FF: All the Right Moves - Chapter 14, page 129 - COMPLETE

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Miss-Appy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#181

Love it 😳
Cant wait to read more 😉

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Sana Quraishi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#182

Mindblowing update.. Fabulas work pls keep pm ing me..thank u

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"I'm not sure but we'll find a way. You know Zoya Farooqui can do anything." Zoya's voice is also heavy but her eyes are dark and determined, flashing fire. "I won't allow anyone to hurt our family."

Her voice rings around the silent room, echoing her vow straight up to the heavens.

^First things first, WOW. 😲 Talk about a powerful ending statement! 👏 👏 👏 I loved your entire update, but this line really stood out for me. 👍🏼 Great job! 😳

Anyways, OMG, it looks Najma and Zoe are teaming up to solve this mystery. And they're determined to make sure that nothing happens to the family! Love them! 😉

Can't wait for the next update, so continue soon! 😉 It's very interesting! 😃

-Fari. 😳 ❤️

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Anjali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#184

i just read web of lies and this story

super love the mystery build up that u have given

can u please add me in PM list

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nazali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#185

Please update dear...been stalking your page for quite a while now...hehehe

Thanks!

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Dee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#186

I been so busy these days.. More over, I have been placed finally and just joined my new firm so well I am settling in the new place and city. More over, I have exams and office both in hand and I am going crazy...🤢 To top it I have no net access over here.. And, when I have access to net the speed is so fast that I have no words to describe it...😆

After a long time I got to read something so fresh. Yeap fresh because your ideas are so different and new... I love them.. And the mysterious way you take your story ahead.. its just fabulous... I am just loving it...

Would just say continue soon. And, please keep me updated about the chapters and the story. I may not comment for days but its not like I am not reading it... Please don't discard me from your PM list...

Dee

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PalyGirl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#187

Originally posted by: nazali
Please update dear...been stalking your page for quite a while now...hehehe

Thanks!

I will update next Monday morning, 9-December, New York time. We had our Thanksgiving holiday in the US last weekend so I didn't have time to write.

Thank you for keeping up with this story!

Paly

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PalyGirl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#188

Originally posted by: Enchantress
I been so busy these days.. More over, I have been placed finally and just joined my new firm so well I am settling in the new place and city. More over, I have exams and office both in hand and I am going crazy...🤢 To top it I have no net access over here.. And, when I have access to net the speed is so fast that I have no words to describe it...😆

After a long time I got to read something so fresh. Yeap fresh because your ideas are so different and new... I love them.. And the mysterious way you take your story ahead.. its just fabulous... I am just loving it...

Would just say continue soon. And, please keep me updated about the chapters and the story. I may not comment for days but its not like I am not reading it... Please don't discard me from your PM list...

Dee

Dee,

Wow - you sure do have a lot going on. Now the holidays are coming and things will just get busier. Congratulations on your new job, your new city and your new place. Good luck with your upcoming exams.

I hope you take some time to relax and rest. No worries, I won't remove you from my PM list unless you ask me to. I'm also counting on your wonderful feedback for my original story when you have time.

Take care of yourself!

Paly