FF: Web of Lies - COMPLETED on p80 - Page 20

Beautifully written! It's amazing how you put two sides of Asad together. You presented him in a way where the way he needs to know everything she is doing and where she is ...the controlling stalker-ish side and the caring loving side. Both sides ...consist of love for her. Malak is a weird character...he's both good and understanding for Zoya and at the same not good for her. Loved this chapter!

Originally posted by: A.Hajnal

Ahhh...That was beautiful as always...

Dev working near Zoyas computer...Hmm, I dont like that at all...Something is wrong with him...Zoya is underestimating him, that he doesnt know much and that he isnt a hacker...I feel like he and that old man were trying to break in and find the codes that This Malik guys wants her to give to him...They are on something big and bad...

Malik is trying to make Zoya leave Khans home so she will be alone and will have no one with her to make her see that something fishy is happening when they will start trapping her...He is acting all I-want-best-for-you-because-I-am-your-friend...But I have a feeling if he didnt get what he wants, he will try to be something more-then-friends, and he will want this relationship to become close to her so she will trust him with her codes...and will do whatever he wants...As I have always said I dont like him...

But he cant do that till Asad is there...so thats is why he wants her away from him...Thats why all that whenever he sees Zoya, he starts with Asad-is-a-Jark with some many new name to describe Asad...

He said can handel Asad...😲 He wanted a fight with Asad to make Zoya see that Asad is bad and all...that he is aggressive and violent...and when Asad stopped because of Zoya, he started provoking him so Asad will beat him and then Zoya will more angry on Asad because he broke her friends bones...Lol

What he didnt know that Zoya will hug to stop Asad and Asad will stop and all his anger will "Uran jhuu", and he will be lost in her eyes...He did try to provoke him to make him push Zoya, let did he know that Zoya was doing that to save Asad from going to jail for killing someone...because already knows how strong her Mr.Khan is and he will kill Malik...🤣 lol

I loved how Asad said him "She doesn't need your protection," Asad snarls. "She has me." 😳

Malik is good for one thing...he is making Asad see that he will loss Zoya he didnt stop hurting her, that he needs to stop talking to her and hurt her in his anger...

Loved Asad and Zoya conv...him saying that her not taking his call was her way to Punish him...That her turning off her cell phone was like taking a decade off of his life...because he was going crazy...Aww...🤗

He is one of those person who say whatever happenes, no matter how angry I am at you or you are at me, let me always know that you are safe...😳

And the good thing is that Asad know Malik is trying to twist Zoya against Asad...

Asyas future... lol

That was a very good one...Loved it...Up-date soon...😊

Paly, I apologize if that's not your real name, but seriously this has to be my favorite chapter yet. You have such beautiful writing skills, and you've etched out your characters so well, that they have left me conflicted. Each paragraph expresses the amount of thought and careful detailing you've done, and each time it blows me away. This is what I've been waiting for since the FF began, a major confrontation in which Zoya was torn between the two. I can understand Zoya's plight completely because you have left me torn as well!

I loved Malak at first sight because he was there to protect Zoya from Asad's abusive nature and that would benefit her-at least that's what I thought at first. However, from the past few chapters, you've made me doubt Malak's intentions. I don't know, but I'm still not able to shake off how he wanted Zoya's codes, and not once, but a few times. Plus, his office workers seriously give me the creeps-especially Kesevan. He's too nice-it all seems fake to me. This is where I'm torn. I'm doubting Malak's intentions but what he did for Zoya today, it honestly warmed my heart. He was there for her, her made her feel wanted and that was really important for her. He understood and the way he was probing further because he knew something was utterly wrong, gave me best friend vibes.

PS. His nicknames for Asad were priceless! I loved each one!

Nevertheless, why do I get the feeling that Malak is only trying to get into Zoya's good books for her intelligence. He keeps trying to defame Asad in front of her*-and ugh Asad is making it easier for him. I was so proud of Zoya today when she refused to leave the house because it's not only Mr. Khan she still cares for, but also Phupee and Najma.

*"He'll try to twist you against me."

Now I was extremely pissed off at Asad and you made me happy when Zoya rejected his calls. Zoya really made me proud when she didn't back down during their own encounter. He was letting his feelings out, yet she was letting him know why he was wrong. When Asad was explaining how she punished him in a worst way, at first I wanted to hurt him and then the rest of his speech had me going, "AW". Asad has some deep feelings for her, and how he explicitly stated that he went insane not knowing she was safe, how he admitted his mistakes, and how he expressed his concern through his vulnerable state, I fell in love with him again. He made her feel needed.

*The Malak and Asad confrontation was purely brilliant! Zoya between them, unknowing that they both were fighting for her really hit me. And when she hugged him to stop him, I had to laugh at her absolute cuteness!

Some of my favorite lines:

1. Zoya shuts the door with more care than it needs. "He's not my boyfriend."

"Really?" Surita raises her eyebrows. "Does he know that?"

1. Malak stops in his tracks. "Speaking of work, aren't you supposed to be doing some?"
2. "Protect him?" Zoya blinks. "Mr. Khan doesn't need me to protect him. Trust me. Other people need to be protected from him."
3. "She doesn't need your protection," Asad snarls. "She has me."
4. You left even though you knew I'd go insane when I couldn't find you.

I'm sorry for the extremely long comment, but I had to express my love and gratitude for such a brilliant update!

PS. I'm going to Paki for summer vacations so I may not be able to read your updates and comment as fast as now, but please continue to pm me!

Love itt!! You are a great writer...:)

great work. Well explained. I doubt dat Malak

Loved the update!

OMG Paly this chapter! It was honestly too amazing for words! Like what am I supposed to point out? Every friggin line was equally amazing...

In this update you made me hate n love Asad all at once... for once I agreed to what that Malak said but I don't like that guy b his intentions are not good... at least it seems that way to me...
Asad really needs to control himself n his rage... he can't shout at Zoya every now and then n expect her to forgive him with his simple sorry!! Only people who are humiliated for things they haven't done know how it feels like!!!
Besides what was Keshavan n Dev doing at Zoya's desk??? Those two guys creep me out!!
I hope Asad changes his way towards Zoya otherwise he will lose her!! Temporarily!!!

wow!!!
awesome update
loved the way zoya stoped asad :)