TS: My Friend Fareed - Last part on pg 16 - Page 4

Originally posted by: anushreemishra

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First of all I am so sorry for being so late...i did see that you posted a TS but since i had to go out i just Resed and went out coz i wanted to read nd comment when i had time and with full concentration😃

ohk so my first reaction when i saw your TS my lips automatically curled into a huge smile and on my back all i was thinking was that when i reah home i have read your TS and comment so here I am😆kuch zyada hi bak bak ho gayi na😆

Aww zoya is so cute...she doesn't want to hurt dilshad by ordering pizza while she is awake😳

So everyone has to go to the same wedding some fate😆

"Jee! His name is Altaf. Aur woh kitna handsome hai Zoya! Aap kal dekhna. Too bad he's getting married. Accha so your friend Fareed is Altaf's cousin? Phir woh bhi good looking hi hoga na?" Najma gushed, balling her hands into fists and resting her chin on them as she drifted off into some sort of daydream.

OMG this was so cute...i could totally imagine najma going into her daydreaming mood...reminds me of the time when najma was daydreaming about fitting into her new lehanga😆

OMG poor asad...nothing irritates men more than women gushing and fangirling about other men😆i can totally see him rolling his eyes and pressing his temples🤣

"Haan yaar Najma, woh bohut handsome hai. He's an absolute dreamboat. Jab tum kal dekhogi na..." Zoya began her swooning now, replicating Najma's tone and position as well.

Zoya joined najma too...bechara asad do do ladkiyon ko aise gush and dream karte to pagal hi ho gaya hoga😆"dreamboat"😆

So the glare game between asad nd zoya...man i miss those in QH

I loved jealous asad...Mr.satyavadi aj kal jhoot bhi bolne lage hain zoya ke liye

You are evil hume ek aur part ke liye wait karwaogi😭well but you lived upto your name miss.cliffhanger...i can't wait to how asad behaves when najma nd zoya will gush over Fareed...it will be so much fun😆

Did i say already that it was amazing,mindblowing nd hilarious?😳

It was so good to see you...

love ya🤗

Originally posted by: elenaa

The moment I opened IF just now I saw tat u had posted a TS even before u sent pm...and believe me I was very happy 😃 🤗

coming to the TS...the jealous asad is the besttt asad ⭐️

poor guy always surrounded by women who are swooning over guys he doesn't even know 😆

evil u are...always living a cliffhanger 😈

im curious to mert fareed...update soon ⭐️

p.s if im not wrong this idea came to ur mind wen u wre planning for ur ff...tat means u r starting a neww ff soon...wooohoo 👏 🤗

Originally posted by: webuser7

I thought TS stood for Two Shot (or three shot) and not Too Short!! 😆 Kidding aside nice start but yeah, too short. I am greedy for more! 😉

A jealous Asad is a yummiest Asad. Look forward to the second part where the color green will play a big role??!! Asad green with jealousy!! Bring it on baby!! 😃

Originally posted by: -Deepshikhaa-

I just opened my Inbox and I saw a PM from youu and I actually danced on the bed for few mins 🥳 I missed your writings 🤗& i'm so happy that you have started something new.

Asad and jealous🤣 this is going to be fun. :D Eagerly waiting for the nexxt part 😃 update sooon🤗

Originally posted by: Rarepearl

hey,

Welcome back with a new TS, I know you love cliffy's & killing us with suspence hence you break one shots into 2 shots, kidding.

it was really interesting to see Asad getting irritated at the table talks between the ladies. poor soul has to tolerate 3 women, all by himself, amongst which 2 are extremely difficult to handle. well I love the jealous Asad a lot. he really is a view to see when all hot & jealous. how easily he changed his decision from a no to yes just because he wants to see Zoya's friend, nice. I hope he has a real nice time there.

Cont soon.

Love.

Originally posted by: QueenOfMyCastle

I love when men are jealous and try to hide it...Its even better when the other party knows it and rubs it in *hint hint*😃