TS: My Friend Fareed - Last part on pg 16

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello (: Something I thought of while in the process of planning out the storyline for my next FF.

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My Friend Fareed: Part 1

"Phuphi aapko yaad hai, I was telling you that my friend Fareed from New York has come to India for his cousin's wedding? Toh kal sangeet par jaana hai mujhe," Zoya informed Dilshaad over the dinner table as she shifted the mattar paneer around on her plate disinterestedly. She'd just order some pizza later after Phuphi goes to sleep. She rolled her eyes as she heard Asad's grunt of obvious disapproval. She was talking to Phuphi anyway. He didn't need to butt in.

"Kal? That's strange, humein bhi sangeet ka invitation aaya hai, kal ka. Shabnam Bi's son is getting married," Dilshaad replied, as she lifted her glass to take a sip of water. Zoya frowned as she fell into deep thought, as if she was trying to recall something.

"If I remember correctly, Fareed had said that his cousin's name is Altaf. Is that Shabnam Bi's son's name as well?" Zoya asked, tapping her chin lightly. Dilshaad nodded slightly, unable to answer verbally because she'd just put another spoon of rice in her mouth. She didn't need to answer anyway since Najma was more than happy to do the honours.

"Jee! His name is Altaf. Aur woh kitna handsome hai Zoya! Aap kal dekhna. Too bad he's getting married. Accha so your friend Fareed is Altaf's cousin? Phir woh bhi good looking hi hoga na?" Najma gushed, balling her hands into fists and resting her chin on them as she drifted off into some sort of daydream.

Asad put his fork down loudly, in an attempt to put an end to the ridiculous conversation. This was one of the disadvantages of living in a house full of women. His ears would always become the subject of torture when they started swooning about clothes, hair, make up, cute animals or whatever else it is that they enjoy swooning about. But the absolutely worst was when they swooned about men he's never even heard of. There was nothing more irritating than that.

"Haan yaar Najma, woh bohut handsome hai. He's an absolute dreamboat. Jab tum kal dekhogi na..." Zoya began her swooning now, replicating Najma's tone and position as well. But she couldn't complete her sentence because Asad cut her off rudely, clearing his throat unnecessarily loudly.

"Haan hum sab kal sangeet pe yeh aadmi ko pehle milenge aur phir baat karenge uske baare mein. For now, can we all just have our dinner in peace?" Asad snapped, shooting a glare first at Najma and then Zoya. Najma complied easily, concentrating on finishing the food on her plate. On the other hand, Zoya simply returned his glare, all poised to retort.

"But Asad, abhi abhi dinner ke pehle jab maine poocha tha, tumne kaha tha that you won't be able to make it for the sangeet tomorrow. And now you're saying hum SAB...?" Dilshaad asked, frowning in confusion. She watched her son stare at his plate intently, his facial expression completely unreadable.

"Oh I thought you had said day after tomorrow. Kal toh main definitely aa sakta hoon," Asad replied calmly, without looking up at his confused mother. If there was one person who could easily catch his lies, it would be his mother. The truth was, he was under no misunderstanding from the very beginning. It was just that he had no interest in attending the sangeet ceremony of people he barely knew. But now, he wanted to go for the sangeet just to see what was so great about this Fareed person Zoya so proudly proclaimed as her friend.

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I realize I could easily have made this an OS instead of a TS, but half story post karne mein mazaa hi kuch aur hai :p Besides, I typed this much and then got lazy to continue hehe. I'll write the rest of it soon!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Jealous Asad is the best Asad !! 😆

Update sooner please 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Mr Khan is jeeelllyyy! 😆


Great start! (:
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Green ji!!!! Woohoo, yes yes yes yes yes yes! Sooo happy you are back 😃 I was already missing your stories, saach mein!
Allah ka lakh lakh shukur hai, I saw this one and what a great way to start off my morning

Mr. Jealous Ahmed Khan...am I in love with this man or what!
His ears would always become the subject of torture when they started swooning about clothes, hair, make up, cute animals or whatever else it is that they enjoy swooning about. But the absolutely worst was when they swooned about men he's never even heard of. There was nothing more irritating than that. (I loved this one. Hahaha, I could totally imagine his expressions and the irritation on his face)

If there was one person who could easily catch his lies (Jhoota kahin ka...hahaha, but its for a good cause)

he wanted to go for the sangeet just to see (And I want you to take me to that sangeet to read what will happen between Mr. Khan and Zoya)

I think its okay for me to assume that you got the last hint right?
If not let me tell and explain it to you again:
PLEASe, update soon! BAS.
You know I love your work and the way you tell all these stories. If you would not have come up with something soon, I would have stalked and spammed you like hell 😆

Thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Jealous Asad is the best Asad !!
Update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved it. Please update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ahan... I love this jealous Asad.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oooh interesting! Please continue soon, would love to see how this plays out!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I love a jealous Asad... waiting for the update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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First of all I am so sorry for being so late...i did see that you posted a TS but since i had to go out i just Resed and went out coz i wanted to read nd comment when i had time and with full concentration😃
ohk so my first reaction when i saw your TS my lips automatically curled into a huge smile and on my back all i was thinking was that when i reah home i have read your TS and comment so here I am😆kuch zyada hi bak bak ho gayi na😆
Aww zoya is so cute...she doesn't want to hurt dilshad by ordering pizza while she is awake😳
So everyone has to go to the same wedding some fate😆

"Jee! His name is Altaf. Aur woh kitna handsome hai Zoya! Aap kal dekhna. Too bad he's getting married. Accha so your friend Fareed is Altaf's cousin? Phir woh bhi good looking hi hoga na?" Najma gushed, balling her hands into fists and resting her chin on them as she drifted off into some sort of daydream.

OMG this was so cute...i could totally imagine najma going into her daydreaming mood...reminds me of the time when najma was daydreaming about fitting into her new lehanga😆
OMG poor asad...nothing irritates men more than women gushing and fangirling about other men😆i can totally see him rolling his eyes and pressing his temples🤣
"Haan yaar Najma, woh bohut handsome hai. He's an absolute dreamboat. Jab tum kal dekhogi na..." Zoya began her swooning now, replicating Najma's tone and position as well.
Zoya joined najma too...bechara asad do do ladkiyon ko aise gush and dream karte to pagal hi ho gaya hoga😆"dreamboat"😆
So the glare game between asad nd zoya...man i miss those in QH
I loved jealous asad...Mr.satyavadi aj kal jhoot bhi bolne lage hain zoya ke liye

You are evil hume ek aur part ke liye wait karwaogi😭well but you lived upto your name miss.cliffhanger...i can't wait to how asad behaves when najma nd zoya will gush over Fareed...it will be so much fun😆
Did i say already that it was amazing,mindblowing nd hilarious?😳
It was so good to see you...
love ya🤗
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