Shooting Stars: Zoya's day out Pg:25 OS:4 (1/1)

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

awesome os..really nice...😊

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shreya mehra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

super duper nice ji...

lovely TS

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iykyk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Hey! This was too good and sooo sweet. Loved it ❤️

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Livingfree

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Brilliant 👍🏼 Lovely read :)

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mrunal1987

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Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

wow!!! that was amazing...waiting to read many more os/ff/ss from you...:)

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psykoali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Zoya blinked. The world had stopped. The sun had risen from the west. Pigs were flying. Dogs were driving. Cats were.. what were cats doing? Oh, whatever they didn't usually do! Had Jahapana just called his room their room? Had he finally really acknowledged her as his wife?

👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
THIS LINE WAS EPIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Regina

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Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

I love percy... great story dea

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Andreea

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Excellent! Great work! 😆 The cat is scared of a mouse. Looking forward to the next update!

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Noe123

@Noe123

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#29

This was awesome 👏. Perfect! I want to see Zoya in full on lioness mode and see all the billi's of the world scurrying away. Oh..how wonderful it would be to see something like this in the show! I think Asad and Zoya reaching there (of course, with few detours in misunderstanding lane)

You named the mouse Percy 😆. Is it referring to HP? You could have named it Scabbers. Tanveer is a back-stabbing friend just like Pettigrew or worse.

Whole thing planed by Zoya was the best part! Jab ghee seedhi ungli se nahi nikalata, to ungli tedi karni ni padti hain.

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Srija C. Burman

@Madame_Noddy

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#30

This is just AWESOME!!!!! TOO GOOD!!!
The 'Percy' twist was Amazing!!! And i LOVED the way Zoya shut Tannu-the-chipku up and the way Asad supported her!!! SUPERB story!!!

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