TS: My Friend Fareed - Last part on pg 16 - Page 13

Haha poor Fareed hitting wrong girls Always 😆

Originally posted by: webuser7

Finally, we met the elusive Fareed!! Lovely update! Glad to see a "green with jealousy" Asad. Although, I have to admit, I wanted to see more!! Zoya relieved him of his misery a tad bit too early IMO! Aur tadpana tha Asad ko. 😉

Great choice of songs! Badtameez was perfect song considering Asad's reaction. And then BNHH!! Dare Fareed think that he can dance with Zoya on that song! No siree!! That's an exclusive AsYa song!! Accha kiya story end karke, warna Fareed to mara jata "Bhaijaan" ke haaton!! 😆

Are you considering writing your SS soon? I miss your humorous stories!! 😭

Yeah, looks like Asad was goingreen hehehe. Well it was a short story, so I couldn't drag the tadap haha. Maybe in my next story if possible :p Haha glad you liked the songs and all (: Well I'm not exactly done planning the next story haha it doesn't seem to come up to my own expectations yet, so we'll have to see about it (:

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-

Yayy! Me First!

Brilliant Ending dear! 👏

Loved the way Asad got Jealous and kissed Zoya!

Do write more such stories! 😳

Love,

Mrina

Thank you!! (: And I will haha, these are the only type of stories I write :p

Monica ji aur me2you ji, aap dono res karke Fareed ke tarah bhaag kyun gaye!! I wanna read your comments hahaha.

Originally posted by: goingreen

Monica ji aur me2you ji, aap dono res karke Fareed ke tarah bhaag kyun gaye!! I wanna read your comments hahaha.

i know in the future- after rereading this 10th time 😃- i'd want to say this so might as well say it now
----------your stories ALWAYS bring smile to my face. so thank you 🤗--------------
i hope you never stop writing more of the OSs & TSs!
and ffs 😉😆

I loveeed the update! It was so good to see a jealous Asad! My favourite parts were, ""Par aapse zyada nahi," Zoya finally whispered, as she took a step forward and rested her palm on Asad's cheek, guiding him to face her again." And , " Zoya tried to reason with Asad as he dragged her towards Fareed, who was unabashedly dancing with a highly joyous Najma. Zoya shook her head in amusement. Only Allah could save her friend Fareed now!" I simply loved these two parts! It was an A.W.E.S.O.M.E awesome ending!

wow...this is jus amazing...
loved it totally...

❤️
😊

Originally posted by: rutu83

i know in the future- after rereading this 10th time 😃- i'd want to say this so might as well say it now
----------your stories ALWAYS bring smile to my face. so thank you 🤗--------------
i hope you never stop writing more of the OSs & TSs!
and ffs 😉😆

Aw haha that's so sweet!! (: All of your comments bring a smile to my face too, so that makes it all even out (: