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...MonaCo...

@...MonaCo...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: Ilhamez
OMG asad is broken down ,i cant see him Like this my heart shattered with each and every word he said
Am i very sensitive? 😭 😭 😭
I necer think That zoya Can make him Like this ,
I am confused i see the pic with zoya s eye and yes she is right ,sometimes separation make some lovestory more strong and she Had to do That
But then i see the situation with asad's eye and the man is not That wrong ,maybe zoya doesnt know what he did and That he believes her
Ok anyway there is pain in every love story
Amazing part update soon 👏

Hope you now like the turn of events?

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princee

@princeegoyal

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

superb i want part 10 soon..pls pm me whenevr u update

pari

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rutu83

@rutu83

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#63

readthe last two together-- and soo excited!

ayaan itna smart kaise ho gaya 😆

loved it - pls update soon👏

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...MonaCo...

@...MonaCo...

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

Yaar, kisi ko to smart hona hi tha.plus i always loved robert mona pairing as a comedy team... so iwas like, if i was zoya and in trouble, the first person I would go to would be him... :) Plus, I wanted Asad also to be a bit suspicious from the day Zoya told him about Tanveer, because the way I see it, I would not completely refute a loved ones suggestion about something. I would atleast give it a thought in secret, if I dont admit it in front of everybody. Its like sometimes we know the other person is right, we just dont want to admit it...

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Tanzia Scott

@latanzia

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

OMG this was beautiful, the letter had me in tears it was so true of asad.

Oh i can wait for the dime to drop on this over confident tanu.

Beautifully written, this is a fantastic story, if you do pm, add me to your list. Eagerly waiting for the next part.

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Shivi.forever

@Shivi.forever

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#66

Wah wah asad ki zoya n zoya ka asad n all haan.. great update..

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Saima Syed

@Saima-Syed

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

That was truly an amazing piece of writing. Hope to read some more soon.

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Revelio

@Revelio

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#68

Awesome! Plz continue soon! And if u can plz pm me when u update.

Edited by stereohearts200 - 12 years ago

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webuser7

@webuser7

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#69

Awesome update. I love the track!

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...MonaCo...

@...MonaCo...

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#70

Guys I posted a new part... :) Let me know how you like it... I feel like I am writing a book. I could have skipped some parts, or shortened them, but I feel so tempted to write and explain each emotion of the characters that I cant stop... I was also tempted to write a chapter on Ayaan realizing his love for Humeira, lol, but left it as then the story would get so ooo long!

Thank you all for your support!!!