Shooting Stars: Zoya's day out Pg:25 OS:4 (1/1)

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aashiqua

@aashiqua

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

wow..dats awesome..ayaan put dat mmouse...i lov mona raabert duo..plz pm me

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Monsifa321

@Monsifa321

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

I know how much feedback means. I really loved the paragraph where the dogs, pigs, and cats were mentioned. That was creative and spot on Zoya. Also, I could see Asad doing all the things mentioned above. I like how you didn't stray far from the characters themselves. Finally, I loved the twist, it was a cherry on top. It turned out great, why judge yourself, have confidence in your work. If you have time please read mine as well.

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Riddhima

@Khushi_Dillse

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

beautiful post...Mrs.Zoya Asad Ahmad Khan...sound so gud...

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Gud work

I really enjoyed reading it

Sorry i am inactive thus a short comment

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GrilledCheese

@GrilledCheese

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

wowww...awesome!

loved it...really wish something like this would be seen on the show!

simply fabulous!

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princee

@princeegoyal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

well good one..write more where zoya actually say he is my husband..& asad enjoy this tashion...if u write thn pls pm me..

pari.

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A.Hajnal

@A.Hajnal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

OH that was awesome...loved it...!!! 😊

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xxDaydreameRxx

@xxDaydreameRxx

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

OMG this was awesome! Throroughly enjoyed Zoya giving a piece of her mind to Tanveer and the fact that Asad actually enjoyed every bit of it! Also hope the CVs are somehow inspired from you and Ayaan does end up helping Zoya bring out that cat's truth...speaking of which, its funny that Tanvir screamed because of a mouse - isn't it like her dinner? 😆

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Sanaa

@Sanaa629

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: cutiepreet
Loved it... I wish to see something like this in the show but done know when that wud happen if it wud ever..!!???

Thank you!! LOL.. me too!!! Hence I write fanfictions instead!! 😆

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Sanaa

@Sanaa629

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: webuser7
Loved the Raabert twist! Unexpected. I thought Tanveer was faking it! But it was Percy!

😆

Thank you!! For a moment.. I thought of deleting it because it didn't make sense.. but then I really wanted to show Zoya doing something.. even for fun😆