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Ilham

@Ilhamez

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Greatt job
I just love how u are presenting all asad and zoya s pov
And trying to justify each and every mouvement and decision of them
And how u combine everything just wow
Amazing i am waiting for ur update

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...MonaCo...

@...MonaCo...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Thank you everyone... I will try to update the other parts soon... I am thankful to all of you for your wonderful encouragement, and positive comments. It means a lot. Sachi. :)

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Jassieg

@Jassieg

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Just finished reading the last two parts...and am totally happy. Loved how asad wanted to wish on a shooting star for his zoya..and then..doubting Tanveer in a way..I hope asad gets more involved in the investigation and see the real Tanveer.

Hope u will post the next chapter soon.😊

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Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Thank you for your encouragement and support everyone. I have never tried this before, so am a little nervous and your encouragement means a lot to me. Specially since I know so many of you on this forum are such good writers.

I just uploaded a new part... Its in the main post itself.

Let me know how you like it, and also if you would like to see something different?

Also, I want to say thank you from the bottom of my heart to all of you who are commenting on this post... I try to thank you all individually, but sometimes due to unability to check forums multiple times, i am unable to do so, but I value and cherish each and every comment.

So guys, check out the new part = Part 8: The meeting

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...MonaCo...

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Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

I am trying to PM everyone who requested but since I am new on forums, and still learning things... sorry if I mess up and miss someone by chance. I hope will be forgiven. ...

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Jassieg

@Jassieg

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

Wow...poor asad..can't bear to see him break down like that..hope everything gets well soon..update soon.

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Ilham

@Ilhamez

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

OMG asad is broken down ,i cant see him Like this my heart shattered with each and every word he said
Am i very sensitive? 😭 😭 😭
I necer think That zoya Can make him Like this ,
I am confused i see the pic with zoya s eye and yes she is right ,sometimes separation make some lovestory more strong and she Had to do That
But then i see the situation with asad's eye and the man is not That wrong ,maybe zoya doesnt know what he did and That he believes her
Ok anyway there is pain in every love story
Amazing part update soon 👏

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...MonaCo...

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Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

Wait dear for the next chapter :) hopefully I will do justice. In my fiction, Asad is not blind to tanu... He spied on her but he is giving her the benefit of doubt as be never found a saboot

But wait and watch may be some surprise for you :)