The Alter Ego - ||Chronicles Of ARI|| *Updated Pg. 34* - Page 21

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Posted: 11 years ago
This was so intense! I wish the show had a scene like this!!! Well not really the alter ego...its nicer to read than watch lol tho two kvbs wud be hawt lmao but i mean the self confession and break down! Its amazing!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: subhkisonu

Res!

Urghhh! I can't read now! 😡
Will comment after reading.



Aww thats okay! I kinda knew you would be first 😆
Thanks for that though! Will be waiting for your comment! :D
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Dhanesh27

Res again :(

Don't be mad just...

Take that red towel and spank me for all I care ;)


Dhannu darls! I am NOT mad!
Coz THAT statement just made up for all that! Oh, I just used your this statement in my post! 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: MrDarcyfan

This was superbly angsty. I loved the intensity.



Thanks Mandy!! Thank you so much for loving it!
Oh ya..I am gonna read ur update now!
*runs off*
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Raingoddess

This was so intense! I wish the show had a scene like this!!! Well not really the alter ego...its nicer to read than watch lol tho two kvbs wud be hawt lmao but i mean the self confession and break down! Its amazing!!!



Thank you!! Thank you so so much!
I know even I want a scene like this, the fight with his innerself, trying to suppress all the feelings still not able to! Love that intensity that evokes! Hot!
Lol thats true, reading gives more feels ya know? 😆 And yes! Two KVBs! Woohoo!! Hotter than hot! ;)
Thank you so much again for such lovely comment! :D
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: suds.

rtgkrs

YASS IM ON THE PAGE!!!


NOOO

WHY IS MY BB SAD IN FICTION TOO???

I like the title tho.

She. Is. Mine.

Aahil is a very possessive mofo isn't he.

mmm.

SANAM IT IS HURTING HIM YOU STUPIDLY SMART AND BEAUTIFUL WOMAN CAN YOU NOT SEE HOW DAMAGED MY BAE IS PLS GIVE HIM LOVE SHOWER HIM WITH LOVE HE NEEDS IT MORE THAN REHAAN.

@the bold.

HOLD DA f**k UP

SO MANY FEELINGS

SO MANY

FEELINGS

HOW DO YOU DO THIS

I ONLY JUST RECOVERED FROM YOUR POEM THING

STOP DOING THIS

NO ACTUAL KEEP GOING

THIS IS BEAUTIFUL

/SHE COMPLETES HIM/

UGHHH FEEELIINGSS.

He broke down my bb why?

Well I can guess why but.

BB NO DON'T CRY

THIS IS BEAUTIFUL.


Dude!! When are you gonna update?! WHEN?!
Okay.now. Well he wakes up the sadist in me! 🤣 I love making him so helpless and broken and stuff..
Ah yes the title. SHE IS HIS PERIOD
Way too possessive and obsessive over his Mrs. Dumbass! 😆
I know! Why is she doing this to my baby! He is so hurt! :'( Can't she see those eyes.
THOSE EYES though. <3
Ah. Well. I needed him to atleast self confess, I wanted that angst which I so wanna see in the real confession. So I just made it like this. I love angst!! @#%$#^$%^%&^*&(%
SHE COMPLETES HIM in ways he even doesn't know <3

Thank you!! Thank you so much my Sarru sweetheart! I love you!
And you need to update it!! Hugs! <3
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Prags_Sociopath


Dude!! When are you gonna update?! WHEN?!
Okay.now. Well he wakes up the sadist in me! 🤣 I love making him so helpless and broken and stuff..
Ah yes the title. SHE IS HIS PERIOD
Way too possessive and obsessive over his Mrs. Dumbass! 😆
I know! Why is she doing this to my baby! He is so hurt! :'( Can't she see those eyes.
THOSE EYES though. <3
Ah. Well. I needed him to atleast self confess, I wanted that angst which I so wanna see in the real confession. So I just made it like this. I love angst!! @#%$#^$%^%&^*&(%
SHE COMPLETES HIM in ways he even doesn't know <3

Thank you!! Thank you so much my Sarru sweetheart! I love you!
And you need to update it!! Hugs! <3


I'm in England rn, but I'm gonna be back at the start of September, so yeah. Maybe then ill update 🤣

THE SADIST IN YOU IS THE BEST AS WELL THE WORST THING.

I CRY SO MUCH AT YOUR STUFF.

Those whiskey eyes. I wanna eat him up.

You wanted to see that angst? You saw that angst and made everyone see that angst and cry.

I LOVE YOU TOO *HUGS*


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Posted: 11 years ago
Res. :(


Pragzzyyy sweety. I am soo sorry. Seems like I am gonna spend my weekends apologizing. I missed this and all your episodes reviews. I still have to watch last three episodes. Will comment after watching all three.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: TVD-IANcrazy

Res. :(


Pragzzyyy sweety. I am soo sorry. Seems like I am gonna spend my weekends apologizing. I missed this and all your episodes reviews. I still have to watch last three episodes. Will comment after watching all three.


Aaloo!! I miss you babe!! :( Miss talking with you! Its okay!! No need to apologise. But I guess you should 😆 No I mean, first I think you should apologise and then you say like I should apologise so I just don't feel like that you should! Lol. WHAT THE HELL WAS EVEN THAT!? 🤣
I''ll be waiting for the comments though. Episode ones, need not bother.. But on THIS?! I NEED! 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: suds.


I'm in England rn, but I'm gonna be back at the start of September, so yeah. Maybe then ill update 🤣

THE SADIST IN YOU IS THE BEST AS WELL THE WORST THING.

I CRY SO MUCH AT YOUR STUFF.

Those whiskey eyes. I wanna eat him up.

You wanted to see that angst? You saw that angst and made everyone see that angst and cry.

I LOVE YOU TOO *HUGS*



Man! Don't cry! Okay, If you want and feel like crying, then cry 🤣
Yeah okay. You just update that, I don't care when and how and stuff. Lol.
I wanna eat him up too! He is DARN DELICIOUS! $^$&%$^#^&*%*^&*^&86
Okay. Cry all you want then I'll keep giving crying stuff 🤣
Love you more! <3

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