Shooting Stars: Zoya's day out Pg:25 OS:4 (1/1) - Page 10

Originally posted by: Rhea.KaJen

Sanaa!! That was so adorable! <3
I really wish something like that is aired on tv soon though chances are very less as of now :/
I loved reading this one :)
Thanks for the PM :)
Love,
Rhea

Rheeaaa!! 🤗

Thank you!!! And yeah.. chances look very slim.. because Asad miyan may walk out on Zoya for the second time. But I can't wait for the slap Zoya gives Tannu..!! I hope she gives two or three. One from me as well.. 😆 That's probably the only reason I'm looking forward to Monday's episode..😃

Thanks once again..!! 😳

Originally posted by: Sanaa629

Rheeaaa!! 🤗

Thank you!!! And yeah.. chances look very slim.. because Asad miyan may walk out on Zoya for the second time. But I can't wait for the slap Zoya gives Tannu..!! I hope she gives two or three. One from me as well.. 😆 That's probably the only reason I'm looking forward to Monday's episode..😃

Thanks once again..!! 😳

Haha! Me too! I really wanna see her slap Tanveer but I wish I could do that myself :P But well.. Zoya's gonna do it! Thankfully! :P

Edited on page 13 😳

awww this is so cute.. oh so wish this would be in the show actuallly...

Lovelyyy update, have u thought of turning this into an SS..?

wow wow wowww...👏
it's soo amazingly written sanaa...👍🏼
juz loved it so muchh...🤗
i've no wrds.. still in d spell of ur OS...
sooo cute nd adorable...😆

kp writing more more n more...😃
juz love ur each n every story...😆

This is perfect. Beautiful! You seem to have something with Asad's coat collar. You write amazing scenes that involve this coat collar. Read about it in another story of yours.😆

Originally posted by: salmeh.

First of all after so much you wrote something I guess !You are one of those few writers on QH forum who directly go deep into Asad's character. No extra clinching or anything. Simply Asad Ahmed Khan and that's why I love the one-shots you write. From the start of the story and I clearly imagine Dilshad with her sweet son-loving nature, Asad the lion ready for office, Zoya looking forward to bang on tanveer and Tanveer as usual jealous. Loved the car romance. It was nothing much intimate and hush-hush. It was AsYa's romance slow and pure. I really appreciate how you made Asad react to her. A simple kiss on her cheek that's like it !!For me the best thing was Asad forgetting his phone purposely for 2sec of love from Zoya. I remembered the coin scene.You rock the world and you are an amazing writer xxSalwa xox

Hahaha.. thank youu!! I just wasn't getting any insipration from the current track. Then I remembered some time back that I'd written an incomplete OS.. so I just sat down.. and completed it..😆

It's kind of how I wish AsYa would act after their marriage.. so I had to make the characters like they are in QH.. I wasn't sure if I should add in the kiss.. but it seemed apt and I'm really glad you liked it 😳

Thanks once again!!!

Originally posted by: rutu83

awww this is so cute.. oh so wish this would be in the show actuallly...

Thank you!! I wish so too 😆