SantaClaus &Tooth Fairy-FF,Chapt 16 updated,(23/7) PG 70 - Page 48

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Posted: 11 years ago
hey dear!!!
i am reading this for the first time n i really liked the story...
though i didn't like the mid part much that revealed asad's past...n u said tanveer wasn't a prostitute or criminal...but i guess she is not even something less than that...
both asad n zoya had sad past...but i love ur grown up zoya!
u penned this too well...
n i am looking forward to read about the changed equation between asya...
n want more naina...i seriously wish that she's asad's daughter ...
continue soon
pm me...i am sending u a buddy request!
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Posted: 11 years ago
i want naina to b asads daughter...
js bcz of a doubt that naina may not b his daughter he is nt able to love her the way a father should... n if it comes out to b the truth thn he wud b shattered... may b he wud begin to hate her...
if she is proven to b asads daughter... thn... although... asad wud feel guilty fr keeping naina away from him all these years but thn he vl feel secure ... n defo make up for the lost tym...
rest wteva u lyk u can put up yara... aftrall its ua story n u ll proceed it thoughtfully...
Edited by aarzoo50 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Linsie


Both have sadness in their life... which connect their feeling...
waiting for them to realize the change of heart...

you are welcome😆 🤗

yea they are some ways very much alike and have similar pasts.. but they didn't realize it as the did not know each other.. but now they have shared some things and know each other better.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Linsie

😃 😃 😃 my much waited holiday...
still i am...just find time to read some updates...

thats so nice... i wish i could go on a holiday too... but don't know when i can... enjoy yourself.😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
hehe... in some ways even i wish Naina is not Asad's daughter.. but in some ways she should be... and as i said earlier i haven't yet decided which route to take... its really a tough decision for me also... but will do whats best for overa ll plot of the story and Naina.😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-

hey dear!!!
i am reading this for the first time n i really liked the story...
though i didn't like the mid part much that revealed asad's past...n u said tanveer wasn't a prostitute or criminal...but i guess she is not even something less than that...
both asad n zoya had sad past...but i love ur grown up zoya!
u penned this too well...
n i am looking forward to read about the changed equation between asya...
n want more naina...i seriously wish that she's asad's daughter ...
continue soon
pm me...i am sending u a buddy request!

Hi.. thanks Dear.😃.. i am really very happy to know that you started following this story and liked it.

Hehe yea Tanveer was really cheap and in a way no less... i agree with you.😆
yea AsYa's equation is changing and they will become closer in the upcoming updates.
have accepted your request... will PM you from next update.
thank again.😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
will try to update soon.. i know its already very late... but i try to give long updates as i myself don't like reading small updates of stories... so thats one reason why it gets delayed..hope you understand 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kaussar


yea i guess its mostly Zoya's point of view... but thats because of the way story is unfolding and because of character differences... Asad is reserved and living with a lot of emotional baggage which he did not want to share with anyone till now... so Asad is not very proactive in the story so far where as Zoya is and it is Zoya who is bringing out Asad from where he is hiding... thats the reason why its mostly through Zoya you are seeing things.. but whenever appropriate i have brought out Asad's feelings as well... like in last chapter, in the moonlight scene and what followed it was mostly Asad's feelings and his point of view regarding Zoya..

And later after Asad really falls for Zoya and becomes more proactive, Asad's point of view will be there more... hope you understand what i mean.😊



yes the last update..get to see little glimps of asad pov...
ya .. he is quiet damage person...
but i love zoya she is more strong compare to asad...
since i think ... zoya is more hurt then asad... coz
asad just for years...
but zoya since birth... until now...

yes waiting ...when the time comes about asad pov... about zoya...👏
thanks 😃 😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

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