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crazzychips

@crazzychips

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#201

nice update dear
keep up the good work😉

chipps

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 12 years ago

#202

thank you for the pm..well written..good going..keep it up...please do update soon..waiting for the next update eagerly..😊

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i-love-my-life

@i-love-my-life

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#203

As usual this chapter was flawless ;)

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jazsidhu

@jazsidhu

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#204

tis is really amazing...luv the way asad was so worried fr zoya n hw every 5 min he will call her n hw reatless he is when she is not around him n if possible he want her to be with him only always...this malik guy is very mysterious wonder wat is he up to...tis is really beautifully written...totally luv it...one of my favourite ff...thx fr the pm n please pm me fr the next part...please continue soon n eagerly waiting fr the next part...

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amri123

@amri123

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#205

heya Paly

so as usual that was an awesome chapter

you know even though Malak clearly as an ulterior motive for giving Zoya a job and all, he was a good friend today, i'm glad that he consoled Zoya and made her feel better

i also loved all those nicknames he has for Asad😆

Zoya's really like a referee these days, i feel like every time these three meet she ends up having to part a fight😆

totally loved how Asad was worried for Zoya

and more importantly, that he actually told her this

i think that's a big step forward

and Asad admitted he needed Zoya, nice😊

continue soon and thanks for the PM😊

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snehasya

@snehasya

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#206

its just awesome asad went retless when he didn't found zoya around him mr asad stop beating around the bush you love her and I loved this update fantastic piece of work . this all ffs and os have made me a true asya maniac thanks again for pm

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Dee

@Enchantress

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#207

Umm.. I am utterly flabbergasted right now.. Its almost 1 pm and I am sitting in front of my lappy and reading this.. God, I thought I would just read one or two chapters and then read the rest tomorrow, But was I able to control.. naaa... noo..

This is what happened when I read For you I will... God you are just amazing... seriously.

First of all , how do you so much detail about hacking and computers and all.. God, you wrote the entire thing as if you yourself are no less then a hacker.. God, you were just amazing. Perfect.. Everything felt so real.. I really loved every technical detailing you gave to the fiction.. It made it very much real and enjoyable to read..

Umm about the story , I love the plot.. And, your idea of actually having sequels .. this is the sequel of For you I will... Basically , each sequel is some where narrating different incidents in Asad and zoya's life.. And, how it effects their life.. This such a awesome idea.. Brilliant..

Zoya's friend Malak., I don't know but I have a negative feeling about him.Not only him the entire office where she is working.. I have my own suspicions.. You better update soon.. I am hooked to this...

You are an amazing writer..

My favorite...

Dee

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Surish

@Surish

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#208

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Nikki

@HR-DMG4life

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#209

Thanks for all the pm's

I just read the whole ff and its just awesome :D

i HATE Malak right now for interfering with AsYa :P

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Tanvi

@KulfiBai

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#210

Great update Paly! 😃 At this point I'll give Malak the benefit of doubt because he is just such an awesome friend to Zoya - I wish we had this in the show! She deserves a friend like him, one who will stand by her side always, one who appreciates her for who she is 😳

And OMG Asad beat up 5 guys at the bus station for her?! 😲 😆 I have a thing for tough guys that are over-protective (although Asad acted like a jerk in the last chapter!) 😆 I'm also really curious about this Dev character - seems really fishy! Anyways, if it's even possible, I'm more in love with your story than I was yesterday 😃 Can't wait to see what happens next!