT CHEST. THAT BACK. Umm so. Alter Ego who indeed ;) 😆

Okay. You made me at loss of words for I don't know what to comment after that LEANY and MEANY loving to him you gave. So I guess I should give a "Red Towel" next, instead of Alter Ego ;) 😆

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farz_parachute

@farz_parachute

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#223

Red towel be Alter Ego!

;)

Wait.

You called me Farz.

Am I in trouble?

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Pragya

@Ms.Sherlocked

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#224

*So can you hear me, when I call your name..* <3

-Daughtry

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TVD-IANcrazy

@TVD-IANcrazy

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#225

Pragzyyy. Finally a J Aahil. 🥳 *SADISTIC PLEASURE* 😆 But after reading this I need him to scream and confess out loud to Sanam. Those words he uttered to his alter self. They are not for his ears, but for HER. You gotta do that soon. At least make him confess in your fan fiction coz we are not witnessing him confess in the show any time soon. 😔 😆 And instead of making it worse he needs to fix his mistake by explaining. Come on dude. Be a man. How long you are going to confess behind the locked doors?!?!??! Go and get the girl. 😆
How do you do that Pragzyy??!!?? I mean it. Seriously!!! 👏 It seems each word he speaks pains him. The intense salt in the wounds is the understanding that she doesn't love him and never did so. It's gut-wrenching for him. Seeing them together hurts him the most. And you've written it so brilliantly. And that's WHY I LOVE reading you. YOU always make him utter everything he would never say in the show. 😆
Mwaaah. Love you yaar. 🤗 YOU ROCK. :*

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Pragya

@Ms.Sherlocked

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#226

Originally posted by: TVD-IANcrazy
Pragzyyy. Finally a J Aahil. 🥳 *SADISTIC PLEASURE* 😆 But after reading this I need him to scream and confess out loud to Sanam. Those words he uttered to his alter self. They are not for his ears, but for HER. You gotta do that soon. At least make him confess in your fan fiction coz we are not witnessing him confess in the show any time soon. 😔 😆 And instead of making it worse he needs to fix his mistake by explaining. Come on dude. Be a man. How long you are going to confess behind the locked doors?!?!??! Go and get the girl. 😆
How do you do that Pragzyy??!!?? I mean it. Seriously!!! 👏 It seems each word he speaks pains him. The intense salt in the wounds is the understanding that she doesn't love him and never did so. It's gut-wrenching for him. Seeing them together hurts him the most. And you've written it so brilliantly. And that's WHY I LOVE reading you. YOU always make him utter everything he would never say in the show. 😆
Mwaaah. Love you yaar. 🤗 YOU ROCK. :*

Aalooo!! FINALLY!! FINALLY! Your comment! That dreaded comment! 😆

Yes yes YES!! Sadistic pleasure IT IS!! 😆 You know, his jealousy never struck me before THIS MUCH 😆 Maybe that's why I was waiting for a proper jealousy portrayal, to get that rush ya know? 😆 You guys were all "we want J Aahil" and I just couldn't seem to flow my emotions out. So now, the dance scene FINALLY gave THAT RUSH I needed 😈😆

Yeah! He is NOT gonna confess anytime soon man. Given the situation he is in, Mr Messed Up.I couldn't stop myself from calling him that by his Alter 😆 And fic? I don't know. My fic would always end up getting dirty 🤣

Oh well. Its not ME who does. its all done by HIM! <3 😆 See I am not the one to brag about it 😆

Thank you anyways Aaloo! I myself love writing this Messed-up-ness

Love you more Aaloo!! <3

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Dhaneshree

@Dhanesh27

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#227

I finally unres'd on page 27

Feel free to shoot me, sorry it took so long Praguu I've been so busy and now I'm man down with the flu. Can my hot neighbor just come be my Aahil to his Sanam and take care of me already😆

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Pragya

@Ms.Sherlocked

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#228

Originally posted by: subhkisonu
Res!
Unres!
Sabra ka phal sach much meetha hai😛
Finally we've got a jelly ARI!
Wonderful!

Thank you!! I see you are a regular stalker of this thread hmm? Great! I have a stalker! Oh my thread actually! 😆

Thank you again for loving it!

