TS: My Friend Fareed - Last part on pg 16 - Page 2

Loved it. Smiling all the way.

Plz write the other half soon. Its always a joy to read ur piece of writing. I could actually imagine the ladies with those expressions and their gestures and of course, Asad.

Originally posted by: me2you

Green ji!!!! Woohoo, yes yes yes yes yes yes! Sooo happy you are back 😃 I was already missing your stories, saach mein!

Allah ka lakh lakh shukur hai, I saw this one and what a great way to start off my morning

Mr. Jealous Ahmed Khan...am I in love with this man or what!

His ears would always become the subject of torture when they started swooning about clothes, hair, make up, cute animals or whatever else it is that they enjoy swooning about. But the absolutely worst was when they swooned about men he's never even heard of. There was nothing more irritating than that. (I loved this one. Hahaha, I could totally imagine his expressions and the irritation on his face)

If there was one person who could easily catch his lies (Jhoota kahin ka...hahaha, but its for a good cause)

he wanted to go for the sangeet just to see (And I want you to take me to that sangeet to read what will happen between Mr. Khan and Zoya)

I think its okay for me to assume that you got the last hint right?

If not let me tell and explain it to you again:

PLEASe, update soon! BAS.

You know I love your work and the way you tell all these stories. If you would not have come up with something soon, I would have stalked and spammed you like hell 😆

Thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I'm so happy to see you too me2you ji (: Hahaha because as usual, your comments leave a smile on my face (: I'll write the next part soon haha hopefully :p Then I'll take you to that sangeet too (:

Originally posted by: jasminerose

Plz write the other half soon. Its always a joy to read ur piece of writing. I could actually imagine the ladies with those expressions and their gestures and of course, Asad.

That was my intention, to bring to life the expressions and gestures I see in my head (: Glad you liked it!! (:

The moment I opened IF just now I saw tat u had posted a TS even before u sent pm...and believe me I was very happy 😃 🤗

coming to the TS...the jealous asad is the besttt asad ⭐️

poor guy always surrounded by women who are swooning over guys he doesn't even know 😆

evil u are...always living a cliffhanger 😈

im curious to mert fareed...update soon ⭐️

p.s if im not wrong this idea came to ur mind wen u wre planning for ur ff...tat means u r starting a neww ff soon...wooohoo 👏 🤗

Jealous Asad!! Just love the idea.. Do continue soon.. :)

perfect beginning

hey tis is amazing...