#KSG4ASAD Kabhi/Asya SS:INHIBITIONS(part 4 updated 23/3/14)

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Simran Bhandary

@pwenCezz_symrun

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

superb update..

ahaan!! Zoya is being Akdu here..loved it..

continue soon!!

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#52

I am going to recommend this story to all my readers, Natasha

You my friend are an exceptionally brilliant writer

Your story has just started so won't say about the storyline so much but of course your style is something which I am a fan of

Asad opened his arms even wider and mischievously took another step towards Dilshaad.

I loved Asad in this scene.. He was so cute 😳

He had expected them to have resumed their work after greeting him instead the women were drooling over him and the men were whispering while looking at him.He turned around cleared his throat to gain everyone's attention especially the female staff. Everyone quickly got back to their respective work as Asad entered his cabin.

The A.A.K effect is well potrayed.. hats off to you 👏

Asad took a sip from the steaming cup of coffee and kept it back on the table enjoying the taste of what he just drank.

Lines like this make me love your story... a simple line and let beautifully written 👍🏼

"Ohh! Im so sorry Nikhat yaar.i was...I was actually thinking that if a relationship exists between x and y such that 2x+3y=5 and range of x is 6 then what will be the..."

Humeira is so amazing here... I am in love with her character ❤️

"Humie is like that only Nikhat as if her Baji will hang her for not studying and scoring well.Waise you never know she can do that as well,"Ayaan said laughing.

With tears in her eyes Humeira stood up and picked her books.

This scene made me tear up too 😭

As Asad shook hands with Zoya, he felt a jolt of electricity course through him.He immediately looked up to meet Zoya's gaze thinking that she would have experienced the same.Instead her eyes reflected various emotions that he obviously couldnt comprehend.

Wow... pehla nasha pehla khumar

"But i feel so that we should so why not...Havent you heard of the saying that 'Too many cooks spoil the broth', Mr Khan?"

"And havent you heard that 'You can always plan a pretty picnic but not predict the future',Miss Sidique."

sayings are my personal favourite... I love them a lot ⭐️

Asad who again felt something as his fingers momentarily touched Zoya's. Without thinking twice he asked for the same pen that Zoya was still holding so as to experience that strange feeling again.Zoya raised an eyebrow and looked towards the pen stand that was kept on the table and was very near to where Asad's hand lay on the desk.Asad's eyes followed Zoya's and he sheepishly picked up a random pen from the stand and signed the papers.Asad extended his hand forward.

omg... another scene that made me grin like a cheshire cat 😃

"Ahaan...I get it...tit for tat Miss Sidique,"Asad thought,"It will really be interesting to work with you and bring down your ego."

and it will be interesting to read how it is done 😎

Update soon

🤗

luv

Mahi

Edited by --Mahima-- - 11 years ago

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shreya mehra

@shreya11mehra

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

amazing dear..

zoya is so introvert..n asad is cool...

totally opposite frm qh..

quite interesting

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Anitha

@-Anitha-

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

I hope ur exams were good...
So so cute update dear buddy...👏
Zoya(miss sidique) as asad(mr khan) carbon copy❤️
Excited to know see asya working together..
Asad felt a jolt of electricitycourse through him😳 - while im reading this it remind my favrite movie magadeera❤️
So cutely written dear👏
Plus this scene.👏
Havent you heard of the saying that 'Too many cooks spoil the broth', Mr Khan?"😃
"And havent you heard that 'You can always plan a pretty picnic but not predict the future',Miss Sidique."😃
Cute tit for tat moment also..
this update was perfect overloaded update..👏
Continue soon dear buddy..
👏 👏 👏

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Anitha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

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-StarsLinedUp-

@-StarsLinedUp-

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#56

WELCOME BACK GAL🥳...hope ur exam went well...Res for now..will comment soon😉

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mhd72

@mhd72

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Posted: 11 years ago

#57

NYC... 😊
Would be interesting to read about akdu Zoya and cool Asad.
😉
Update soon...

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McdreamyKSG

@McdreamyKSG

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#58

Res!

I am so Late!

Unres-

Hello Again! I Have Fallen in love with your story honey! Office stories I love!🤗

So ch 2 haan...😃

First of all I love the way you are developing Zoya's character👏...she is strong, independent and driven! Love her!❤️

But Zoya cut him across," THE WORD 'MISTAKE' DOESNT EXIST IN MY DICTIONARY! You know that very well!So ensure that it is not repeated again!"

OMG! Yeh tho shernii nikli! Why do I see Asad in Zoya mann!😆

Zoya sure is an interesting character here..👍🏼

"Ammi, its only been a week that Najma got married and im missing her already."Asad said as a lone tear escaped his eye.

Awwieee my baby Asad is too cute yaar!😳

After Zoya ordered her housekeeper, Aisha, an elderly woman, that she wont have dinner today, she directly headed towards her room.She closed her bedroom door and leaned against it ,her back pressed towards it.She had tried to focus on her work all day and stay at her office as long as possible but now that she was alone, beads of sweat started forming on her forehead as the memories of her dreadful past came rushing back to her.She slowly slid down the door till her body hit the floor.She started shaking visibly and her vision blurred.She covered her face with both her hands, her phone falling down in the process.She dint know for how long she sat there.

Oh my! Akhir yeh PAST Hai kya?😲 WOW di...the above lines prove how amazing you are at writing about complex emotions...Claps for you hun!👏

"Zoya, beta, are you all right?"Zeenat asked in a concerned voice.

"Yesss a...ammi" Zoya tried to say it as camly as possible but failed miserably.

Oh tho Zeenat is her Ammi here...you know I had this impression that her parents are dead and that's why she is all reserved and strict but it looks like there is something greater to it...😲

While Zoya was awake all night in order to distract herself from her own thoughts, Asad slept peacefully after having spoken to his younger sister, Najma.

Love how you have shown the contrast between their lives...😃.

AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME Part! Enjoyed it magar thoda lamba hota tho kitna accha hota nahin?😉 Ok ok...I know you had exams! Just Kidding!😆

Love you sishterrr! Keep writing and stay AWESOME!

A BIg wala hug!🤗

Edited by McdreamyKSG - 11 years ago