SS:Asad Ahmed Khan's Bachelor Party - Chap 5 pg 42

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ASYAFOREVER95

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Posted: 12 years ago

#201

CAN U PLZ UPDATE...this story is sooo good i love it :P

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Linsie

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Homeslice

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Posted: 12 years ago

#203

This is AWESOME xD

Loved these lines from ch 3, I was rofl.🤣

Asad felt like his head was going to burst any second. Note to self: never ever ever spend time with both Zoya and Ayaan together. Both species must be handled with caution and one at a time. 🤣

OMG AWESOME!

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Nivriti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#204

Wow! Wonderful SS! :) I loved it. Drunk Zoya and her promises, adorable! Continue soon!

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Mahima

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Posted: 12 years ago

#205

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Aaniya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#206

Update plz...
You write awesome !

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xxDaydreameRxx

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Posted: 12 years ago

#207

Originally posted by: delena90
This is fast becoming one of my favourite short stories!

You are a good writer. Can't wait for the next update!

Oh that's one of the best compliments I can get 😳

Thank you so much :)

Originally posted by: LyssaPie
hahaha drunk Zoya is hilarious and omg her and Ayaan actually had an argument regarding Asda 🤣and before that Asad started shaking everyone's hand while Zoya was being introduced🤣

and awww she's making Asad promise things so cutely

Can't wait to read the next update

Ahaha! Glad you liked those parts... I really had fun writing them too but I honestly wish I could see something like this happen in the show. I mean, both Zoya and Ayaan fighting over Asad would be a really cute and hilarious scene

And ahah, well yes, Asad is quiet the possessive kind 😉

Originally posted by: Yellowdiamond
Waw! So exciting and entertaining! Enjoyed it to the max! Gosh! I can't wait fir next chapter! Hurry plz! Loved it tks!

Thank you so much!! I know it's been a while but I will be updating very soon now ;)

Originally posted by: teddyyy
Satisfied?! THIS IS MORE THAN AMAZING lol. I was having a bad day and you just made it 1000 times better! I love Maburt so much, it's not funny. And Asad stuck between their fights. Zoya drunk is possibly the cutest thing in the world! Their cute moments killed me. They are too damn adorable man. And he kissed her hand! "Faints" Her conditions were so pure hearted and cute that it made me fall in love with Zoya all over again. This was definitely worth the wait. You had me laughing my arse off every second. Especially when she put her finger on her mouth with a serious expression! Killed me- the visuals haha!

I loved it and can't wait for the next update (:

Teddyy you give the sweetest comments!! 🤗

Really your comment made MY day! 😃

Happy you are enjoying the drunk Zoya...I will probably be stretching it for the next chap too caz I honestly love writing her 😆

Thanks again and I am going to update the next chapter pretty soon..will await your feedback on it :)

Originally posted by: Grenade
Res
(I'm sorry..I'll be pretty late with this one..I've got these annoying admission tests to prepare for 😭)

Oh how much I hate reservers! 😆 But, it's okay, I understand...take your time Payalu! 🤗

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xxDaydreameRxx

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Posted: 12 years ago

#208

Originally posted by: aashiqua
hahaha drunk Zoya is hilarious
and omg her and Ayaan
awww she's making Asad
promise things so cutely
Can't wait to read the next
update

Thank you!! 😃 Happy you like the Ayaan-Zoya pair...I know we are all usually too stuck being scared of their possible love track thingy , but take that away and they make a wonderful pair 😉

Originally posted by: friendsall
wow wow wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! u write amazingly!!! read all 3 parts now!!!!!!!!!! 👏

Thank youuu!!! Happy your enjoying it so far :D

Originally posted by: amri123
hey
that was beyond amazing
drunk Zoya was absolutely entertaining😆
and definitely the cutest thing I've seen today

the part where she was chasing Ashraf for his orange juice just cracked me up🤣
and i can't believe that Ayaan and Zoya were fighting over Asad😆
and i see the relevance of Rishabh Sinha in this update😉

and the moments between Asad and Zoya were just too cute
and all the promises she wanted???
wow i think that takes the cake with the cute factor today😆
her demands are so innocent and pure hearted that Zoya is even more special in my eyes now
so great job
waiting to see what happens next
continue soon
and thanks for the PM😊

DId you know, I am a complete sucker for long-wale comments!? 😆

Thank you so much Amri!! 🤗

I'm glad you found this part enjoyable and entertaining and that my drunk Zoya was a HIT on this forum! 😆 Now if only Gul would also get inspired by this SS!