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Pragya

@Ms.Sherlocked

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#229

Originally posted by: Paint.It.BlacK.
Res..

edited----

you know what? i wish i could quote the lines i loved...but going to do that i found i simply live each of the lines n words there!! i simply couldnot choose just 2/3 as my fav8. as i heart each part of the piece.❤️
really praggu this is amazing!! you're just soo soo good with all this alter egos!!👏

Aahil n his thought..his mind has got a whole new lease of life through your writing. his angst...pain...love...hate...jealousy...care..everything comes to life in all its brilliant colour n i soo love it the way you treat the whole self confession thing!!! 👏

you know you should not write once but daily u should keep delivering your alter ego dose. 😉

honestly...your take reveals Aahil n his mind from completely a different angle n i just adore the way it exposes his thoughts n want. truly awesome dear!!⭐️

Thanks so much for the pm. n really sorry for late unres. but i was bit busy. please dont mind dear. :(

Oh my god Diti!! This comment! THANK YOU!! Thank you so so much!! So much appreciation! All for me. I couldn't take it honestly, I feel so clumsy when it comes to situations like this, I don't know how to respond. THANK YOU! A BIG BIG HEARTY THANK YOU for all the great and lovely words you have said!

It really means ALOT to me! Daily? Well, its actually when the emotions flow, then I could only write, I need that rush and force you know? 😆 Or else it would turn out crappy and I am able to realise that while writing only, this piece is crap and then I delete everything and don't feel like writing again. Umm, I don't know why I told you that! 😆

Its just these complex characters get to me very much so I just love to portray them like this. <3

And please. PLEASE. Don't be sorry! Its all good! Even I am not able to reply on some of your posts :(

Thank you so much again for commenting by taking time form your busy schedule! Its an honor really! 😳

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Pragya

@Ms.Sherlocked

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#230

Originally posted by: Dhanesh27
Res again :(
Don't be mad just...

Take that red towel and spank me for all I care ;)

Unres ;)

"I WAS NEVER OVER HER!! NEVER!! NEVER EVER!! I LOVE HER! I STILL LOVE HER! I WILL LOVE HER! EVEN IF SHE H-HA-HATES ME! EVEN IF IT HURTS ME TO LOVE HER SO MUCH! EVEN IF SHE DOESN'T CARE! EVEN IF I PRETEND I HATE HER! EVEN IF SHE KEEPS MESSING UP MY MIND LIKE SHE ALWAYS DOES! EVEN IF IT DOESN'T MATTER TO HER! EVEN IF I DON'T MATTER TO HER! EVEN IF I PRETEND SHE DOESN'T MATTER TO ME! BUT SHE MATTERS TO ME! SHE MATTERS TO ME LIKE NO ONE EVER DID! SHE MATTERS TO ME LIKE I NEVER DID TO ME! SHE MATTERS TO ME CAUSE SHE COMPLETES ME! SHE COMPLETES ME BECAUSE I WAS NEVER COMPLETE. EVEN WHEN I HATED HER, I COULDN'T STOP HATING HER. SHE WAS THE ONE WHO I SAVED. SHE WAS THE ONE WHO SAVED ME! SHE WAS THE ONE WHO CALLED ME! SHE WAS THE ONE WHO CARED ABOUT I WAS BORN! SHE WAS THE ONE WHO STOPPED ME FROM SOMETHING! SHE WAS THE ONE FOR WHOM I STOPPED SOMETHING FOR FIRST TIME! SHE WAS THE ONE I COULDN'T GET MY EYES OFF! SHE WAS THE ONE WHO FIRE HAS BURNED ME! SHE WAS THE ONE WHOM I COUDN'T HATE EVEN WHEN I WANTED TO.

SHE IS THE ONE WHOM I LOVE, EVEN WHEN I DIN'T WANT TO!
AND I HATE! I HATE MYSELF TO LOVE HER SO MUCH! I HATE MYSLEF TO LOVE YOU SO MUCH, SANAM! I HATE THAT I LOVE YOU, SANAM!! I HATE MYSELF..."
THIS!!!!! Poetic justice! Oh my god Pragguu what was this, I'm in awe right now, jaw dropped and everything else! I mean you convey his thoughts to the T if this was for marks I would so give you 100%. wow!!! I can't believe it took me so long to read this, really! I don't know if I'll ever be able to forgive myself. You my darling complete me! With your stories and jealous ARI! Love love love! I feel like I'm sitting down with the queen when I'm reading your stories, no lie. Ooh I'm like all jellied inside now. Aahil is doing these weird things to me inside 😆 First the bare torso with the red towel and now this! Can I just study your brain for a second and find out where these masterpieces see to come from! Pretty please :) with puppy eyes.
Once again I'm so sorry for the late reply I'm kicking myself right now
Love you :*