The Alter Ego - ||Chronicles Of ARI|| *Updated Pg. 34*

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darkice7_12

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Posted: 10 years ago

#261

That was great! 👍🏼

Some home truths for Aahil. I loved how the AE called him out on being such a damp squib and then complimented him on still having the moves to seduce a married women. 😎

I also liked how Aahil heard what a precarious position Sanam is in if he doesn't act now!

I loved how Aahil admitted how much he is irritated by Jannat. 😆

Loved it! 👏 Hope to read more of these from you.

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Sumi Roy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#262

how cn i miss ths...this is brilliant...

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minnie2308

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Posted: 10 years ago

#263

its almost like the collective voice of us fans to Aahil miyan. Go dude do something! I am just looking forward to him doing all that his alter ego has asked of him.

The Cvs are bent on making Sanam a number person. remember how she remembered his phone number and not him.. she remembered his allergies, but not him. she remembered his measurements😉 but not him.😭

Well written Pragya.

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Pragya

@Ms.Sherlocked

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Posted: 10 years ago

#264

Originally posted by: Raingoddess
Omg this was brilliant! ⭐️ I thoroughly enjoyed reading it!! I laughed in some parts and felt bad for ARI during others! 😆 Like we discussed today, funny and sad at the same time 😉😆 Gosh finally after so long your wrote one! I guess the occasion demanded it 😆 Considering Nawab Sahab needs someone to talk some sense into him! 😉 No more tears baby, time to turn on the Junoon Jallad Jinn style!! ☺️ His AE is as amazing as ARI! 😉😆 Simply brilliant Pragya!! 👏 You need to write more cuz no one writes about HIM better than you 😳😆

Thanks Esha! 😆

I knew you would love it! Trust me, its the same for me, feeling sad and then laughing at him 😆😆

Yep! Indeed the occasion it was, I am sure his "inner voice' must have been lashing and lamenting at him for being like this, so I just wrote it out in open, its still him 😳😆

And that you can see from last 1-2 instances, that JJ is coming outta him, slowly - can't stay put for long you know? 😉😆

I love his AE, its so funny 😆 Aww yayy!! I am honored that I "do" him well! 😛😆

Thank you for this Esha! I'll think of writing another one soon! 😉

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Pragya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#265

Originally posted by: darkice7_12
That was great! 👍🏼

Some home truths for Aahil. I loved how the AE called him out on being such a damp squib and then complimented him on still having the moves to seduce a married women. 😎

I also liked how Aahil heard what a precarious position Sanam is in if he doesn't act now!

I loved how Aahil admitted how much he is irritated by Jannat. 😆

Loved it! 👏 Hope to read more of these from you.

Thank you so much! 😳

Haha yes! I feel that "playboy" ARI is still there in him, and which comes out by his AE. I wanted to highlight that part too. Inspite of being calling him being a jerk he still has "it" in him! No wonder "Jannat" is all bothered 😆

Irritation in him by Jannat, I saw that in him when she was talking and talking and when he 'shut her up" in that jungle before the tribals. Poor guy! 😆

Thank you so much again! I'll try to write more! 😛

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Pragya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#266

Originally posted by: LoveSonu2408
how cn i miss ths...this is brilliant...

Awww thank you so much Sonu! I am glad you loved it! 😳

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Pragya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#267

Originally posted by: minnie2308
its almost like the collective voice of us fans to Aahil miyan. Go dude do something! I am just looking forward to him doing all that his alter ego has asked of him.

The Cvs are bent on making Sanam a number person. remember how she remembered his phone number and not him.. she remembered his allergies, but not him. she remembered his measurements😉 but not him.😭

Well written Pragya.

Yes it is! We all want him to act and his AE is just lamenting him why he is not acting! I want him to do all of that too, thats why I wrote 😛😆

Oh yes! She remembers the things related to HIM but NOT him! Like I think, she remembers she has a "shauhar" in her earlier life whom she loved a lot, its just that she doesn't remember the face! 😕😭 Poor guy!

Yes his measurements! Wonder how does she remember those? Naughty girl! 😉😆

Thank you so much Minnie! :)