#KSG4ASAD Kabhi/Asya SS:INHIBITIONS(part 4 updated 23/3/14)

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: elenaa

omg...the moment i started reading i thought i did something wrong😭

u totally scared me...thank youuu for not breaking my heart🤗❤️

hey hun...Come on..have a lil faith..y would I break ur heart...Mujhe to sach mein kaafi interesting story line lagi..so ya...now m gonna jump to the next comment...for ur new ch...😃

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Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Wah ji Wah...getting very very interesting..n making me very curious to know whats gonna happen...So Inhibited🤓..Hmm makes me wonder😲...cool..roles r a bit diff...Zoya's a lil diff..Asad..lets c...so gal..get ur exams done soon..n keep writing..ur doin a gr8 job..😃

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Mahima

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Sorry for the late comment but I have been busy!

But Zoya cut him across," THE WORD 'MISTAKE' DOESNT EXIST IN MY DICTIONARY! You know that very well!So ensure that it is not repeated again!"

wow... Zoya is really something... I am loving her here ❤️

"Beta I know you are not feeling well.Just relax mere bacche,sab kuch thik hai.You dont have to worry."

Zoya's mom is so sweet and I hope Zoya is ok 😃

While Zoya was awake all night in order to distract herself from her own thoughts, Asad slept peacefully after having spoken to his younger sister, Najma.

They are really different 👍🏼

Your writing style is flawless

Awesome work

luv ya

Mahi

Edited by --Mahima-- - 11 years ago

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Asya_Maaneet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

OMG! I'm loving this! 👏

Zoya is like Asad's carbon copy! 😆

Mr. Asad Ahmed Khan has finally met his match! 😉

I can't wait to read more! Please update soon! 😊

Fabulous job! 👍🏼

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Natasha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: Rarepearl
Oh wow, Is Zoe Asad's carbon copy here? Really nice part. So here Zoe isn't an orphan, good, but she does have a past that's hurting so much.
For Asad he seemed really calm & at peace at home. I mean there was temper no tensions, well that's good I guess.

Waiting for your exams to end & am glad you wrote a bit more.

Lots of Love & best of Luck for your exams,

Nim.

yup asad is kinda like zoya! lets see:)

Thank you for the wishes:)))

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Natasha

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Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: pwenCezz_symrun
lovely!! Zoya is behaving like a Akdu..😆 here her name shud be Akdu Siddique..😆 amazing update it was..update sooon

hahahahah yes she is! I like the name akdu sidique!:D

will be updating soon!

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Natasha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: Linsie
this is purely angry zoya..😡

yess!!!

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Natasha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: Linsie
Asad is like fun guy enjoying himself...

what dark secret zoya holding...

continue soon...

I will update soon!

Thank youu Linsie:)

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Natasha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: akaswan
<font color="#990066">Good udapte continue soon😃</font>

will update soon!:)

Just saw ur pm of your story! will read soon:)

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Natasha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: Ani-asya
Wow its really awesome update yaar..
Zoya in angry mood..
Glad to see her like akdu..
Akdu zoya / calm asad
Do ur exam well..
I loved this part..
Good luck 👍🏼