SS:Asad Ahmed Khan's Bachelor Party - Chap 5 pg 42

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Manchalateriore

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Posted: 12 years ago

#221

omg awesome update yaar continue soon

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shanzil5

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Posted: 12 years ago

#222

post it post it post ittt please

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Monica

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Posted: 12 years ago

#223

OMG OMG OMG OMG NO RES THIS TIME!

I can't just RES. TOO GOOD!

OMG ZOYA hahahahaha 🤣 I LOVE drunk Zoya!! She's hilarious! Aww and how she compliments him about cherishing Dilshad.

She trusts him so blindly. And you show that sooo well here. She even trusts him to get her favourite flavour of ice cream haha. Mr. Khan, more sugar for a already hyper Zoya? Very smart *shakes head*

Aww my poor baby Zoya. I feel so bad for her. But at least in the show they show that she loves him now and knows it. But I was always worried about he waits so long for his confession, that Zoya still thinks it's a nakli wedding. I'm so glad you touched on that.

I also loved how Zoya tried to get Asad to let go of Tanveer and his multiple pleas that she get off the couch hahaha. I was beaming along with her when he threatened to carry her to her room and was clapping when he actually did it.

I do wish he had confessed BUT I'm glad that it will be when she's not drunk haha. And UGH when his phone rang! But his words were sooo sweet! "in my family, in my life, in my heart" just tooo good!

Loved it! Hope this made up for the laaate Res reply from last time 😆

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niki_12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#224

Absolutely amazing!! I loved it!! I love Zoya drunk...please update!! Thanks for the pm!!

Also, I love your writing...please write more!!

niki

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LyssaPie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#225

hahaha this was hilarious, Zoya did let her inner feelings be known to Asad and aw she said she'll miss phuppi and i love how she jumped on the sofa and made sure that Asad left Tanveer's hand 🤣

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Linsie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#226

"You know, I think the thing that attracts me most is the way you love Phuphi. Yes, that's what it is. The fact that I know that if you ever have to choose between anyone and her, even me, you will always choose her. And that Mr. Khan is something I really respect about you!" Zoya finished off."

"Why doesn't anyone love me Mr. Khan!? Why does everyone always leave me and go!?" Zoya cried."

Best one!!!!!... so moved

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SANYA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#227

😆res it
unres
😆 hahaaa funny zoe😆
i cant explai how much luv drunk zoe😆
how cut she becomes under alchol😆
do continue it cant sto laughing😆😆
yu write very well👏

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Edited by QWEERRTTYYUUIIO - 12 years ago

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bindasss

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Posted: 12 years ago

#228

Wow! This update was just beyond awesome!! Absolutely loved it!! Especially the drunk Zoya part! Freaking hilarious! Lol please dont end it here! Atleast continue with one more part! :))))