TS: My Friend Fareed - Last part on pg 16

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goingreen

@goingreen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: elenaa
"Fareed!" Asad grunted in anger, as soon as they reached the dance floor. Zoya stared at him in confusion. She was right here with him, hand-in-hand, so why was he getting angry with Fareed again? She followed the direction of his glare and immediately covered her mouth with her free hand as she suppressed her giggle."Mr Khan! Woh sach mein accha ladka hai! Kasamh se!" Zoya tried to reason with Asad as he dragged her towards Fareed, who was unabashedly dancing with a highly joyous Najma. Zoya shook her head in amusement. Only Allah could save her friend Fareed now!

Before I comment abt d other good points of d update...the above was d beat part...I laughed heartily readin the end!

Greenji u updated finally! yipeee 🥳

ohhmmyyy asad had seriously specially chosen his sherwani to match wid zoya's 😲 but fate had different palns though 🤣 fareed chose to wear d same colour as zoya's 🤣

zoya n fareed dancing on batameez dil 😉

I literally squealed when I read 'dhaage tod laaun chandani se noor ke' no way d lion wud hav let his zoya dance wid someone else on this song 😉

Glad zoya said 'aapse zyada nhi'
😃

Wonderful update as usual 🤗

p.s now we know d reason behind d mysterious disappearance of fareed. ..he had ran off wid najma 🤣
send asya on vacation as well 😉

Elena (: I'm so glad to have made you laugh haha that was my very intention (: Asya on vacation hmm, sounds like an interesting idea indeed :p I'm really really glad that you liked it!! (:

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manognasai

@manognasai

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Posted: 11 years ago

#112

Hey very awesome ending...Asad se Fareed ko bhagvan hi bachaye😆

Edited by manognasai - 11 years ago

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Blaaaaaaah

@-Bleeeh-

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#113

Loved it , goingreen. Always love your work (Y)

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akaswan

@akaswan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#114

Poor Fareed 🤣;... and nice story 😊

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webuser7

@webuser7

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#115

Finally, we met the elusive Fareed!! Lovely update! Glad to see a "green with jealousy" Asad. Although, I have to admit, I wanted to see more!! Zoya relieved him of his misery a tad bit too early IMO! Aur tadpana tha Asad ko. 😉

Great choice of songs! Badtameez was perfect song considering Asad's reaction. And then BNHH!! Dare Fareed think that he can dance with Zoya on that song! No siree!! That's an exclusive AsYa song!! Accha kiya story end karke, warna Fareed to mara jata "Bhaijaan" ke haaton!! 😆

Are you considering writing your SS soon? I miss your humorous stories!! 😭

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anushreemishra

@anushreemishra

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: goingreen

Anu! (: Thank you so much, the length of the comment already made me smile (: Yeah hahaha the clothes thing was originally planned, but I added it in while writing it haha. Wanted to bring across the fact that Asad was like the silent/subtle kinda in love with Zoya :p

I'm glad you liked the change in Asad's emotions haha and I'm so so so touched that you felt I did justice to Bol Na Halke!! It's my absolute favourite sequence as well, which is why Through The Monsoon was also highly inspired by it (: It was when Asad was thinking of Bol Na Halke as he stared at the rain outside the window in the show itself that I felt a burning urge to write something about that sequence again (:

Really glad you liked it!! (:

I am glad you liked my extremely lengthy comment coz i thought it was a little too big😆but kya karen i couldn't just stop myself when i started writing and waise bhi aapki taarif karne mein mujhe bahut maza ata hai(yes i am buttering you coz i love writing comments for you and i want to continue this but for that😕well you know what you have to do😆)

Loved your last minute color coodination addition😳

I know it would be the biggest compliment for you if i said that you did justice to bol na halke halke sequence and you absolutely did😃

I am glad that even now certain scenes can inspire you😳waise asad remembering the bol na halke halke while watching the rain was indeed a very beautiful scene

Now since i couldn't give you chocolates earlier since i had to prepare dinner so here it is

Loads and loads of luv

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@metoyou

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#117

*Scared expression* Green ji... please, mujhe mat maro...

Yes, I know tum shayad bahot upset ho mujhse, because I did not unres my res. That is so unlike me 😕 But every time something came in between and before I knew, I forgot about it...SORRY!!!

But here I am, apni zimmedari nibhane ke liye 😛

Finally, you found Fareed! Never knew, a third person in AsYa's life can give and bring us so much happiness 😆

Asad looked down at his own dark blue sherwani (That was so cute. I could totally imagine the confused look on his face while looking down at his own sherwani)

Who was this badtameez guy, calling Zoya honey in her face?! (Possessive, jealous and all...come on Mr. Khan...)

the guy who's been burning a hole in my back ever since he laid eyes on me (Burn baby burn...hahaha, poor guy)

There was no way in hell he was going to allow Fareed to dance with Zoya on this song (Kaunsa song...romantic waala song?) Oh acha acha... well let me tell you, Mr. Khan did the right thing. This is THEIR song, end of discussion.

"Yeh kya badtameezi hai Mr Khan?" (Allah Miyaan, whats wrong with you Ms. Farooqui! Yeh badtameezi nahin hain. Bahut jald aapko pata chal chayega ke yeh hain kya) 😉

"Par aapse zyada nahi," Zoya finally whispered (I was supposed to say that!) 😳

as memories from that song came rushing in (Beautiful memories...)

Only Allah could save her friend Fareed now! (Oh no, do not anger Mr. Asad Ahmed Khan)

This was a lovely TS, Green ji. Saach mein 😊 You brought back one of the most beautiful memories of the show, the Bol Na Halke Halke dance sequence. It was magic then and it was surely and purely magic in your story as well. Arre yahan ek kiss bhi tha 😳

I loved the ending. Just when I thought Mr. Khan will be okay with Fareed, he gives him another unpleasant surprise; flirting and dancing with Najma!

Oh boy, the look on Mr. Khan's face is so imaginable 😆 Fareed, mere bhai...bhaag jao!

Thanks a lot! 😃🤗

P.S. Yes, I have seen your new FF and will comment on it as well. Again, sorry for this very late comment!

Edited by me2you - 11 years ago

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Homeslice

@Homeslice

Inactive

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Posted: 11 years ago

#118

Green ji :D

Fabulous end to the story :D

Ya Allah, only you can save Fareed from Mr.Khan :)

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Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#119

RES

Okay. As promised!

Part 1:

Honestly. All I can say is:

🤣

I LOVE Jealous Asad

Part 2:

Have I mentioned I LOVE jealous Asad?

The way he was noticing even the colors that Zoya and Fareed were wearing. And AWWW he even made an effort to match with her!? 😲

Silly Akdu. If he hadn't been burning a hole into Fareed's skull, he might have realized Zoya blushed! 😡

OMG and than dance, him taking her away from the dance floor.. it took me a second to realize it was BNHH. I had to sing the line in my head a couple times before meri bati jali 😆

AWWW Zoya is so cute, she just can't see him disappointed. I do wish she had made him suffer a little more... you know since in your other stories (Except MM) he's the one making her suffer, or squirm, basically lol. But i still loved how she said "Par aapse zyada nahin"

Hayeee

And the lyrics playing in the background, as they leaned in for a kiss. ☺️

LOVED the playing of Badtameez Dil 😆

And hahahaha omg Fareed with Najma. Well, that will keep him from being jealous of him for Zoya 😉

LOVED IT! Please please please start an FF soon

😃😃😃

Edited by mochhug - 11 years ago