TS: My Friend Fareed - Last part on pg 16 - Page 14

Originally posted by: stereohearts200

I loveeed the update! It was so good to see a jealous Asad! My favourite parts were, ""Par aapse zyada nahi," Zoya finally whispered, as she took a step forward and rested her palm on Asad's cheek, guiding him to face her again." And , " Zoya tried to reason with Asad as he dragged her towards Fareed, who was unabashedly dancing with a highly joyous Najma. Zoya shook her head in amusement. Only Allah could save her friend Fareed now!" I simply loved these two parts! It was an A.W.E.S.O.M.E awesome ending!

Haha thank you!! I'm so glad you liked it (: I mulled quite a bit over the ending haha but looks like a lot of people liked it, so it was definitely worth it :p

Originally posted by: mochhug

RES

Okay. As promised!

Part 1:

Honestly. All I can say is:

🤣

I LOVE Jealous Asad

Part 2:

Have I mentioned I LOVE jealous Asad?

The way he was noticing even the colors that Zoya and Fareed were wearing. And AWWW he even made an effort to match with her!? 😲

Silly Akdu. If he hadn't been burning a hole into Fareed's skull, he might have realized Zoya blushed! 😡

OMG and than dance, him taking her away from the dance floor.. it took me a second to realize it was BNHH. I had to sing the line in my head a couple times before meri bati jali 😆

AWWW Zoya is so cute, she just can't see him disappointed. I do wish she had made him suffer a little more... you know since in your other stories (Except MM) he's the one making her suffer, or squirm, basically lol. But i still loved how she said "Par aapse zyada nahin"

Hayeee

And the lyrics playing in the background, as they leaned in for a kiss. ☺️

LOVED the playing of Badtameez Dil 😆

And hahahaha omg Fareed with Najma. Well, that will keep him from being jealous of him for Zoya 😉

LOVED IT! Please please please start an FF soon

😃😃😃

We all love jealous Asad :p Hahaha glad you realized it was Bol Na Halke, even if it was at long last! I hadn't planned on adding the chorus lyrics during the kiss, but then decided to do it in the end, just in case anyone didn't figure it out hahaha so now I'm glad I did (:

Haha it was a short story, that's why I didn't drag the tadap haha. Maybe in my next story I will :p Just need to figure out some details, I'm no happy with it yet haha.

Anyway, thank you!! (: Love reading your comments haha.

a big part of me didn't want this story to end

Originally posted by: Missvishtoofani

why did u nd thr

Haha just to end on a comic note that's all (:

Originally posted by: ...KSGmiAmor...

a big part of me didn't want this story to end

Aw thank you that's really sweet of you to say (: But it had to end somehow hahaha.

i have missed this one as well

Originally posted by: jazmeen

i have missed this one as well

i didnt know you wrote this one loved it

love jealous asad

you should have continue man

Hahaha nah, I just wanted it to end on a comic note like this (: Glad you liked it!!

Originally posted by: me2you

*Scared expression* Green ji... please, mujhe mat maro...

Yes, I know tum shayad bahot upset ho mujhse, because I did not unres my res. That is so unlike me 😕 But every time something came in between and before I knew, I forgot about it...SORRY!!!

But here I am, apni zimmedari nibhane ke liye 😛

Finally, you found Fareed! Never knew, a third person in AsYa's life can give and bring us so much happiness 😆

Asad looked down at his own dark blue sherwani (That was so cute. I could totally imagine the confused look on his face while looking down at his own sherwani)

Who was this badtameez guy, calling Zoya honey in her face?! (Possessive, jealous and all...come on Mr. Khan...)

the guy who's been burning a hole in my back ever since he laid eyes on me (Burn baby burn...hahaha, poor guy)

There was no way in hell he was going to allow Fareed to dance with Zoya on this song (Kaunsa song...romantic waala song?) Oh acha acha... well let me tell you, Mr. Khan did the right thing. This is THEIR song, end of discussion.

"Yeh kya badtameezi hai Mr Khan?" (Allah Miyaan, whats wrong with you Ms. Farooqui! Yeh badtameezi nahin hain. Bahut jald aapko pata chal chayega ke yeh hain kya) 😉

"Par aapse zyada nahi," Zoya finally whispered (I was supposed to say that!) 😳

as memories from that song came rushing in (Beautiful memories...)

Only Allah could save her friend Fareed now! (Oh no, do not anger Mr. Asad Ahmed Khan)

This was a lovely TS, Green ji. Saach mein 😊 You brought back one of the most beautiful memories of the show, the Bol Na Halke Halke dance sequence. It was magic then and it was surely and purely magic in your story as well. Arre yahan ek kiss bhi tha 😳

I loved the ending. Just when I thought Mr. Khan will be okay with Fareed, he gives him another unpleasant surprise; flirting and dancing with Najma!

Oh boy, the look on Mr. Khan's face is so imaginable 😆 Fareed, mere bhai...bhaag jao!

Thanks a lot! 😃🤗

P.S. Yes, I have seen your new FF and will comment on it as well. Again, sorry for this very late comment!

Main toh marungi hi ab :p Nah, no worries, real life is extremely unpredictable haha so I understand if you were busy and all (: I was a little apprehensive to use Bol Na Halke since it's a whole statement on it's own, but I'm glad that it still got accepted by everyone (: I await your comment on my FF now!! (: Glad you liked it!! (: