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Shivanya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#161

hey..dat was amazing n great update as usual..do continue soon n pm me

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Gulaabo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#162

how can you write so flawless!!!
i loved the update...but can your asad do anything else than being angry.???
najma-zoya duo...fun to read...i hope they solve the mystery!!!
continue soon

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Zanutix

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Posted: 11 years ago

#163

Oh my God!

I am in love with this story!

It has got everything - drama, mystery, humor, along with a pinch of romance!

Although it isn't AsYa-centric, you just nail it!

You are an amazing storyteller!

You gave us a smitten Zoya and Najma, angry Asad, the always caring Ammi/Phuppi, detective Najma and Zoya, and a chocolate boy Rohan!

Can't wait for the next update!

Why is December 9th so far!

Please do update soon!

~ An overly insane stalker!

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lourel24

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Posted: 11 years ago

#164

it was just awesome.update soon

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akaswan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#165

Great part continue soon please 😃

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Nitya Suresh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#166

Awesome... :)

Najma is so cute... Always there for Zoya... :)

Zoya's patience is wearing off... So fast... Hope Asad realizes soon..

Rohan is one mysterious guy... He is a celebrity and still nobody could locate him...

Great update... Looking forward to next update... Would be waiting for long though... :)

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Waqt Zaya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#167

Dilshad's in trouble! Oh No Zoya run to save your skin now. Enjoy your holidays Paly!

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jazsidhu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#168

hey tis is superb...

luv it...

hopefully zoya n najma will solve this mystery n asad will help them out...

very interesting...

thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...

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Gulaabo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#169

Originally posted by: PalyGirl

i am eagerly waiting for next part...i love this genre!!!

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Linsie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#170

New team .. zoya and najma...

so cute... when some call najma and zoya beautiful
daughters of dilshad...

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