Shooting Stars: Zoya's day out Pg:25 OS:4 (1/1) - Page 8

AWWHHH, That was a super adorable OS and I loved how Zoya lingered around Asad fixing his coat and tie. Truth be told, I too needed this after the near torture episode !!

aww!! it was so cute.
amazing like all.your works.pls write more.

oh my God even i was blushing reading this..haaye so romantic!! loved it truly 👍🏼

Futile? Don't be silly! It was awesome! I had a constant smile reading it! Love your writing style and the story! BTW, you are the queen of cute twists!! LOVE your twists! First Percy and now Asad left his phone behind on purpose!! Too cute! 👍🏼 👍🏼

Originally posted by: wilddevil2010

Futile? This is one of the best OS that I have read in past few days.

This beautiful OS brought an instant smile on my face.

Different from the slow depressing track. I totally loved it.

The shy and sweet Asya romance, so endearing. Asad miyaan doing it deliberately sigh!!.

Please do write more.

Thank you!!! 😳

I really enjoyed writing.. or rewriting it as well. It gave me a bit of a relief from the depressing state too.. 😆

Originally posted by: Asya-Rm

Awww ❤️

Wish to see it on screen too 😳 👏 👏

Thank you!! I wouldn't mind. Gul needs to give me credit though.. because heaven forbid if her CVs can think up of anything happy for AsYa.. 😆 They're all emotionally challenged I think..

Originally posted by: sweetnandu

awesome..
so cute..
hope to c such things in serial too..
minus Tanveer though😆

Thank you!! Tanveer's a crucial role.. It's soo much fun making her jealous!! :D

Originally posted by: -Devanshi-

Stop making me blush!!!

This was so CUTE!!

You understand Asad so well! Every word and action of his was just within his character! Besides, the fact that they are newly wedded and all just adds to it.

I am ecstatic imagining the expression on Tanveer's face. It is something that we don't see a lot on the show but thankfully in the fiction world people are still happy when evil does not win. Who would've thought that?😆

Most of all I love Zoya's thoughts and the reaction of her body when she is near him. It was just perfect...to the T!!

Lovely lovely OS! It made me giggle after ages. A job well done!:)

Thank you soo much!! Your comment really did make me smile!! 😃

Oh yeah.. when I was writing it.. I thought whether I should put in Tanveer's POV.. but then thought nahh... why spoil the AsYa romance.. I could almost picture her meow-ing at me for giving her such a role in this OS..😆

Lol.. Indeed. Who would've thought that? The CVs have granted only Razia and Tanveer with brains in the show.. I wonder if Asad remembers being hit. if he does.. and was hit 'by the goons'.. he was probably really weak. The goons could have easily taken Tanveer away with them then!! But no she was at the warehouse taking off her clothes for him.. RING RING RING RING.. Red Alert sign Asad..something is deeply wrong somewhere!!! Anyway.. typical..😕

Thanks once again.. 😊