The Alter Ego - ||Chronicles Of ARI|| *Updated Pg. 34*

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sylvia99

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Posted: 11 years ago

#231

Too nice to see all the pent up emotions in words. Felt like all those inside things released and you became free again.

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Pragya

@Ms.Sherlocked

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Posted: 11 years ago

#232

Originally posted by: sylvia99
Too nice to see all the pent up emotions in words. Felt like all those inside things released and you became free again.

Thank you so much Sylvia!! Such great comments from you. I am really honored.

Yes I might have become free now, although the emotions could never get outta me <3 😆

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JShukla

@JShukla

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Posted: 10 years ago

#233

⭐️oh you wicked girl... you connect only with that jerk ARI..like really? You can't connect with my Sanam,... go swim in the pool with ARI😡🤢

I will comment some more... in some more time... as expected I read Sanam's Alter ego first...will re read and comment

Oh How she won that challenge man... she's such a weird thing to happen on Indian telly.

Tacky makeup, gaudy clothes, silly hairstyle, brave, effecient, and still such a goofy character...😭 she's my dream for a telly heroine come true. And I totally relate to her⭐️ And you did that too. But this Sanam is not innocent one bit.. she has quite enjoyed the poolside views😃

Edited by JShukla - 10 years ago

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Pragya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#234

Originally posted by: JShukla
⭐️oh you wicked girl... you connect only with that jerk ARI..like really? You can't connect with my Sanam,... go swim in the pool with ARI😡🤢

I will comment some more... in some more time... as expected I read Sanam's Alter ego first...will re read and comment

Oh How she won that challenge man... she's such a weird thing to happen on Indian telly.

Tacky makeup, gaudy clothes, silly hairstyle, brave, effecient, and still such a goofy character...😭 she's my dream for a telly heroine come true. And I totally relate to her⭐️ And you did that too. But this Sanam is not innocent one bit.. she has quite enjoyed the poolside views😃

😆 Juhi! You such an adorable little thing you know?! I kinda love you..🤗😆

See THATS called sticking up with someone, no matter WHAT. Catching my drift, are you? ;) 😆

Hey hey, see I gave a shot on her Alter Ego, and it turned out pretty fine I guess. I can give a second shot too. Because after writing it I thought I MIGHT connect with her, and it was pretty early you know, now I TOTALLY can!

Why I wasn't able to write for her after that, because she wasn't as confused as HE was ya know? I like my characters confused 😆 She was oblivious of her feelings or whatever happening around her, so I wasn't able to write about her feelings, maybe now I can do...

Everything apart. She DEFFO is the most strong headed, most dominant and a brave female character for me too! See I love how Sanam has all the control on him..

I can swim in that pool though..however they both have already swimmed... xD

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Pragya

@Ms.Sherlocked

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#235

Originally posted by: 1788shreya
Awesome
Fabulous
Update soon

Thank you so much Shreya :) Glad that you liked it. I haven't given this thing a thought from quite long. However, I am thinking on it again now!

I might come up with another soon! ;)

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JShukla

@JShukla

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#236

^^ this I will wait for Prags... bbut do it for both.

I want to understand what makes Sanam a doormat now and what makes Aahil a plunderer suddenly...

Had never expected him to be the knight in shining armour, but this current shit I was so not expecting.

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Pragya

@Ms.Sherlocked

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#237

Originally posted by: JShukla
^^ this I will wait for Prags... bbut do it for both.
I want to understand what makes Sanam a doormat now and what makes Aahil a plunderer suddenly...

Had never expected him to be the knight in shining armour, but this current shit I was so not expecting.

Guess what, this time I am gonna do both..:) 😆

Alter Ego is "the voice" of the people, the truth of their feelings which they don't admit and keep denying. And THAT is what confuses them.

So, HIS Alter Ego would be WHY is he doing all this if he "loves" her. Like we all want to see. And I'll make sure you like his alter ego. Coz that would be like the EXACT bashing like we do 😆

And Sanam's would be WHY the hell she is tolerating all this. She never tolerated his this behaviour earlier, why is she now?

And I am really excited for this, dunno why 😆

Edited by Prags_Sociopath - 10 years ago

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JShukla

@JShukla

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Posted: 10 years ago

#238

Prags I am quite a materialistic person and love the very little money that I have and all... but still when Aahil throws in his rich nawab status at Sanam it makes me want to puke.

She never wanted it from him..ever. He has killed my excitement for his entry. I watched QH for his entry, but when he came back it was so lacklustre that I had to

Its like, being a wife she will always be at his mercy. he can give her all that when he wants and take that away whenever he wants.

For sake of her future financial stability, Sanam must never rely on this man but on her own bread-winning skills. He can just throw her out anytime of the night, the abuser that he is, if anything goes wrong or against his expectations.

btw whats stopping lateef from telling Sanam about Aahil's breakdown. Now if that scene is shown in flash back, I might feel that its Sanam's natural protective instincts kicking in to protect her man-child.

And another thing is I do not agree that this girl is dominationg. She isn't. She is a doormat.

Edited by JShukla - 10 years ago