And ahah, yea glad you can see the relevance of Rishabh..he definitely has some uses 😆

Am going to update pretty soon and will await your feedback :)

Originally posted by: rutu83
🤣 i looove drunk zoya!
i know there were many good moments- but for some reason mine was when zoya was chasing ashfaq for the orange juice 😆

ah- wiping tears- this is an awesome ss 👍🏼

Ahaha...I think we all do..in fact I think we should all start a petition and mail it to the CVs, demanding a DRUNK ZOYA! 😃

LOL, glad you liked that part 😉 and thank you so much!! :D

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xxDaydreameRxx

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Posted: 12 years ago

#209

Originally posted by: fanraya
Omg such a cute story, really love this drunk zoya, please update soon, can't wait for the next update

Awww, thank you so much! :D

Will try updating soon :)

Originally posted by: AKlover101
Ooo thiss update was aweeesomee! I loved it! The drunk Zoya was the best... it was absolutely hilarious! Pleasee do continue soon and thanks sooo much for the pm girl :))

Glad you enjoyed it Fizza!! 😃 YOU ARE AWESOME! 😉

Originally posted by: salekh1
Thank you soo much for the PM
This was by far the best update
I loved it
Thank you
Please do continue and please pM me😛😛😛

No problem!

And thank you! Really happy you guys liked this update 😃

Originally posted by: Linsie
continue... continue... continue... continue... continue... continue... continue... continue... continue...

I will...soon 😃

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xxDaydreameRxx

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Posted: 12 years ago

#210

Originally posted by: ABBY92
Drunk Zoya is super cute and funny. The promises she made Asad make were so adorable and I hope Asad confesses his feelings to her in the next chapter !!

Ahah...glad you enjoy drunk Zoya and her promises 😉

Confession? We'll see 😉

Originally posted by: Prizi
Drunk zoya was super cute nd hillarious

LOL, glad you enjoyed it :D

Originally posted by: malini1996
that was one awesome update
i totally enjoyes throughly
u really rocked
p.s i lovw the asya part

Thank you soo much Malini! 😃

Glad you liked the AsYa bits 😳😉

Originally posted by: niki_12
Amazing!! This is one of my most favorite ss's! Please continue soon!!

Awww! Thank you so much!! 😳 And yea, I will continue soon for sure :)

Originally posted by: neenabinu
loved the drunk Zoya...

Happy you liked it! 😃

Originally posted by: mochhug
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unres

This was AMAZING! From Asad's jealousy to Ayaan's childish antics when Zoya was drunk. And OMG DRUNK ZOYA is HILARIOUS! I LOVE her! 🤣

But by faaar my favourite part was the ending... when she's making him promise these ridiculous (ok they aren't really ridiculous since we know the truth, but from Asad's point of view). AND how he grabs her by the waist and pulls her close... AHHH!

But ultimately favourite part is the last line: Where she says that he's only HER'S AND says his name

Sorry for the late unres! Wanted to read it and comment immidiately after to waited for a good opportunity 😛

Not fair man! You always res and then I always have to wait desperately! 😆

But well, your feedback always makes it worth the wait :D

I'm so happy all of you guys enjoyed drunk Zoya! I honestly wish they would show it in the show and we could have a Bhaang Pakode Part 2, but only with Zoya drunk this time so at least one person remembers what happens the next morning 😆

Happy you liked those promises - quiet honestly, with that Tannu getting on her nerves all the time, aur kya karti bechari? 😉

Finally someone mentions the last line! 😆 Well I'm happy you liked it and thanks again for this comment that I loved to read! 🤗