#KSG4ASAD Kabhi/Asya SS:INHIBITIONS(part 4 updated 23/3/14) - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: surbhiholic

interesting.. continue soon


Originally posted by: akaswan

Sound very nice continue soon please 😃




Originally posted by: pwenCezz_symrun

it really sounds interesting..plz continue ASAP



thank you so much😃 i will definitely continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: --Mahima--

omg!

I am in love with this already

Brilliant start

I am not saying this because you are a friend but cause you are a great writer

Suspense has been built up right from the start

The characters of both have been made clear


continue as soon as you can ❤️


Mahi! you always make me so very happy by reading your comment🤗 i love you!❤️

thank you so very much😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: aashiqua

brilliant start..u should definitely cntinue..pm me plz


thank you! i will😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: nilusoni

very interesting

plzzz pm me for next part
continue soon


thank you😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I LOVE YOU TOO!
Edited by elenaa - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
RES

Wohooo!!! Another peice of writing from you! YAYA!!!!!
Will comment from laptop properly! K?
<3<3<3

Unres-

Aah! HELLO Behna!!!!!!!🤗 Oh Gawwwd it seems like Ages!😃 I Missed you!😭

And Big wala SORRY For returning back so late but now here I am!😃

Lets talk about part one-

Firstly di what an AMAZING Title! You have a thing with AWESOME Titles don't you?👍🏼⭐️

With her waist length hair left loose and dressed in a formal black skirt and white blouse, Zoya Sidique was intently looking out through the window that overlooked a garden.She was admiring the beauty of the green garden.Water was flowing from a beautiful fountain in the center of the garden.It was surrounded by short bushes.Overall the garden had a soothing effect on anyone who looked at it and Zoya Sidique was no exception as the garden seemed to calm her senses too.

Amazing description of the surroundings...gives you a fresh feeling!👏

Zoya:Bloody hell! what is all this Mr Sharma! I have been waiting here for the past ten minutes.YOU had told me that the CEO of DILSHAAD CONSTRUCTIONS IS KNOWN FOR HIS PUNCTUALITY.then where the hell is he.you are very much aware of the fact tat I dont like to be kept waiting...

Oooh! Zoya is a total firebrand haan!😉 And THE ASAD AHMED KHAN Late? Am I dreaming???😆

He just shrugged his shoulders and walked towards his seat passing by Zoya in the process.

Arrey Asad is a meanie!😕

Zoya loathed being addressed as Miss Zoya because it reminded her of her dreadful past.She turned around fuming visibly.

Miss Zoya?! Dreadful past...a hint of mystery involved! I LOVE it!👏

Also I love A-Z'S Banter! Yeh dono ladna kabhi band nahin kar sakte naa

And Boy! Did I love Zoe brushing off Asad like that or what???😆

A W E S O M E!

"True to her reputation, she is the Queen Of Arrogance but she does not know who I AM,"Asad thought smirking and sat down again on his chair to start with his routine work.

Poor Asad! Love the fact that Zoe is strong and in the story she is the dominating one!😳😃

Lovely start Di! 👍🏼I am wondering why is the story called INHIBITIONS...Absolutely love the characters...and flawlessly written! I just love fights between pairs! Really...love it more than I love romance! Well that's the sadist me!😆

You are an A M A Z I N G writer di and it shows in the way you write!👏

LOVE YOU! And I terribly missed you!❤️😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: McdreamyKSG

RES

Wohooo!!! Another peice of writing from you! YAYA!!!!!
Will comment from laptop properly! K?
<3<3<3


yes ofcourse😃

im surprised tum yahaan kaise????bacha arent u supposed to be studyinggg???😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ani-asya

Wow yaar its great start.. Interesting too..
Continue soon


thank you😳🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: Linsie

wow 👏
interesting...


thank you😉

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