FF: All the Right Moves - Chapter 14, page 129 - COMPLETE

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lover1998

@lover1998

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Posted: 11 years ago

#151

Great update. I enjoyed reading it even though it didn't have any romance scenes :) oh and Happy Early Thanksgiving from your neighbours up North. :)

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ChocoBerry

@ChocoBerry

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#152

Nice update. Please update soon n pm me for the next part too.

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zoyaah

@zoyaah

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Posted: 11 years ago

#153

so good

i like it

tnx for the good update

continue soon

pm me if it's possible

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Linsie

@Linsie

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#154

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rajnid68

@rajnid68

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Posted: 11 years ago

#155

Kya bath hai..

Zoya and najma...both in the detective mode...

Zoya senses alert...najma too perking up...

Asad not liking rohans presence at all..

Hope the girls get a clue...

And dont let the khans into trouble...

Thanks for this awesome update and for pm..

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anopama

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#156

nancy drew and veronica mars
loving it
continue plz

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Ayesha

@Aye12345

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Posted: 11 years ago

#157

Woohoo!! I LOVE it!! Najma and Zoya are GREAT spies!! I really hope they find out what's going on; i'm confused as well as intrigued to know what on earth Rohan is up to. But, i guess that's the whole point of the story, isn't it?! Thank you for this WONDERFUL update and the pm. I hope you can update soon, but there's no rush. Happy thanksgiving in advance... lots of love.xxx

Edited by Aye12345 - 11 years ago