Shooting Stars: Zoya's day out Pg:25 OS:4 (1/1) - Page 5

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mCj8RmMMlQM&feature=youtube_gdata_player

check out the title song of qubool hai

Originally posted by: ws12

Totally loved it!

Continue... continue

Thank you!! it's an OS so I can't continue.. but I can post more OSs..similar to this one...probably after wedding ones with Zoya being possessive and vice versa😆

Originally posted by: delena90

🤣 you named the rat PERCY??!!!??? 🤣

Oh god I love you!!! This was witty and hilarious!! You really need to write more often! 😃

LOL!! It's a good ratty name!! 😆

Originally posted by: AKlover101

Awesome OS girl! I would love to see something like this happen in the show... that'd be amazingg You should really write more.. I would love to read more of your work :))

Awhh. thank you!

I DO write.. I've written so much more..!!😆

Originally posted by: Curiousmind

Go Zoya!!! Claim your husband and tell Tanveer to keep her paws off your man. Loved the ending with Ayaan.

Thank you!!! Yeah.. it's high time she should tell Tanveer to BACK OFF her going to be husband..jeez!! I wouldn't let any best friend hog my fiancee like this!!

Originally posted by: Noe123

This was awesome 👏. Perfect! I want to see Zoya in full on lioness mode and see all the billi's of the world scurrying away. Oh..how wonderful it would be to see something like this in the show! I think Asad and Zoya reaching there (of course, with few detours in misunderstanding lane)

You named the mouse Percy 😆. Is it referring to HP? You could have named it Scabbers. Tanveer is a back-stabbing friend just like Pettigrew or worse.

Whole thing planed by Zoya was the best part! Jab ghee seedhi ungli se nahi nikalata, to ungli tedi karni ni padti hain.

Thank you!!! Regarding Percy.. not really a HP reference. The name just suited the rat.. 😆 And oh... old wormy and Percy..UGHHH Percy should have died instead of Fred! I wanna kill JK for killing Fred.. and Sirius..!!😡

Tanveer is a really good Pettigrew isn't she??

Originally posted by: Monsifa321

I know how much feedback means. I really loved the paragraph where the dogs, pigs, and cats were mentioned. That was creative and spot on Zoya. Also, I could see Asad doing all the things mentioned above. I like how you didn't stray far from the characters themselves. Finally, I loved the twist, it was a cherry on top. It turned out great, why judge yourself, have confidence in your work. If you have time please read mine as well.

Thanks soo much,,!! I dunnow why.. I just do judge myself..😆 Sure..I'll check your work out too😊.

Originally posted by: singhannu

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mCj8RmMMlQM&feature=youtube_gdata_player

check out the title song of qubool hai

It's not QH title song.. it's from another pakistani serial apparently😆

We've seen jealous Zoya but this feisty Zoya is one I've been dying to see! I loved how Tanveer was speechless when Zoya was yelling because she knows Zoya has power now as Mrs. Asad Ahmed Khan! Oh that man, he is tooo adorable! The way he was trying to please Zoya and his smirks AHHH<3 The Rabert addition was amazing haha! I LOVE THEIR PLANS. So unexpected and so amazing! Beautiful (:

Good one... loved rabert at the end