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Nai

@zoas91

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Posted: 12 years ago

#181

this was great!!! do pm me when you update next!!!!! 👏

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tvpremi

@tvpremi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#182

Hey! Amazing n awesome update...Malak n his employees are really upto something...asad finally said something he should have...zoya was good as always...plz plz continue soon...

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IntrovertedDame

@IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 12 years ago

#183

Awesome update.

So the misunderstanding has been resolved,yay!

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starsinmyeyes

@starsinmyeyes

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Posted: 12 years ago

#184

Asad's character is really developing well...great update

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Andrea

@DreA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#185

I love that you give such nice longgg chapters!

I love reading every word that you put down.

And I still dont like that Malak...Something aint right bout that boy...

It was an awesome update. Cant wait for the next chapter! 👏

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JJN

@JJyoN

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Posted: 12 years ago

#186

Awesome chapter. Emotionally packed. Can't wait for the next update.

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deedeez

@deedeez

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Posted: 12 years ago

#187

Loved the update.👏.. I hate Malak for some reason.. He's so schmoozy and interfering. Even though he's doing what a caring friend should, but he's interfering and trying to sway Zoya even when the attention is not required. Certainly a gray character.

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wreeti

@wreeti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#188

Hi, I read the prequel to this ff as well and I love ur writing style.

The most interesting aspect of this ff is the face off between asad and malak. I really like the malak character, its evident that he would have grey shades to his character but he genuinely cares about zoya and is very right in his anguish towards asad.

We all love asad's character from the show and want to believe that he is the best for Zoya but if u look at the situation from a 3rd man's perspective the reaction would be same as we see from Malak.

Waiting to see how it goes in the next chapter.

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A.Hajnal

@A.Hajnal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#189

Ahhh...That was beautiful as always...

Dev working near Zoyas computer...Hmm, I dont like that at all...Something is wrong with him...Zoya is underestimating him, that he doesnt know much and that he isnt a hacker...I feel like he and that old man were trying to break in and find the codes that This Malik guys wants her to give to him...They are on something big and bad...

Malik is trying to make Zoya leave Khans home so she will be alone and will have no one with her to make her see that something fishy is happening when they will start trapping her...He is acting all I-want-best-for-you-because-I-am-your-friend...But I have a feeling if he didnt get what he wants, he will try to be something more-then-friends, and he will want this relationship to become close to her so she will trust him with her codes...and will do whatever he wants...As I have always said I dont like him...

But he cant do that till Asad is there...so thats is why he wants her away from him...Thats why all that whenever he sees Zoya, he starts with Asad-is-a-Jark with some many new name to describe Asad...

He said can handel Asad...😲 He wanted a fight with Asad to make Zoya see that Asad is bad and all...that he is aggressive and violent...and when Asad stopped because of Zoya, he started provoking him so Asad will beat him and then Zoya will more angry on Asad because he broke her friends bones...Lol

What he didnt know that Zoya will hug to stop Asad and Asad will stop and all his anger will "Uran jhuu", and he will be lost in her eyes...He did try to provoke him to make him push Zoya, let did he know that Zoya was doing that to save Asad from going to jail for killing someone...because already knows how strong her Mr.Khan is and he will kill Malik...🤣 lol

I loved how Asad said him "She doesn't need your protection," Asad snarls. "She has me." 😳

Malik is good for one thing...he is making Asad see that he will loss Zoya he didnt stop hurting her, that he needs to stop talking to her and hurt her in his anger...

Loved Asad and Zoya conv...him saying that her not taking his call was her way to Punish him...That her turning off her cell phone was like taking a decade off of his life...because he was going crazy...Aww...🤗

He is one of those person who say whatever happenes, no matter how angry I am at you or you are at me, let me always know that you are safe...😳

And the good thing is that Asad know Malik is trying to twist Zoya against Asad...