asya ss:kahani pyar ki( last part on page 138)) - Page 2

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It's interesting
Continue soon plz

Interesting.

Sorry for making u guys wait here is the next chapter.thank you soo much for ur likes.
Chapter 3
Location:zoya's room.
Zoya is very nervous with her sudden marriage her best friend asiya and shazia(her 3rd mami loves zoya truly)are trying to cool her down.
Zoya:mami Maine Sach mein mariam baji ki madat nahi ki bhag ne mein phir nanabba mujhe yeh saza kyun de rahe hain .woh toh hamesha meri baat mante hain phir aaj kyun nahi mani says zoya sobbingly.
Asiya and shazia feel helpless but dey know tat siddique Saab would always think about zoya's well being if he has chosen asad for her he must have solid reason behind it.
Shazia(zoya's mami ):zoya idhar dekho tum jaanti ho na ki abba jaan kabhi tumare liye kuch ghalat nahi sochenge *zoya nods innocently*phir bharosa rahko bacha woh yeh sab tumhare bhale ke liye Kar rahe hain.
Zoya:par mami...
Asiya:uff ho zoya tu jaanti hain tere hone wale shauhar India ke eligible bachelors mein se ek hain.hain Allah kya mast dikhtey hain MashaAllah tere toh kismat khul gayi meri jaan says asiya trying to cheer zoya up.ab chal jaake yeh shadi ka joda pehenke aa tujhe tayyar bhi karna hain maulvi Saab nikah ke liye bulate honge.
Zoya goes to wear her bridal dress.meanwhile shazia and asiya are worried about zoya as to how will she cope up with this marriage,becoz she is very naive and doesn't even know tat a man and wife share physical relation also.
Asiya:mami zoya sab kaise sambhalegi,woh to shadi ke kai sare pehlu se anjaan hain says asiya nervously.
Shazia:hame bhi wohi darr hain ki zoya toh ek aadmi aur aurat ke rishtey se ek dam anjaan hain kahin yeh uski shadi shuda zindagi mein problem na banjaye.
Asiya:mami hum koshish kartey hain usse samjhane ki .
Shazia nods meanwhile zoya comes out wearing her gold and cream color lehenga looking like a princess.
Zoya(irritatingly):mami yeh chub raha hain dekho na aur kitna bhari bhi hain says zoya on verge of crying.
Shazia:arre mera bacha dekh to kitna sundar lag raha hain yeh joda tujh par Pari lag rahi hain hamari zoya.shazia kisses her forehead lovingly.
Asiya:tujhe toh princess from fairytale bahut ache lagte the na dekh princess banne ke liye kitni mehnat lagti hain pata Chaka ab.says asiya teasingly.
Zoya:jaa tu yahan se mujhe pareshaan mat kar pouts zoya angrily .
Acha ab bas karo zoya asiya chalo zoya ko tayyar karne mein meri madat kar .
Shazia while making zoya ready:dekh zoya shauhar ki har baat maanna har biwi ka farz hota hain.
Asiya:haan agar shauhar kahe din ko raat toh tujhe maan na hoga asiya says teasingly but zoya takes it seriously and shouts.
Zoya:kyun??kya woh andhe hain ya phir pagal toh nahi is liye mariam baji bhag gayi says zoya nervously imagining her would be husband.
Shazia and asiya stare at her confusingly as to why she is behaving like this.
Shazia:kya bol rahi hain tu zoya asad miya na toh pagal hain na hi andhe.
Zoya:phir woh din ko raat kyun bolengey mami aisa toh sirf andhe ya pagal log bolte hain na .says zoya innocently.
Asiya feels like banging her head sum where dis girl is impossible same is the pridaciment of shazia.
Asiya:mera matlab tha zoya ki shauhar ki harr baat biwi ko maan ni chahiye is liye mai yeh example de rahi thi buddhu.ab chal tayyar hoja bulawa ata hoga.
Zoya sits in front of dresser still confused about asiya's words.shazia and asiya sigh thinking and hoping tat she doesn't ask these kinds of things in front of asad otherwise it will be very embarrassing.

The plot seems nice but zoya shud be a lil more mature. She is 19 not 15. Dsnt matter how protected she was every person by the age of 19 matures automatically. So i hope u keep that in mind next time. Update soon.

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NOTE:I can understand tat its difficult to digest tat in today's world where Der is soo much exposure about physical aspect of relationship its difficult to be unknown to such feelings but it happens I myself is an example of it I dint knew tat a man and women share such an intimate relationship until I was 20 its possible bcoz in my houz v hav never been exposed to any kind of physical intimacy as its considered forbidden in many Muslim families,mine being one so its on experience I am writing its a fact not just any liberty I am taking as a writer .zoya has been to girls school and colg for entire life.never had friends who would give her such info she is completely unaware of her outside surroundings wich the biggest challenge to asya's relationship in future.to understand zoya's character u need to keep this I'm mind.I hope its clear now if u have any doubts u can ask.
Thanks for ur comments.

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Originally posted by: farru786

NOTE:I can understand tat its difficult to digest tat in today's world where Der is soo much exposure about physical aspect of relationship its difficult to be unknown to such feelings but it happens I myself is an example of it I dint knew tat a man and women share such an intimate relationship until I was 20 its possible bcoz in my houz v hav never been exposed to any kind of physical intimacy as its considered forbidden in many Muslim families,mine being one so its on experience I am writing its a fact not just any liberty I am taking as a writer .zoya has been to girls school and colg for entire life.never had friends who would give her such info she is completely unaware of her outside surroundings wich the biggest challenge to asya's relationship in future.to understand zoya's character u need to keep this I'm mind.I hope its clear now if u have any doubts u can ask.
Thanks for ur comments.

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