SantaClaus &Tooth Fairy-FF,Chapt 16 updated,(23/7) PG 70 - Page 47

Originally posted by: kaussar

Thank you Linsie... yea Asad is comfortable around Zoya and he started to listen to Zoya as well.
Yea Zoya sees herself in Naina and thats why she understands Naina well.😃

Originally posted by: kaussar

yea Asad is drawn towards Zoya, but he didn't realize it yet.. and even Zoya has feelings towards him.. she keeps looking out for him and wondering about his feelings but even she does not realize why she is doing it... lets see how things goes..
thanks for the comment Linsie... really appreciate it that you read and give comments and reviews for each chapter this way.😃

Originally posted by: kaussar

thanks Linsie.😃.. glad you loved the update..
PS.. i see that you are going to be inactive from today.. very sad.. are you having exams or something?

Originally posted by: aarzoo50

hi...
m late again... but kya karu my examz r going on... so...
hope next update wont b on the days js 1day b4 my exams... being selfish... lol

hi Arzoo... don't worry about being late... exams are more important... hope its going well
abt the update...
hv i ever told u how much i love ua long updates...
it was a wonderful update...
Thank you Dear.. i know you all love long updates.. thats why give them.
so two weeks it has been that zoya being busy in her assignment could not spend quality time vd her lovable neighbours...
n now being free the first thing she finds herself doing is paying them the visit...
she spend tym vd dilshaad. ..
Yea how can Zoya stay away from them if she is free?
dinner was their usual self... n as for asad... it was also his usual self... nai??
so they r gonna spend a sunday out at water park... everyone is joyous but Mr. Mood spoiler... is not coming...
hehe yea he really spoiled everyone's mood.
naina became upset...
n zoya bechari concerned abt both asad n naina...
she wanted to talk to him... but asad is not giving her the way...
but now finally... she finds the opportunity n goes ahead although being hesitant...
a straight question put forward..
asad tried to dodge... rudely telling her that she wont get it as her lyf has been bed of roses...
n zoya being hurt n while telling him abt her difficult lyf blurts out that she knows abt tanveer but then feels guilty thinking abt dilshaad n asads rxn to this fact...
Yea they both brought each others insecurities out.. and both did not know things about the other's past so did not know that the other will understand.
n asad on the other side is surprised n cant help but think abt her goodness...
asad although reluctantly but finally confides in her his inner turmoil... the truth that he had neva shared vd anyone...
loved their whole convo in garden n then in asads room...
it was beautifully written...
Thank you.😃
zoya understanding him... asks him to clear his doubts...
she makes him understand that if naina is proved not to b his daughter he doesnt hv much to lose... as deep down he has somewhat accepted n faced the pain it vl cause but if naina comes out to b his part only then thereaftr lyf wud b nothing but bliss fr him as well as naina...
n he got the point...
yea Zoya was wise and understanding... and luckily Asad believed her. now lets see how they go about it... tell me onething.. do you want naina to be his daughter or do you want it to be other way?
asad accompanied zoya to her house...
i so much loved their last look to each other...
they felt something.. they are now drawn towards each other.
continue soon

Originally posted by: potternerd

Beautiful update 👏

Finally asad confined in somebody !!!! 😊

His burden has considerably reduced 😊

Loved how zoya understood him and pacified him 😊

He goes to drop her home how cute 😳

Ha when will they come together😳

Originally posted by: neenabinu

superb update kaussar
loved it
the convo between them was lovely

Originally posted by: life4me

Beautiful update. Continue soon please.

Originally posted by: anopama

nice update
so asad back to his akdu self in his shell
oh he is not going to go to the water park
but zoya is not leaving him alone it is time he talk of gt a dose of zoya farooqui
haha he told her she had a beautiful life if only he knew
and so she decides to let him know y he is connected to naina she knows how she feels 😭
he is surprised and then when zoya blurted about tanveer
she was waiting for his wrath but it didnt came he did kind of change
so he decides to not hide the truth anymore
knew zoya was gonna tell him find the truth out
but he is afraid he still live with a little hope but the truth can change everything
but what zoya say is true the truth will set him free he can love naina as his daughter without
any fear and if she is not his he can love her as an innocent little girl just like a daughter
oh he walks her home something have definitely change with them
continue

Originally posted by: jazsidhu

its beautifull n amazing...

luv it...

fabulous...

asad told zoya about his confusion...

asad knows zoya now about tanveer...

luv the way hw asad n zoya comfort each other...

asad walk zoya home n their relationship is taking a new turn...

eagerly waiting for the next part...

thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...