TS: My Friend Fareed - Last part on pg 16 - Page 11

Oh finally u updated. Cute update. Bol na halke halke is my favorite part sequence and I am so glad dat u used that song.

Amazing...perfect reading for one who has not read FF updates in over a week...

superb😃

this was awesome

"Fareed!" Asad grunted in anger, as soon as they reached the dance floor. Zoya stared at him in confusion. She was right here with him, hand-in-hand, so why was he getting angry with Fareed again? She followed the direction of his glare and immediately covered her mouth with her free hand as she suppressed her giggle."Mr Khan! Woh sach mein accha ladka hai! Kasamh se!" Zoya tried to reason with Asad as he dragged her towards Fareed, who was unabashedly dancing with a highly joyous Najma. Zoya shook her head in amusement. Only Allah could save her friend Fareed now!


Before I comment abt d other good points of d update...the above was d beat part...I laughed heartily readin the end!

Greenji u updated finally! yipeee 🥳

ohhmmyyy asad had seriously specially chosen his sherwani to match wid zoya's 😲 but fate had different palns though 🤣 fareed chose to wear d same colour as zoya's 🤣

zoya n fareed dancing on batameez dil 😉

I literally squealed when I read 'dhaage tod laaun chandani se noor ke' no way d lion wud hav let his zoya dance wid someone else on this song 😉

Glad zoya said 'aapse zyada nhi'
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Wonderful update as usual 🤗

p.s now we know d reason behind d mysterious disappearance of fareed. ..he had ran off wid najma 🤣
send asya on vacation as well 😉

Originally posted by: jasminerose

Oh finally u updated. Cute update. Bol na halke halke is my favorite part sequence and I am so glad dat u used that song.

Plz start a SS. really miss ur stories.

I'm really glad you liked it! (: Well I've had an idea incubating in my head for a new story for a while now, but I'm not satisfied with it yet haha so let me mull over it more (:

Originally posted by: anushreemishra

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Can i just say I love you dammit more for the fact that you lived upto your promise than for this amazing update😳i have been waiting for so long for Fareed to return and what a comeback😆

I just loved the update it was romantic,funny,intense basically it was everything that your updates always are😳

Asad gritting his teeth and waving his hand infront of zoya was funny😆

OMG did i read it right or did asad really wear a dark blue color sherwani so that he could color co-ordinate with zoya🤣...I mean really i was shocked at first😲and then i just couldn't stop laughing but my poor asad Fareed's clothes were also color co-ordinated with zoya and that too perfect to the T with same shade of blue😆I feel so sad for asad

Oh boy Fareed hugged zoya infront of Mr.Khan..Mr.Khan to aag babula ho rahe honge😆I can totally imagine his clenched fists and his tensed eyebrows😆

He missed the fact that Zoya had blushed in response to Fareed's question about falling in love because he was too busy trying to burn a hole in Fareed's annoyingly handsome face

Kya Mr.khan aapne apne gusse mein important cheez pe to dhyan hi nahi diya😆

hayee meri zoya ka blush😳

So zoya and Fareed dancing on Batameez dil and asad watching,not a pleasant sight for asad's eyes😆So Mr.Fareed caught asad's glare on him and he finally caught zoya😆

You didn't you didn't use "Bol na halke hanke"😲i was shocked at first but i loved how you used it...the song has such beautiful memories associated with it that i thought it would be very difficult to do justice to this song but you did more than enough..i just loved how you used the song😳Well how could asad let zoya dance with fareed on their song right?

i loved how asad pinned her against the wall and zoya's disappointment when asad didn't try to stop her was cute😳

Zoya didn't say that her aapi wanted her to marry fareed...so as expected Mr.khan stopped her and she was happy😳

"What's wrong Mr Khan? Aapi jo kuch bhi keh rahi thi, theek hi toh keh rahi thi. Fareed is an extremely nice, sensible person, and he's really intelligent and good looking too,"

I actually was expecting that here asad would just kiss the hell out of zoya but what happened next was unexpected and very touching and beautiful.Asad felt hurt and i am so happy to see that zoya saw that😳really shows how much they have come to know each other in these 2 months

"Par aapse zyada nahi," Zoya finally whispered, as she took a step forward and rested her palm on Asad's cheek, guiding him to face her again.

This was so cute...i was grinning like an idiot while reading this😳i loved this sweet little gesture😳

She watched the hurt in Asad's eyes turn into confusion, and then slowly into relief, with a glint of happiness. She placed her hands on his shoulders as support as she went onto the tip of her toes, resting her forehead against his.

I can't tell you how good you are at describing feelings my words aren't enough and when zoya went on her toes and rested her forehead against his that was so so so beautiful😳

"Bol na halke halke, bol na halke halke, dhoop se halke halke, bol na halke," Asad closed the distance between their faces as the beautiful lyrics of the song floated in the background, pressing his lips against hers. He felt Zoya's lips smile against his as she returned the kiss, and he immediately lifted his hand to trace the side of her face with his finger, finding the dimple that would've definitely formed as a result of that smile. He let his finger dance in and out of that small dent on her face as soon as he found it, giving her all his attention as he kissed her more urgently.

You just freshened my memories of bol na halke halke song sequence and i don't think there can be any compliment better than that.I won't say this was better than that coz well that is a little impossible but it was no less..i didn't think someone could do the justice to this song but you did...this was at par with teh song sequence😳and i just want to say that i know that you give a kiss everytime but nothing is predictable you make it different everytime and i just love you for that

Oh fareed is in trouble😉

P.S.-loads of chocolates for you😃

Anu! (: Thank you so much, the length of the comment already made me smile (: Yeah hahaha the clothes thing was originally planned, but I added it in while writing it haha. Wanted to bring across the fact that Asad was like the silent/subtle kinda in love with Zoya :p

I'm glad you liked the change in Asad's emotions haha and I'm so so so touched that you felt I did justice to Bol Na Halke!! It's my absolute favourite sequence as well, which is why Through The Monsoon was also highly inspired by it (: It was when Asad was thinking of Bol Na Halke as he stared at the rain outside the window in the show itself that I felt a burning urge to write something about that sequence again (:

Really glad you liked it!! (: