I need a few minutes to compose myself after the amazing ness of this chapter. My sister was listening to the song and then when Zoya began singing I did a double take LOL. Asad made me soo happy! He knows his limits and it was so cute of him reprimanding himself as he wanted to kiss her! Drunken Zoya is the best. I repeat- she is the best! Singing in the parking lot, being her awesome self and teaching her Mr. Khan manners, bluntly asking for compliments. How much more can I possibly love this girl? Oh wait I know I can! THE BICEP PART HAHA. She wanted a compliment but gave him some instead! And yes his six packs are definitely a plus. It was perfect of you to include how she understands relationships and him- just perfect! She fan girls over ice cream like I fangirl over them haha.
Okey onto the more serious part. The way she let loose her emotions and the whole part about wanting bad stuff to happen so be would care pulled at my heart. You portrayed it so beautifully!
Again, this girl manages to smile after everything. Loving her lool. Hayee well if Asad told me I was perfect, I'd prolly faint.
Lmao is all I can say for what happened at home. Ignoring Tanveer, Dilshaads reactions, TIK TIK ONE- etc, and the Great Musibat. And then when he picked her up- awww!
Okey I loved this line: Sleep was a very magical thing... It made even the most devilish of creatures seem angelic.
Wow itna lamba comment. IF YOU DON'T GIVE US ANOTHER CHAPTER I WILL CRY. "Imitates Zoya wiping her tears after Dilshaad went go bed" :P Please <3
Your writing is amaaazing!
Edited by teddyyy - 12 years ago
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